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Chapter 4 is out. Adam mentions in the chapter that the Lightning do Ice Projections during the playoffs. Here are two from YouTube:

Thanks for reading, Tonyr. Chapter 5 is in the works now.

Thanks for reading, Bft. There's something going on with the Grandparents. So, it's very possible they already have one.

Thanks for reading, mfa607! I'm a Tampa Native, so there's going to be a lot in this story. I'm glad you're enjoying the story.

Thanks for reading, Mitchelll! I'm glad you are enjoying the story.

Thank you, Daddydavek. Yeah, playoff Hockey is affecting me a just a little. LOL. It's not really a hockey story, but hockey was a good vehicle for some Father/Son bonding.

Thanks for reading Zeke for the comment, and feedback!

Thanks for reading, Xander. From the scope of the story, there could be a massive mess up, and the Bolts won't make the playoffs, like Stamkos, Hedman, Kuch all getting injured at the same time. Of course, I'm not going to do that. LOL. I added the Waffle House to Boston, because I like them, and needed a good greasy spoon place that is familiar. I know in the Real World, the closest is Pennsylvania. That's on the list of lawsuits that Adam will be doing. Along with yet another police report. Hiring a P.I. maybe. In both High School and college, I took some Law Courses, family law, and criminal law, and was a member of the 13th Judicial Circuit's Teen Court program. We trialed actual Juvenile case, in a "Pre-Trial" intervention program. I was the State's Attorney for my HS. I won every case. LOL. Granted they had to plead guilty, and we only did sentencing, but I had a good record. LOL. Haven't been to the Law Library since those classes. Love Hamberger Mary's. Haven't decided where the Brewpub will be. I might take a real-world one, and say, "Yup, they built that, and it's new, not 5 years old." I can't spoil everything. Which team? ... I'm actually hoping that the Leafs beat Boston. I like our odds vrs Toronto over the Bruins.

Thanks for reading, Potterslashfan. Yes, Adam shutting down the phone, was the right call. As one of my Beta Readers pointed out, "Adam needs to be squeaky clean. Can you imagine if the grandparents hired a P.I. to follow him?" Yes, we'll see the other teen soon.

Thank you, Dahawk. Things will get better for Rob. He's had a very tough couple of months, he needed some positives. I'm glad you liked the chapter.

Thanks, Glennish. Honesty is the best policy, especially in the first stages of the bonding. I mentioned it a couple of comments up, but Michelle's family, their beef is with Adam, and they are trying to hurt him through Rob. Sadly, in their minds, Rob doesn't exist anymore. For now, who knows what the future might hold. Yes, the thought of suicide was bit subtle, and I was hoping I wasn't pushing it. Rob will bring it up in therapy. It scared the hell out of him. With the timeframe, the story is in, just a month or so ago, the 4 regular season games of the B's and the Bolts, are gonna be a showdown. LOL. But, yes, the NHL 2018 Round 2 Playoffs are gonna test the relationship. LOL.

Thanks, Sweetlion. There's some stuff coming soon, that will involve the inside of a courtroom.

Thank you for reading, and for the feedback, centexhairysub. Michelle's family their collective issue is two-fold. Adam, and Michelle's will. They are trying to hurt Adam, by using Rob. Michelle and Rob were middle-class, so there is some money involved. More so after the sale of the house, and other stuff, happens. For the child support... from my basic, really basic, understanding of Massachusetts Family law, the grandparents initiated the proceedings when they demanded a paternity test to confirm Adam was the father. Under the law, Michelle was not married when Rob was born and didn't list a father on the birth certificate, which is legal in MA. Once the father was determined by a paternity test, the birth certificate is amended, and the state seeks child support automatically. I'm not a lawyer, so that is what I got off of researching MA Law, and a couple of different paternity lawyers for MA. Chapter 5 is in the works now, so I hope you return to read it when it gets posted.

Thanks for reading, JayT. True they did sign away their rights, but they are using an old felony case against Adam. So they are hoping that it might trigger something.

Thanks for reading Wesley. Yeah, Michelle's family are definitely on the "not nice" side of the spectrum.

Thanks for reading, Chris! Yes, the maternal grandparents are very "misguided." I'll use that term. I do believe the Law is on the side of the guys. At least in my reading of FL statutes and case law.

Thank you, tim. I truly appreciate all the support and help you've given me.

Adam was the first to wake up and was in the kitchen brewing up a pot of coffee when Robert walked out. The weather forecast was for a sunny Thursday, March 8, 2018. “Good morning, sleepyhead. What do you say about us going out for breakfast?” Adam poured himself and Robert each a cup. He passed Robert his and leaned against the counter. “Sounds good, Dad,” Robert added cream and sugar to his coffee and sat down at the island bar. “Do we have anything planned for today?” “I have my m

I'm currently reading Jim Butcher's Dresden Files. So far the first six books are fantastic.

They were all fantastic tim! They all spoke to me, but the first two I wanted to comment on. 4/15: It does remind me of a chant. I like how you used it to explain what the style was. I'm almost tempted to try my non-poetic-self's hand at doing one. 4/16: That is a friend, that we have in common. I love how you show the faith you have in Mike in it as well.

Thank you, Bft for reading and for the feedback. Currently working on chapter 4 of the story, and it's almost completed and ready for editing. As for biscuits and gravy, there is nothing better than a good old fashion Southern Breakfast. Now, to get the full breakfast one must have, Biscuits and Gravy, Fried Chicken, Two Eggs, and Hashbrowns.

A lover's passion is what I get from this poem. Fantastic tim.

Thanks for the suggestions. I'll look into them.

Football has been the dominant sport, followed by Baseball in Florida for as long as I've been here. But Lacrosse is an official FL School Sport, where Hockey is sanctioned, but it's in a different authority program. I love how the Lightning took over the governorship of the High School league that was here, and the FL Panthers took over the one in Miami-Dade. It's slowly becoming a Hockey state. One thing to point out. Yeah, I have a lot of Hockey stuff in the story, but It's not really a story about Hockey. Just the Playoffs are influencing the story. LOL

Another Sneak Peek of chapter 4. It continues from where I left off from above. It's Adam's response. Again, not edited, and Raw, so it is not in it's final version.