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  1. Brayon
    Thanks, man.
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    I couldn't be doing this without you man. You've given me some great advice and feedback. Thank you!
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    Thanks for reading, Sweetlion. So, are you in my head, or do you have a link to my notes? ROFLMAO!!!!!
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    I see your concern, Reader. LOL. Honestly, I don't think Tibs would have anything to do with them. But who knows... Muhahahahaha
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    Thanks for reading Tonyr. I'm completing another story right now, which is part of Cia's latest newsletter game, but chapter 4 will be started right after I'm done with it.
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    Thanks, glennish. I'm comfortable saying that Adam and Rob are both are at the level of trust to be open with each other. Rob's main thing is he was in the closet from his family, and now he has a father figure that accepts him for being gay and is also gay. Adam is drawing on his experience with his parents. Otherwise, he is lost in what he is doing. He's actually glad that Duncan will be around to help out. The project thing is just what Adam is thinking right now. He feeling overwhelmed because of what's going on with Rob. That will be explored more in the next chapter. I like how you say Lightning vs. Bruins in the second round. That's in my bracket as well. It will be a tense round two. A lot of alcohol will be involved.
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    Thanks for reading, and for the feedback, Reader. Yup, it was the maternal grandparents, who petitioned the state to do a paternity test, that delayed Robert going to Tampa, and then along with the state, are suing for the back payments to the estate. There is actually precedence in that. There was a period of time when my parents were separated, but not divorced, and dad was giving money to mom for child support. They got back together, he stopped paying. The state of FL tried to get back support for my mom, even though they were together. Took a court order to remove it from the system.
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    Thank you for reading, tinytoes. That's true. He does have a nephew who is not prejudiced against him. I became aware of Sexual Assault Awareness day, after the fact, but I do agree with you that there is a lot of help out there. Also, counselors are being trained to understand, men can be assaulted too.
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    Thanks for reading, RoyKing. Next chapter is in the works.
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    Thanks, mayday. That's actually one of my tricks when writing. I go back and reread chapters, well more like skim them, as I write to make sure I'm being consistent. I'm glad you are enjoying the story.
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    Thank you, Chris. I'm glad you are enjoying it.
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    Thanks, Dahawk. Seems a lot of people don't trust Tibs. I can tell you, one thing, and I apologize, I'm not sure I made it clear in the last chapter. Tibot found out that Adam had a son from the email Adam sent at the end of the last chapter. His reply was "Call me." However, you've given me something to think about.
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    Thanks for reading, Job. I'm happy you like the story.
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    Thanks for reading, Daddydavek. Yeah, Adam is not thrilled about it, but he does love his brother.
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    Thank you very much, for reading and for the comment. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter.
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    Chapter 3 has been posted. The sneak peeks from earlier, was in the chapter, but was edited. On the subject of names. Adam's brother's name is Tibot. The Baby Name list I download, had it spelled Tibot, with the explanation of, "Biblical Name, and also a name of a book in some Bibles. Tibot was the Father of Tobias." With Adam's parents being religious (haven't shown that yet), they named their first born son Adam and their second one Tibot as it was an unusual name. It also led to the nickname of Tibs for him as well (also not seen yet). During the writing process, I had switched it up some, and for half the chapter was calling him Tobit. Tobit is the actual name in the Bible.
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    Yup. The baby name list I used had the wrong spelling. Sorry for the confusion. Thanks for reading, centexhairysub. That scourge of drugs touched my family as well and is what heavily influenced this chapter. The CDC stats on the hardships for Gay youths in the system, and on the streets, is heartbreaking. According to the CDC study from 2016, there was over 1 million homeless youth in the USA, and over 50% of them are LGBT. They are preyed upon everywhere. It's heartbreaking.
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    Ugh... the baby name list I used had it as Tibot... Sorry for the confusion. I like the Tibot spelling, and it fits the nickname I gave him of Tibs... Which will be seen in later chapters. Leason learned... double check sources.
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    Thanks for reading, Wesley. My bad on the name mix up, correct spelling is Tibot. It's a Biblical name and also the name of a Book in the Bible. Well, some versions of the bible. Tibot was the father of Tobias, in that book.
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    Thanks for reading, jp. Yeah, I goofed on the name. Should be fixed now. Tibot is the correct version. Won't lie, Adan is suspect as well. He's had years of mistrust, but you never know.
  21. Brayon
    It's Tibot. It's a rare Biblical name, and also the name of a book in the bible. The Smith Parents wanted to keep a theme going. But, I just noticed I did a switch up when you mentioned this. Thanks. I'll get it corrected.
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    “Call me.” Those two simple words sent a chill down Adam’s spine. After staring at the open email, he glanced at the now empty bottle of whiskey. “I’m not drunk enough to call him yet.” Adam stood up and walked across the house. He tossed the empty bottle into the recycle bin. The sound of the glass bottles, as they clinked on each other, was deafening in the still silent air of the pantry. He walked over to the wine closet and took out a bottle of wine. Popping the cork and grabbing a w
  23. Brayon
    Managed to get a 1000+ word scene written. Re-read it this morning, and I'm needing to add some details to it. But it has been a very fun experience.
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    Thank you for reading, Dahawk. I'm glad you liked the story.
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    A Song for Moggy

    Brayon commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in A Song for Moggy

    I think it's a beautiful tribute, tim. Thank you for writing it.
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