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chris191070

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  1. Who me, I'm just a sweet 😋 and innocent reader.
  2. He will see Alexander's eyes as Brad is fucking him hard
  3. A gang bang the night before the wedding
  4. chris191070

    Chapter 19

    Things are about to become interesting for Ezra and others, there are many factors to go right or wrong.
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    Chapter 24

    Interesting chapter. Jeisa and Leo arguing , upsets Devin. Devin seems to have accepted Jeisa, but Leo still wants to argue/ignore him. He's behaving like a stroppy teenager at anything Jeisa suggests.
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    Chapter 19

    Worry, if it I shot it correctly and if it's hit the correct target.
  7. A bit like Desmond was treated.
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    Chapter 19

    I'm worried for Ezra, yes Enrico is showing some sort of love towards him. But will he make the ultimate sacrifice and have him killed, because he is a liability. I'm worried that the endgame is to either steal the sub, by some means of killing the crew or by blowing it up.
  9. chris191070

    Prologue

    Awesome start to the story.
  10. chris191070

    Chapter 6

    I'm not sure about Colt, is he just treating Joel nice whilst around his parents. I like the twins.
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    Chapter 28

    Mike and Jim seem to be falling for each other. Plenty more for Jim to learn yet.
  12. Looks like a buffet for Lynn, plenty of hot guys. Some to play with and others off limits.
  13. I can't see Elion remaining pure, when in a tent with Holden, practicing there powers.
  14. I had the same issue 😕
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    Chapter 13

    The perfect day spent together by doing the simplest of things banking, shopping and eating good food.
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    Chapter 18

    Andrew is in deep, on the hunt for the saboteur. But can they fix th3 problem, without making it worse.
  17. chris191070

    Chapter 27

    Well that's a good start to Jim loosing his virginity, he'll be well used before the night is out.
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    Track 16

    Is Jasper about to make a huge mistake, talk8ng to Chris about there contracts.
  19. I'm sure you'll cum up with something 🤣
  20. Jamie and Hearst are hitting livefeed from different angles. Between them they will bring it down.
  21. That's allowed, rest stop - something to relieve there stress and tension.
  22. I think it's the five mornings of sickness and the golden glow, after the pregnancy test.
  23. Well they will need a rest on there mission.
  24. They are both good, scary that AI has written them.
  25. Well pregnancy suits Desmond. We are getting really close to the big battle. They need Kieran, to give them a chance of victory.
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