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  1. FormerMember4

    Chapter 1

    This left me smiling. I love the story name. A much more upbeat story over last. Great job!
  2. FormerMember4

    Sins

    Wow! Is Riley going to get closure, or just a whole lot of guilt? Talk about really bad timing. I don’t know why, but I still don’t trust Trey and his motives. The eye removal was hilarious... Aaron was sick, and Tak thought it was the coolest thing. I’m sure he’s seen worse on the streets.
  3. This is great. Being blind, I hate pulling out wallet. That’s why I love paying with Apple Pay. I wonder if it will accommodate Real ID. A Real ID is also given at DMV, but given through government to enter federal buildings.
  4. FormerMember4

    Chapter 1

    Some mystery with ending. Look forward to more.
  5. I came back for one more peak. It was so hot my jelly donut started leaking. Enjoying my coffee with a double shot of Ember. MMM
  6. FormerMember4

    Chapter 16

    Kyle, Mike, and sperm donor are in a heap of shit. Mike will have additional charges if he knowingly infected Kyle.
  7. FormerMember4

    ATGB VI

    Great job papi! I dedicate this comment to Harley. He has always had CJ’s back. The fact that Pulse made him think of gay brothers... a little extra Harley love. His silence and bashfulness on Kim is sweet. This chapter made me hungry. I went to the Lady and sons a few years ago. It was crazy how many people were there and waiting.
  8. The sparks have flown. That last scene was hot. Not only do we believe in cliffy torture, but now we’re stopping with scenes that give blue balls until Friday. 😉
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    Battle Scars

    Riley was worried about his adjustment after rehab. The more he talks to Carter and mom, the lighter his burdens. He can freely tell his parents that he loves them. They have never given up on him. That’s huge for someone who trusted nobody. The talk with father is the final closure of Cy Walker.
  10. FormerMember4

    Weird

    I often feel this. I can totally relate. Good job!
  11. FormerMember4

    Chapter 6

    The lives of Kyle and Buddy couldn’t be anymore different. The positive self worth shows when you have a supportive parent. I hope Kyle listens to his mother soon. Buddy needs positive influence and inspiration. Melissa better be afraid... You don’t need Mr. C, Mrs. Caldwell has that girls number. Don’t give me that but mommy shit....
  12. FormerMember4

    Chapter 1

    Poor Stuart. You can’t help someone not willing to help themselves. Cyril won’t see a therapist, or police. It’s his choice to go back. Hopefully he sees the affect Fred has had on his mental being, before it’s too late. That would leave Stuart with unfair guilt.
  13. An accidental clarity. It is human nature to question... Why did I not travel? Why did I not engage that relationship? I think at some point it will all catch up to reflect. Well done.
  14. Life’s decisions can be just as important as the air you breathe. That often starts with taking an honest look at yourself. Northie has written an honest portrayal of someone who is lying to himself, which leads to lying to everyone else. Well worth a read!
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    The Story

    Wow! So many thoughts and emotions. Not being true to yourself can hurt more than just yourself. Twelve years in a loveless marriage is just awful... can’t even imagine. The deceit is like an infected wound, growing angrier. Kath was not a pleasant woman either. I’m willing to say some has to do with state of marriage, but damn is she a B. They are much better apart. Great job Northie!
  16. There are some really good entries this year. I look forward to reading the last four.
  17. It’s not always easy to identify ourselves... it takes time and maturity to love and accept who we are. Val has written a thoughtful piece of someone figuring themselves out. An anthology well worth the read.
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    Ace

    This was an interesting choice. Well written and thoughtful. I hate labels, but labels can describe someone’s characteristics to a degree. While important to be an individual, human nature leads us to not want to be isolated or different. Well done Val!
  19. Princes and dragons... sign me up! I’m a sucker for a good fantasy story... Tim delivers. An enjoyable read. Make sure to let Tim know that Terryn has more story to tell. 😉
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    Now or Never

    I love fantasy and Dragons. While the beginning shows an uncertain future for Terryn, the end shows a glimmer of a hopeful one. Well done Tim!
  21. Touch is an introspective story on lost relationships. Where did it go wrong? How did I contribute? How do I move forward? A sweet story of loss, beginnings and forgiveness. Well worth a read!!
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    Touch

    Cassie, this was fantastic. A well written and reflective piece. It takes two to tango. Relationships are learning experiences. A wonderful ending.
  23. Jay has written a sweet and thoughtful anthology. Trevor closes himself off after his last relationship leaves him burned. A chance encounter on a cruise leads to some sparks. Is it destined to be a one night roll in the hay, or is there more? A very enjoyable read!
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    Chapter 1

    Well done Jay! Be open and don’t close yourself to possibilities. Your rotten relationships aren’t indicative of future ones.
  25. These are all things I think of often. As tim stated; it’s a ME mentality. When growing up you knew your neighbors. I know one where we live. Kids want to be YouTube, Snapchat or whatever the hell social famous. Politicians want their next sound bite. Overall, more people contribute to our problems. Rather than solving them. We have homelessness, sex trafficking, antibiotics that no longer work. Along with a myriad of issues. We need compassion, empathy, the ability to listen and contribute meaningful dialogue. Otherwise; we have no promising future.
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