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Look man. I'm not trying to flame you, nor getting into a debate about the finer parts of the English language when it comes to definitions of words, and sections of a "Stories'" front page on the GA site. This was discussed privately among us Author's, and I know you were a participant cause we disagreed there as well. Your opinion on Reviews, and how they are supposed to be used, was also rejected there too. Feedback (I'll use that word instead of comment) from a Reader, regardless if it's posted as a Comment or a Review is always acceptable. The Review section is working as intended by the Admin of the GA site, who wants GA to be inclusive of all readers, and writers. Comments on a Story's Front Page are the only form of a Top-Level, aka not a Chapter Comment, for Readers to talk about the Story, directly on the story. It is not always used. Reviews, are for Completed Stories, for Feedback from a reader. "I liked it," is perfectly acceptable. As the person, who is the current Leader of posting Story Reviews, I'm really starting to take it personally. Feedback is subjective, and is in the eye of the Reader. Imposing guidelines, or saying "That is not appropriate" is elitism. https://www.gayauthors.org/topmembers/

See my post above. This is your OPINION only, and not what the site states.

This is something that we Authors have discussed in our private forum, and I do believe that the agreement was that ANY comment left by a Reader was acceptable. It was also stated that Gay Authors WAS NOT going to impose Guidelines on what readers left as Reviews or Comments. Frankly Will, this stinks of elitism.

Thanks for reading, Agent D! And thanks for the compliment. tim helped me in getting this finished.

Thanks for reading, jp. I am happy you liked it. I was concerned about the politics. I'm hoping I didn't offend anyone with it. Yes, they can be real scary.

we already have it with Fake News.... *coughs* Sorry...

Thanks Moggie for reading the story. There could be another story, but I'm not really sure. Kinda feel like I need to do a "Heaven's Redemption" as a companion piece, but not so sure. Yet.

Thank you for reading! Yes, Eddie wasn't a nice person, at all. The prompt left a lot of room for interpretation, and this story idea came to me fairly quickly. Though this is the fourth draft of it. The three previous ones, were all darker, and a lot more political.

Thank you for reading! I'm glad you liked the twist, and I actually was worried it would not come across.

Thank you, Mac. The Tenses are a weakness of mine, and I didn't notice till you just pointed out in this one. I have to give credit to tim. He said twist needed a little bit of fleshing out about what happened to Eddie, and making him the Incubus' plaything just popped into my head.

Thank you tim. Both for reading, and the help you gave.

Thank you for reading Solus. It's one of the darker stories I've written.

Thank you for reading! The twist was one I've seen before, and enjoyed. Sometimes the bad guy wins.

Nice serial killer action. Reminded me a little of Jason. Excellent.

Really good and scary! Awesome story.

Some secrets, one should keep till they are in the grave. Eddie Olsen, a 29-year-old single man, and Manager of a local Starbucks finds out why in a terrifying fashion, one Halloween Night.

I'm not an Admin. From my experience, GA is about inclusion, and not exclusion. I can say that the Story System has Tags, and Gay, Bisexual, Lesbian, and Transgendered each have a tag. The majority of stories on the site are Gay Male in nature, and according to the Tags it shows: Gay - 1,706 stories tagged Bisexual - 155 Lesbian - 62 Transgender - 29 Granted it's up to Authors to tag a story, when it's being setup, and not everyone tags them as GLBT.

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Love the Halo novels, movies, and the soundtracks. I've watched all of the cut-scenes on YouTube as well. However, I can never play the game. FPS games make me sick.

Mabinogi was the one I spent the most money on, and not always for myself. Star Wars: The Old Republic I maintained a subscription, and bought more Cartel Coins than I care to admit. Loved the game, and the storyline on it. Currently I've played more F2P MMO's than I care to admit too. lol. Though Star Trek Online has my attention now. Been grinding Dillithium Ore, to convert to Zen, in order to buy the Cash Shop items. End Game sucks with T-5 ships, and mismatch gear.

I'm planning a very steamy scene soon. Thanks for reading.

It's a sad tale, that has a happy ending. I love cats, and stories about cats. This was well written, and had a great twist.

That's sorta fixed now. They got the door sizes right, but some things are kind of unrealistic. Huge transporter pads now, and scale of Interior for the ships vrs exterior is off. It does have a good storyline, and is sanctioned by CBS/Paramount, so a couple of good things.

Act 3 - Part 2 will have a lot in it. Some personal, but most will be ship based.

Nice... I also have MagiTech in later chapters.