Gary L
-
Posts
3,856 -
Joined
-
Last visited
Content Type
Forums
Stories
- Stories
- Story Series
- Story Worlds
- Story Collections
- Story Chapters
- Chapter Comments
- Story Reviews
- Story Comments
- Stories Edited
- Stories Beta'd
Blogs
Store
Help Center
Writing
Gallery
Events
Everything posted by Gary L
-
This is one of the best stories i have ever read on this site for the development of characters, their humanity and the monstrous baby!! A 5***** read!
- 10 comments
-
- 12
-
-
-
Another enjoyable read which has encouraged me to go all the way back to the beginning of the saga!! Well done and delivered with more punctuality than my students essays 😀
-
This story keeps getting better and better. How do you keep it up? And Gap Year, too! Well done, and I hope you get an Easter Break. Love from orange-blossom filled Valencia, and hay fever-filled, gary!!
-
Cadet Second Class • IV
Gary L commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Cadet Second Class • IV
Hi Carlos, I have been vicariously enjoying the comments of others whilst being unable to add my own praise - my pre-historic ipad doesnt allow me to add comments or even likes. So, using work computer is a risk worthy of taking to congratulate you on another well-developed, and developing, piece of the saga. A v clever spin-off but actually totally integrated at the same time. Ritch has come a long way since the telephone calls with CJ, missing his brother. As every, 5***** -
Really great story HIGHLY RECOMMENDED!
- 10 comments
-
- 10
-
-
-
Maple, cherry, walnut, hickory, oak...
Gary L commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Maple, cherry, walnut, hickory, oak...
This really is a delightful story / like a modern/day comic opera. Love the language,, characters - everything. Well done! Mrs G. 5 *****- 34 comments
-
- 11
-
-
-
A very nicely paced piece of writing, as always. There are loads of good stories on this site - some sexmad, others not, but few seem to get into the heart of their characters. You certainly do and i think it's a reason why you have a huge following.
-
Some good dramatic writing going on here. Totally agree with ReaderPAul.
-
Great start and, as ever, nicely written.. Eager for more!!!
-
Good start. Im hooked. V fond memories of your great country. Two weeks of wonder. Thanks
-
Hi all, Ive been reading this site for a couple of years now and has been a godsend during various periods of sick leave. I have had various articles published in the past during my time as a university prof teaching ethics but for the past 17 years have been living as a British "ex-pat" in Valencia with my Spanish partner. The one-night stand that has lasted since 1999. As a small "ice-breaker" challenge, two statements are true, one is false. Behind each is a story waiting to be told: 1. I worked on the Hollywood blockbuster, Robin Hood, Prince of Thieves 2. I knew Lewis Hamilton before he became Formula 1 champion 3. I have washed the hands of a saint. regards from a rather damp Spain. X
- 4,965 replies
-
- 4
-
-
- introduce yourself
- new members
- (and 1 more)
-
Another great installment of this amazing saga sooo gooood
-
Found this today. Up todate now reading between US election count. A really good story. A change from youth, beauty and/or riches which seem to dominate on this site. really good story-telling? Thank you PO. 🤗
-
Mark, how do you keep it up? Im totally hooked already. A great way to celebrate my birthday reading about young Will. 🤗🤗🤗
- 23 comments
-
- 10
-
-
-
Being part of a decade-long running saga is one thing, but pulling off an individual masterpiece is another. Having Read this bit bit has been a real pleasure, awaiting episodes and all the epilogues (!), but now it's time to get down to some serious stuff and read from start to finish. great drama and gifted story-telling. Enjoy, I will
-
Another great episode in a wonderful series. It's a shame back in 2011 people didnt leave more comments...... 😈
-
I think this is a pivotal book in the series. There is a before - JP and Stef who never quite get there - and an after - together, finally. Bored with work I started rereading last night and completed this morning. Although written six years ago, there is still a freshness througout. great read
-
Chapter 142 Beggars Can't Be Choosers
Gary L commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 142 Beggars Can't Be Choosers
Good read, as usual, thanks mr D. Am I the only one who doesn't like Nathan? -
Going Home, Finding Home
Gary L commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in Going Home, Finding Home
I have been really enjoying this story. I, too, have been on a similar course and thye can be life-changing. 👏 -
Whilst on black puddings.... I never ate them in uk but at 45 I arrived in Spain and they are national and regional specialities, meat/onion/rice - based etc. Im making myself hungry at 05.50! A bit early to cook one! Story lookinG good 👏👏
-
Epilogue - Chapter 10-Final Chapter
Gary L commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Epilogue - Chapter 10-Final Chapter
Although Mark has shown us book after book that he has a good turn of phrase ( to say the least), what amazEs me is the way he gives sUch emotional depth to complex characters and has managed to do this consistently. And then the final part is putting his characters to the test in his complex storylines, such skill and imagination. Black Widow was a really great read, thanks, Mark -
One small thing, when writing about a king and his thoughts, perhaps "gonna" strikes the wrong note. But it could be me......
-
Some last sentence! Wow! Awaiting next installment with bated breath. 🤗🤗🤗🤗
-
Chapter 141 My Brother's Secret
Gary L commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 141 My Brother's Secret
Well said, wildone. Perhaps Robbie could escape back to Europe! spain even! Many of you will know this, but some not, in 19th century great English novelists like, Dickens, Trollope etc. published their still famous works in fortnightly episodes and received hudreds of letters about the charachters, their disLikes and petitions for the hero to finally marry the tragic heroine etc.. Sound familiar? We just have a comment box and save the price of a stamp. Finally, a break, yes, but retirement NO!
