Ivor Slipper
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Glad Nicky decided to open up about himself to Billy.
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Never heard that before BA, but it is indeed apt as well as being very true. Thanks, glad you enjoyed.
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Thanks for the comment Glennish. Mike & Kyle are indeed a worry while they are still out somewhere. As for the GSA, lets hope the boys get some support.
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FanLit - they're gonna give it a damn good try for sure!
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Geron - I think it came in with the Tide. But I'm glad it was strong enough for you to stand on. I'm sure the scumbags are going to be tracked down before too long. In the meantime Troy & Adam can work on getting their relationship back to where it was.
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Totally agree with your rant. I fail to see that there was anything wrong with the original title.
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Thanks Sweetlion.
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So it seems Wesley. I wasn't aware until I checked my facts. As one of them said, let's just call it GSA.....
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Thanks mfa, glad you liked. Yep, most problems can be cut down to something smaller if there's a will to find an answer.
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I think Adam would do anything for Troy and no doubt Troy would do the same for him.
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Thanks - totally agree tinytoes
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Thanks Canuk - and no cliffie this time Your comment sums up the relationship perfectly
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I heard Troy speak. “Have you heard from Mr Richards today?” Mr C nodded. “So, what’s the news? What have they been charged with?” ---------------------------- Mr C took a deep breath before speaking and I got the distinct feeling what he was going to say wouldn’t be the news we’d been expecting to hear. “I’m sorry to say Troy that they’ve not been charged.” “How come? I thought Brian and Tyler had told the cops it was all Mike & Kyle's idea.” “You’re r
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At least you're not on your own on that ledge BA And as you seem to have landed there later than most, you won't have too long to wait before the coastguard arrives!
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Fragment Six: Breeding
Ivor Slipper commented on ColumbusGuy's story chapter in Fragment Six: Breeding
Ah, a cliffhanger! They seem to be getting very popular. I was going to say 'popular around here', but this is different being lunar....... Am also guessing that as a lunar day is equivalent to two earth weeks you're going to tell u that we'll only have to wait a few days for the next instalment. -
Nope - I definitely like playing bare bear
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I'm thinking Geron has a 'thing' about animals As others have said before me - a very sweet story of young love.
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I didn't get that either Geron :-)
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What's 'Eastenders'? As usual you make some valid points. I don't think one can tag other than 'Europe' but I'm not positive about that. The main reason though is not to have more than one serial running at the same time.
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Ah, a cliffhanger! Canuk likes those
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You could be right. Others have suggested that Mr C should have been more active after the first attack, but the boys didn't want him to. Now he knows the full extent of what happened to Troy I think he is ready to go hunting - but legally.
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I have thought about it, but I reckon one serial running is sufficient. Plus which that is a very British story set way back in time (60s) and thus I doubt if it would be very well received here. But, once 'Unbeaten' has run its course then it's a possibility.
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Hi there P! Glad to know you're enjoying the story. Comments are always appreciated. I think A&T are pretty tight, but who knows.....
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Yeah, I reckon I got fooled. Every other time the preview has looked how it should appear, so when this time it didn't look right I made all the corrections You're right about Adam - with Troy he has become a different person, externally and internally. His confidence has grown, although I'm sure he wouldn't have risked playing around with Troy in the car had Troy not already shown him that he was feeling good enough to play games again
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My apologies for how this chapter appears on screen. When I pasted it and checked the results it showed no line spacing so I went through and inserted them in preview. The result would appear to be double spacing! I'll also take the opportunity to say 'thanks' to all who are reading this story; 'many thanks' to those who have indicated they like some or all of the chapters thus far; and 'special thanks' to everyone who has taken the time to comment.
