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This is like a page stolen from my single days in NYC. OMG!

I agree! I can handle how @Carlos Hazday does chapter name and number. There is nothing worse than seeing chapter 20, ok... Which dang story does that belong to?

Seems like James carries a lot of baggage. I wonder what he ran from.

Very sad. Thomas threw himself into work and lost a personal life. No life without balance.

Thomas would put me to sleep. Meeting Daniel, What a coinky dink.

Great chapter. I like the slightly off color remarks. Not offensive, but tongue in cheek.

Good choice! This puts me in Pride mood.

Good writing and engaging introduction. You grabbed me with story description. It had a “Tales of the City” feel. Look forward to more.

Beautiful Parker. Sending you major hugs. Cleaning out my mothers house was one of the hardest things. Your memories will carry you on. 🤗

I have a similar approach. Use something that stands out, or encompasses the feeling. Like the time I remarked (It was the slap heard around the world). You said you almost used it. I think a chapter title should grab like the story title. It’s just as important.

There’s one good thing... You know karma exists when Donnie is forced to drive an advertisement for a car. 😄

Good to hear my friend. Hope all is well. Look forward to it.

Can we send Melissa off? Preferably to a boot camp. Girl needs a steel toed boot up the backside. I’m glad that Buddy will be ok. Andre has that boys back like no other. I feel that he is more than in love with Buddy. Just little nuances. I don’t know how I feel about Donnie. He could use a friend it seems. He feels out of place as well. Yet, he passed judgement on Buddy without knowing his situation. I also don’t like gossips. He seems to be one.

Very well done A. Their future has possibility. A stronger family bond from what they had to endure. Hopefully the grandparents do more than a country club jail.

It amazes me how well formed these characters are. Eli is a completely different person from Velocity. Mature, wise and not afraid to live anymore. He will also change the world in his own way. Nancy is the drill sargeant cracking the whip. She’s fiercely loving, but this woman has been around the block. She’s three steps ahead of Riley. Wealthy families deal with all types. She would have good judgement with a sense of someone trying to get over. Carter having a breakdown was great. He will always be there for Riley. Yet, he is human with insecurities. Riley sees that this is a partnership. He needs to take care of Carter as well. Trey just might turn out to be good after all. People freak when I have an anxiety attack. It takes a special person to take control. PTSD would be even harder. He didn’t flinch.

I can confirm that it avoided that.

Yes Sir... That about sums it up. ☺️

There’s been like 3 stories from Denver over the past month. Stupid people stunts. We have our fair share here. I totally agree with your assessment Sir. Hope you’re enjoying the weekend.

That last statement can be interpreted sooo many ways! 😉

It amazes me sometimes how clueless people can be... the utterly ridiculous and stupid things people do. We’ve had America’s Funniest Videos, Stupidest Criminals, and people giving their kids a hit on a joint on YouTube. I came across this special guy this morning. An FBI agent in Denver accidentally shot someone in a club... How?? Good question! Dumbass did a backflip and gun fell out of holster. *SMH* . I thought we could amuse ourselves with the ridiculous and moronic. Please share your favorite moments. Link to story: https://www-m.cnn.com/2018/06/03/us/dancing-fbi-agent-gun-discharge/index.html

I saw this awhile ago. Thought I was just spastic and screen reader hated me. ☺️

Congrats to you and D renee. Get some rest before... Then I hope your house bursts with joy, love and laughter. 🤗❤️

Mine came about an hour ago.

People get the wrong idea if you frequent parking lots.

Always happy to offer my services. No charge. LOL!