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Brian’s being so stubborn....

They have amazing sexual chemistry. It’ll be interesting to see how they navigate working with each other and if they revisit being lovers. I think there is more there than sex.

Very Nice start!! I’m hooked.

He surely has, lol. He’s all but peed on that man, LOL!! (Who knows if that might not come later....) Nash notices Jarren’s attitude toward Mandy and I think he knows it’s because of how she treats him, what’s his feeling about that?

Regarding the chapter content: Will Jarren have second thoughts in the sober light of day over what he did with Nash? Does Mandy have an attitude with Jarren? (I know Jarren has an attitude with Mandy, which tickles me no end, defending his man before he’s his man) What’s her problem? “....wait, what? When did it happen? Oh fuck.” I can only hope someone isn’t hurt.

The “love” was for your end notes, (Tho this was a nice move along chapter). May your nephew Rest In Peace.

Damn. She still lives. Like a fucking cockroach. Poor Henry.

Bitch. I am going to enjoy the way you finally, permanently get rid of Magda. What a miserable menace, all because she doesn’t like herself.

Magda is one WICKED bitch without powers. Can you imagine how much havoc she would have wrought if she had successfully gotten the skills that went to Desmond? She wouldn’t have cared about rules either.

It’s obvious whatever Sam’s intent, he didn’t kill himself; I only hope Desmond’s begging him didn’t alter the rest of their history.

Aww❣️❣️ He cut his hair for Gabriel❣️❣️ I love it❣️❣️ 😍😍

I them.

Make. Desmond. Better!!!!

If Raven and Desmond weren’t bonded before this, they’ll definitely be bonded after. Desmond will be safe from Julian’s wrath forever, as Raven and Desmond are building that kind of trust in a foxhole/firefight kind of trust; That’s pretty powerful stuff.

That’s who I was thinking of too, ‘cause it seems she’s specifically after Raven. If it is Magda, it just goes to show what a soulless bitch she is-Raven was her only friend, she set him up and now she wants payback?!?!

Good. That’s what happens when you deviate from an original plan. That cocky, stupid Emma will not enjoy her last moments of life....

I go back to what I previously said: Julian deserves many bad things to happen to him for who he was, even if he is less now; That I feel any sympathy, let alone anger on someone harming Julian, (through Raven or otherwise) is a testament to your ability to make me care for an otherwise unsympathetic character, as I surely wish bad happenings on those who have messed with Raven and his mate.

Getting caught pleasuring himself.... Julian realizing his mate was so true that he’d rather be fucked by him in absentia than messing with someone else.... The amazing reunion sex that came as a result.... This chapter was hot, in that respect. I’m concerned about Desmond, how peaceful can his life be now, jumping from dream to dream? I’m glad he’s there to help Raven but “He had no way of knowing that the next time he would talk to his mate would be ten days from now.” is ominous, at the very least. 😳

“The manipulator is not recognized by a dreamer,” the paragraph said. “It is connected to several factors, one of them being the fact that the manipulator is always invading the events of the past when the dreamer had no knowledge of them yet. However, as to every rule, there is an exception, i.e. the bond.” Duh!! Desmond saved your life?!?! And took damn good care of you, too, enough that you wouldn’t let Julian hurt him. There’s a bond there.

Naaaahhhh.

“Ever since a month or so ago, guilt that would be gnawing at him every time after they came back from one of the ‘parties,’ started to diminish immensely. By now, it disappeared completely – Raven wouldn’t feel even a shadow of remorse. At first, it bothered him somewhat, but finally, he shrugged it off, figuring that the absence of pangs of conscience was a rather good thing, at least in his book.” 🤨 I’m not sure how I feel about this. Raven is the closest thing Julian has to a conscience, having Raven okay with this, even indulging in it with him, makes me fear how far Julian will go. The thought of more Sams walking around is disturbing to me. Is it possible that Desmond has the gift Julian hinted at but that Desmond has had the same face since he was young?

I saw where you were going with Markus, Christopher and Nate and I wasn’t sure how I’d feel about it....In your hands, I shouldn’t have worried. It fit. While neither Christopher or Nate were in a triad before their relationship with Tad, this was the dynamic that brought them together. Their shared love for and grief over losing Tad, as well as the genuine love they developed for each other kept them faithful but they were used to three, used to sharing. Markus reminded them of Tad while still being his own person. Markus, while owing his gratitude to Tad, got to fanboy and then be blown away (literally, lol) to find himself desired by not one but both of the men who helped to show him he was okay. It works and it works beautifully. This was an amazing, touching effort Wayne, you should be incredibly proud. Thank you.

Old fart? Where? 😉

As unique as our individual journeys are, they often include pain and growth, the memories of those shouldn’t be forgotten. As weird as it sound, Darling Gary, you make your pain beautiful. The scars are still there and they have shaped you, sometimes they pull to remind you they remain but I view your leeching in writing as proof that you’ve overcome it for the most part, that you won’t let them win. Some scars are on the outside, most are on the inside and as I’ve said to you before, this form of therapy benefits those who read it, as I dearly hope it benefits you. Whatever causes our pain, well it remains....”Nature remembers every injury but forgives by going on.” ~Terri Guillemets Who you are is natural, how you were made to feel about it is not....yours is one of many painful journeys to self acceptance but you made it....many don’t. I’m very thankful you made it. 🍻

Jarren’s is an interesting perspective-he doesn’t have a problem with gay people, he just doesn’t want to be one of them. To have known that about himself so early and developed such a self hate because of it will doom any chance for happiness in his life, period. I’m hoping he can come to acceptance of himself by himself and not for the sake of a relationship; Of course if a relationship will help him on the path to self love....it’s whatever works. I liked seeing Lex and Ian and Cassie mentioned, tho in this story I’m figuring Cassie might be more prominent, being Jarren’s sister-in-law and all. Nash’s demeanor hints at a painful backstory something more than his parents’ rejection (tho that’s enough); It seems he likes himself more than Jarren does; At least he’s comfortable acknowledging his sexuality.