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Oh I'm sure it was an unintended accident

What? you don't know yet? I hope you didn't back yourself in a corner where you would have to make up something so crazy,nutty,impossible........Oh....never mind see you Saturday

I have traveled with Mr. Lee Richard Wilson these past few months, since my initial, (previous?) demise. I am back on the path in the blue mist, floating toward whatever comes next.Back on the path in the blue mist? And I to surmise after a few months in Lee Richard Wilson's body Red started saying "PLEASE GET ME OUT OF THIS BODY AND THIS GUY'S WARPED MIND"😄 Actually a very interesting take .Thank you❤️

I'm sure I'm overlooking something but after all that comparing the Popper to Augie why not bring Augie himself to assist in this he might have some skwish the popper might not know about since Augie was around Nicolaas

The winters seems to get longer as we age. Hang in there

If everything hits the fan I hope the homophobic element in town doesn't cause Justin to relapse to where he was six months ago

When I was released, we went back to Camp Hill, Pennsylvania, and the small house Lindy and I lived in until January twentieth. Small house in a city with 8,000 population (today who knows in 2061) The Secret service detail would have had to make that place a fortress with all the media most likely going there plus nosey tourists. I wonder if Avery would have won the Senate seat by that much I think the opponent and media would have been constantly talk about his coma and mental stability. Great story .I could see a possible sequel where Avery could see his young grandson was going to die and this time he tries to take steps to stop it. Sorry, there was no sex, aside from a couple mild references to it. If Loof had been real and he really did send nukes and one was going to Washington......There would have been sex

The faith healer comment made me remember someone. Do you think they could ask the Shaman (not sure I spelled it right)on what they could do?(And no I don't think of the Shaman as a faith healer)

@VBlew pretty much asked what I was wondering about.The Doctor said "irregularities" But he didn't say unprecedented . As far as I know there is no law they could use to force Devin to submit to more examination. I have another idea that @Bill W will probably shoot down but how about Devin going to class in a motorized wheelchair? Even the most distracted person will be less likely to bump into Devin's left side then.

As good of a cliffhanger as I ever seen. Or Dome hanger?Whatever very suspenseful

As long as the Poppers don't find out about it.....sort of like a ... Pop secret (No trademark infringement )

‘Well, it’s a really nice town, this one,’ she replied, while placing our purchases in a plastic bag and then holding it out to me. ‘But it does have its dark side! If you’ll accept one piece of advice from someone who’s been around here for a while . . . just be careful, boys.’ The two goons were just in the store and she may have overheard them talking about the "poofters" that moved into town which is why she said what she said. I hope Tim and Guy tell everybody in the house what happened so they can make a plan.Will Sam find out about Ben because of those goons?

Such a potty mouth

Smart microwave, remember? If it was so smart it would be programmed to detect when metal is put in it and self power off. There is also that idiot years ago tried to dry off her dog by putting him in the microwave.( I wish they could make microwaves able to detect that) Yesterday, love was such an easy game to play. I guess the mother played Beatles music in the kitchen Very funny stuff😄

Not done done with the chapter yet BUT I'm typing this out and I'm going to send it to the printer Don't ask me what, I can't read the manual. No hands. Then how is it able to type?🤔

With AI intelligence which would most likely improve like @pvtguy said this isn't too far fetched. Can't wait to hear more details Avery said "I'm probably going to jail." This is 2061 is that Supreme Court presidential immunity ruling still in effect? As far as I know there is no realistic mechanism to jail a president for breaking international law .

Maybe that's why one of them is Grumpy🙄 Sorry

"Pastrani!"Rick laughed. "Sounds like an Italian sandwich!" Also sounds like a former NFL quarterback. Not kidding Dan Pastorini was his name. I always called him Dan Pastrami LOL. Were you thinking of that when you wrote this?

Beautiful story.How much research did you do for this?It would have been interesting how that flu epidemic (which has been compared to co-vid) that was going around then affected the area. And was it really that difficult for the military then to inform the family about Jack's condition? But I digress it doesn't take anything away from the story

What loof spelled backwards

I can't really say I relate to Ben because I always known I was attracted guys. It is obvious he loves Sam but it sounds like Ben never even considered being attracted to guys I never came across that situation. I have seen guys have GF and getting married only to later end up being with being with a guy admitting they denied that side of them.But I don't think that is what Ben is doing I think this is genuinely new to him

I mentioned in other story chapter comments that I live in San Diego is it a coincidence that's the place you picked to be struck first🤔 President Pelson was traveling to a summit meeting in Moscow, to meet with Russian President Volkov.He wouldn't be related to the wrestler Nickolai Volkov would he? President Loof would be a member of the Loof family,That would make him "A Loof" those kind of people are hard to talk to.( I know there is no groan emoji)

Ragal turned to Charlie. "The first thing I think we should do is to agree to call the Leeperi by Shannon's name: poppers. It will go better if we are all in accord with the language." You missed a chance to break the third wall you could have had Charlie say" Works for me. Although @Geron Keesmight disagree the name is too normal for him"

The same from me.Couldn't have put it better myself

I hope something happens before Teddy gets a chance to do the unthinkable