Gary L
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Thought I was following this story and was complaining, to myself, about Carlos abandoning his loyal readers…. Then. I saw a reference to new chapters and realized that, sadly, at 65 I’m losing it….. anyway, Carlos from a really loyal fan - thank you. I’m loving this stage in BCL. And as I sip a glass of mistella: Salut i força al canut! ps my Catalán speaking other half had to check my spelling!
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Is this the moment when Will connects back to the bedroom scene at his father’s wedding in chp 1 and truly realizes that things are over with Zach? I get the feeling that the next couple of chips are going to be really crucial. as ever, many thanks Mark. Whoever are your “saints” may you enjoy their day (Nov 1) 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩
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Perfect comment mfa. Fear Travis is a bit weak, though, and needs to find some cojones, something Will ain’t missing!,
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Yes, I like that, Wesley, nothing rushed, all deliberate and nice and slowly he will disappear out of Will’s life…. Ace comment, as usual. 🤗
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Well done. A great ensemble of characters in these three stories. My favourite, though has to be Seamus, especially in the earlier episodes when he looked after Aidan and left his workers speechless time after time in the coffee bar. Looking forward to the next one mrs G and wishing you a VERY scary Halloween 👻 To quote Tina T: you are “Simply the best, better than……. “ gxxx
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Nice one! Well done. 🤩🤩🤩
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Another, bitchy amazing chp. Can’t wait for the ending. Hope my favourite wins. Has to be S……. !?!?????
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Siena needs a “smack” - brotherly one but Ash is a bit of a wimp another good episode. 🤗
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Exactly!!!
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A really fun read. So relate to poor Ash. good work ✍️
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Ace chp!!! Poor Samson. Eric did the dirty. Just a game, though!!! great work mr author ✍️
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So far so, very, good!
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Really like this angle, great. Thanks 😊
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This fun, well-written and suitably bitchy TV show story gets better and better. Excellent stuff!
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Well, you choose an amazing story for your first visit to GA. Laura has some tough “opposition”, mrs G, Carlos H and for me, of course, the amazing Mark Arbour, BUT she can hold her head high as this is easily at the best level I have read here. Great story and wonderful writing. Xxxx ps I know there are other amazing writers but I just can’t get into the fantasy, werewolf etc world - my weakness not the great writers….
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Me too! Internet has some v interesting images….. can’t wait for Rusty’s tail.. oh sorry tale!
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Reading the comments above I had forgotten just how many fronts Granger will have to face on his return to Brentwood and London. Above all, St Vincent……. Surely George must be forgiven after Spencer’s intervention? Mark, this wonderful story seems to be drawing to a close but five years of reading your stories leaves me decidedly nervous… Be gentle, please. fantastic stuff and as Canuck says: A feeling I wholeheartedly share 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
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“I’m lovin it!”
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@ObicanDecko I am having so much fun reading this story. It is not at all like the type of story which would normally capture and hold my attention, nevertheless it has. I totally agree @Summerabbacat well said
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It’s looking good, dude 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩
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I’m intrigued- this is quite a challenge to construct I imagine, but the start is excellent. And I just about to hit chp 2. good work, author.
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Book Review: Three Ex Presidents and James Franco by John Buchanan
Gary L commented on Drew Payne's blog entry in Words, Words and Words
A serious critique. As an aside, I teach writing for students doing Cambridge University exams in English as a foreign language. 25% of grade is for “communicative achievement” - and this is where your review is so good and I will use part of it, with your permission, as a perfect example of how people fail in this part, see para three. “Supposed to be the musing…” a great review and a model for others to use. Thank you so much and I hope what I say makes sense!
