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Lové the chapter, and the story of the guys, well done . Thanks for sharing this with us , John .

Loved it, got to be comfy with who we are, and what we’ve got. Nothing better too, in some long soft grass in the summer sunshine, with a gentile warm breeze blowing, taking it all in, and not giveing a F, loved you’re story thanks John

Mark, thank you for sharing this part of you’re life with us. You’re a strong wounderful person, of this I’m sure. Abusers do this because of their shortcomings, their pitiful , sad feelings of failure and she was just trying to take you down. Don’t ever give in, don’t ever stop trying to walk out that gate, before every sunrise it’s the darkest and coldest time. You’re sunrise is coming, if you ever need someone to stand on the other side of the gate to talk too, or to make that step easier, just say so. You can do it, you’ve got loads of friends here to help you too. Thanks again for sharing with us, and am always here ok, John.

Hey Mark, I’ve loved the story , was reading a bit at work on a break when James was shot, and let out a fuck yeah.. bastard. Then a few guys on shift with me look over as to what was going on. I know it’s been a few years since you wrote this, and I hope one day you’ll get back to it, you’re writing is awsome, thanks for sharing this with us all, just awsome ..... I hope you have a fantastic day... John 😆

Well .... I have a unique set of talents, built up over a career ... (doing in Liam Neeson voice for effect) that can help remove any trace of evidence, hahahaha. get her Dahawk....🤭😆

Awwww... it’s pretty cool,really, well done love these guys ..

Wow, what a post.. you’re more mature and I touch than a lot of the 30/40yo I work with. Good on you, life is a journey, take timeout to enjoy the ride. John.

Awsome

Wow, so many people in this world need to read you’re post. Honesty, sincerity above all fairness, you’re a pretty special guy, tell that man of yours he’s a very lucky guy for us all. feel all enlightened now, I should go and save someone’s cat from a tree (ok urban myth joke) nah, but I get what you’re saying, I’m lucky enough that I at times get to help people when their world has just turned to total crap... it’s not a all about me statement, I life to help, people if I can, I’m lucky enough to be able to regularly it’s good for the soul. have an awesome day, I’m going to now after reading you’re blog, John.

Hi Mark, I hope some years later, you’ve been able to juggle less, and be more about Mark... Please do, I have now, but didn’t for too many years, hope this finds you happy and well. John.

Loving it, this is great, all the cat and mouse between these guys .. 😉🤭😈

Wow, I’ve just discovered you’re work Mark, and this is you’re first attempt... thats amazing. Can’t wait to read on, thanks for sharing you’re characters with us, John.

Beautiful

I’m really enjoying the story, so many emotions between Kevin and Adam, from frustration and hurt over Kevin planning on going to Paris and not telling Adam after saying it was not happening, to Adams insecurity over being out with Kevin, they love each other, so don’t hide it. If people , family and friends can’t or don’t accept it, their loss not Adam and Kevins. I don’t like Carver, I think he’s a snake in the grass, and it just itching to wrap his slutty legs around Kevin and break Adam in the process. looking forward to the next, thanks John.

Hi Gary am still learning my way around this platform, please accept my belated Happy Birthday, I hope you had a fantastic day and wish you an even happier year ahead. John.

Oh my, fantastic chapter and have loved the story from the start. Thank you for sharing all of these guys with us, it’s been awsome, John

OMG 🤭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 💖 was speechless amazing

Loved it..... awwww true love finds a way. Hope one day you revisit these boys, think I’m a little hooked, 🤭☺️

This has been a fantastic read, the moments of tears, laughter, wanting to smack someone upside of their heads too, but overall the watching them all grow, I can’t wait for the wedding, and the meaning behind August 20. Life is a journey, and it’s tough at times, you’ve captured those challenges with happy notes to keep it moving a long without us all reaching for the Kleenex every 5 seconds, I’ve loved the journey with these guys, look forward to reading about them soon, I underthat y’all do this in you’re spare time, hope you find some soon to roll on, Thanks again

Fantastic story DAHawk, well written, want to hug Payton. And Pete sounds like a load of laughs, again well written, love that we see the floored aspects of the characters, makes it more fun. Jake be careful. Please you sound like a good guy too.Thanks for sharing these guys with us, 😎☺️

Love it, thanks for sharing them with us. Can’t wait for the next ,

Oh wow, what a fantastic story, I loved they way it backgrounded us on Colin, and his family, community service. Then Ken, wow, what and awesome guy, hold on to that one Colin, thanks for sharing this with us, J

This is the first of your work I’ve read, and I loved it, had a great laughter at times and also twinges of sadness, overall a great read and and powerful message, particularly how Bart’s family reacted, upset that he couldn’t trust them enough was their hurt. I hope you do come back to this someday, tomorrow ?? Haha, there is so much this has to offer, his brothers, folks, Dean could find them and somehow get them to meet Bart, could be his salvation and also Deans ... the mind just spins, thanks again John. To any and all, Unfortunately I’ve seen that outcome to and too often, it’s sad and the family is nearly always heart broken when the truth comes out. I can’t say this enough, your friends and family love you, they will accept you sometimes it’s shock or deeper issues they have, that cause a blow up, but it’s never bad enough to take your own life and it will resolve, you always have people that love you and have your back, incase lifeline AU 13 11 14 or US 1800 273 8255 😎

Wow Gary, That was a fitting end to a fantastic story, I love stories that have flawed characters in them, although we suspend reality when reading (well I might 😲🙃) I find thier failures, worries and ultimately redemption the thing that hooks me in. I was so cool for Jared to want to help out his daughters biological dad, just a measure of the awkward character and characters you created for us in this story. This is the first of your work I’ve had the pleasure of reading and look forward too more. And maybe an update on these guys a few years on, maybe with a few Rugrats of their own,.. maybe. Thanks John.

Wow that was a powerful chapter, Carly deserves more af an ass kicking, but Craig’s not like his twin, thankfully. I hope Jared will be he guy I think he is and not care that he’s not the biological dad, because you don’t have to farther a child to father a child. It’s been a fantastic read, pissed that I have to go back to work, but kinda can’t wait till I can read the next story, thanks again John. And go mom, always with the food.. haha.