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  1. Gary L

    Chapter 50

    Hi! Turkey as a joint is found only at Christmas in the more expensive supermarkets. But turkey fillets, legs etc are available all year round. My Spanish partner doesn’t like it so I can’t have it even at Xmas 😢
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    Chapter 18

    Exactly. I’m so cross with this guy. I’ve read stories here with atrocious grammar but so what, I’ve never had the guts to publish so I respect them and would never make a public comment. I’m really upset about this as I’ve just read another supercilious comment attacking a new story.
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    Chapter 1

    Hi guys. I read this and really enjoyed it. Sadly, there is a really critical comment in the general story section. Really, there are so many errors it wasn’t possible to continue??? The grammar, especially the conversations are perfectly written. please support this author ✍️ Forgive me, but I hate this kind of criticism. Mr Aquarius keep it coming!!!
  4. EXACTLY!!!
  5. Sadly, JJ that is so common. You can think parents and others will take this “thing” in their stride, as they should, but this fear is still, in 2022, so deep-rooted in even so-called liberal societies. The battle ain’t over….
  6. Al in all a dramatic chp. Hoping Maddox and Jonathan communicate soon…….
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    Prologue

    I’m hooked. Really good start and in a short chp the author has communicated so much. Should be a great read. thanks ☺️
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    Bus Boy

    Three powerful chapters involving three equally powerful emotions: obsession, attraction, desire. this is a pretty unique story on this site and it is very cleverly structured and beautifully written. well worth entering a somewhat different world of desire although one may not understand what makes some people tick. Truly excellent.
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    Chapter 3

    A very good, though sad, twist instead of happy ever after. Very well written. the scenes on the bus were HOT!!
  10. Gary L

    Our Destined Life

    Fantastic read and the car seat ending was very, very clever. Brava!!!
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    Chapter 62

    With Anson, all the way home…. And I hope it’s a great ride. Sorry sail.
  12. I know the feeling. I’m rereading all this weekend for like the third time. It gets better ever time.
  13. 1978. Geography teacher comes out in class. I was at Uni and came out that yr to a few friends. The film was at a lovely cinema in London which showed, and still does, inde films. It made a big impression. I’ve read some other of your pieces. You right really well ( sorry I teach English!). happy weekend
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    Chapter 62

    Every chp of Gap Year makes me feel it is the best and along comes a chp of Northern Ex., and I in love with George again. It’s like having two lovers. many thanks ps. To you and all your fellow Americans I wish you a peaceful holiday These are not easy days for so many Americans but right will prevail as you showed us Brits in the Revolutionary War! As George might say: a toast to all American authors and readers on GA
  15. Thanks!! This was a great read. I can still bring amazing at seeing my first gay-themed film (Night Hawks ?) and a gay kiss on a cinema screen.
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    Chapter 37

    Although, if memory serves me, she once commented on her daughter’s combination of styles - it shouldn’t work but it does. you leave enough room behind the society “lady” for a soul. But I can’t see her approving grunge. Just the work would set her teeth on edge!
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    TSA Chapter 2

    I’m a bit confused by the maths. Half plus 2/8 = 3/4, 75%. Perhaps the ownership mystery will solve itself.
  18. A strange, compelling read. The internal desire to be saved/save oneself from the depths. an old 2008 tale but worth a read.
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    Story

    A compelling read
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    Chapter 37

    What an amazing chapter, Mark. I need to reread to get to every nuance but wow. Will achieves so much on horseback and then THE LETTER. I thought the heights of the last chapter would be difficult to surpass - I was wrong. Gap Year is becoming one of the greatest books in the series. 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
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    Sh*tty Families

    Ummm. Mr S do you think it’s a question of “if”? We, and Jonathan, are going to suffer. I’d bet my aged dachshund on it 🫡
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    Sh*tty Families

    Yet again, and this is getting irritating, frankly, our author tricks me by completely sidestepping my prediction of somehow J turning up to be with Maddox for thanksgiving. And as for Rusty…… this is one great read 🤗
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    Chapter 36

    Imagine the compilation books. Best of Will, Best of Brad being humiliated by Will, Best of Will staying calm and collected. Whoops that’s pretty slim volume……. 😄
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    Chapter 36

    Another Escorial dinner. How many scenes there have we read? And yet each one comes out as unique. This was a great 5***** chapter to wake up to at 08.00 CET. Nice work mr Mark. 👌👌👌👌👌
  25. Ace reaction to the prompt. Reading this before turning off the light wasn’t a good idea 😱😱😱
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