Ivor Slipper
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A Partridge in a Pear Tree
Ivor Slipper commented on Valkyrie's story chapter in A Partridge in a Pear Tree
Luckily I don't know the hippopotamus song, and based on what has been said about it, I'll decline the invitation to find out what I have missed! While it isn't Christmassy, 'How much is that doggy in the window' is plenty sufficient earworm for me. 😁 A very neatly crafted and enjoyable story. Great start to the twelve. -
You may be heading in the right direction, but then again you may not...
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A powerful story. Made even more realistic by recent events. One can only hope that type of legislation will be introduced, although in reality it is a very faint hope. Luckily I live in a country that, following the only occasion such things happened, took drastic action to prevent a recurrence.
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Thank you for all your comments. Pleased that you discovered and enjoyed it. I often find it hard to decide when to end a story and leave my characters, but with this one the appropriate point seemed to be with the first time they made real love on Wayne's sacred land.
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You can't always have what you want! 😀 (especially if you're no writing the story 🙂)
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Very true, but unlawfully acquired evidence can be a tricky area.
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Definitely a coded message from Wayne's father. What they are planning needs care - and luck.
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Hopefully they will decide to do so.
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I suspect Ethan's dad has the ability needed.
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That sums things up nicely as far as the boys are concerned. I suspect your hopes will be realised.
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Currently it does seem like two steps forward and one step back.
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You will have to read on to see if your hopes are realised.
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Isn't the saying something like 'Mums always know'.
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Appreciate your comment. Happy I'm able to introduce you to things you were unaaware of.
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I sure hope you do.
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Opted for the 'Ha Ha' icon rather than the 'Love', but there are times more than one is needed. Pleased to know I managed to smack your gob CG 😁
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It was a tough read and I can only imagine how tough it was to write. One's characters do take on a life so it is hard to have such things happen to them.
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Published, Unpublished and now, finally visible. Glad I found it in the end.
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Thanks, Geron. Indeed, where does fact end and fiction begin? It would seem Ben may be about to find the answer to that question on Friday night.
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Pleased to hear that you've stuck with it, James. Yes, their intimate relations do face serious difficulties because of what happened to Troy. How they work those out will become a significant part of the story.
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Adam has spent a large part of his life being made to think he is not a good person. As he sees it his presence is causing problems for Troy, so the solution is for him to leave - as he intended before. He really hasn't thought over much about how he will survive.
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I understand your problem and can only suggest that you try skipping over them. It is basically a gay teen relationship story in which the main characters are faced with various unexpected problems. Their sexual orientation is the cause of most of those and they draw more and more together as a result.
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Thanks for the comments @quttzik. Glad to know you enjoyed the story. I think it is best to leave the reader to decide if Ben really did foresee the future while has was in a coma.
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I don't think George has written that story - yet!
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Thanks, Gary. A case of whether truth is stranger than fiction - perhaps... It was fun to write, so glad you enjoyed.
