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  1. weinerdog

    Chapter 1

    If I didn't know better The contract Frank had with Kyle's mother might have said more than just cooking
  2. What I'm worried about now is does Carter's controlling nature escalates into physical violence. Being the Dean's son might modify his behavior somewhat but it sounds like he's one to eventually lose control
  3. weinerdog

    Chapter 29

    The way you described Tony's thought process in creating his story you might have gave some readers pointers on how to write a story.Maybe you inspired some future GA stories. I don't think this will happen but it WOULD add a lot of drama.With all these people showing up for the party could Tony's siblings show up and (this is the iffy part) The Monolith is with them and wants to make amends with Tony and Luke.Yeah I don't think so either but I bet @Mark Ponyboy Peters could pull it off. ‘Don’t sound so shocked. And if you stand there any longer with your mouth open I’ll give you something to do.Shouldn't Tony wait until all the food was prepared before.....OH! in the kitchen something to do in the KITCHEN ...nevermind
  4. I just looked up Zereth family tree quite impressive.. Judas,Brutus,Benedict Arnold
  5. Try the keto diet,You don'tstarve to death on that one
  6. I don't want Leon to get in trouble but in this case I hope the police do get involved so they can hear the story about what Gavin and his friend did and said. Of course knowing how bass ackwards the DA office thinks THAT could be a danger. Is Mark a big formidable guy? If not Maybe Leon is big enough now to defend himself should Mark come around. "I told you, it's not that small to me. I think it's perfect. Just like you are." "I don't know about that." Well you heard the old expression "Anything over a handful is a waste"...Or is it a mouthful?🤔...I guess both can be true
  7. That would certainly Sweden the deal..... ..Too much of a reach?
  8. weinerdog

    Chapter 7

    There's that and also this A moment later, my phone buzzed. Thanks for that tight ass. I smiled, biting my lip, and replied: All yours, roomie. What do you want to bet Liam isn't smart enough to delete it? What are the odds now???
  9. THATS what it's called????🤔 No fair I was told it was to keep from getting food on me
  10. Devlin causes multiple items brain aneurysms. I think Devlin himself should get an brain aneurysm I have a lot more to say about this but for now I'll just table this discussion (I might have used that one before if I did I apologize......TWICE)
  11. So?!!🤷‍♂️
  12. weinerdog

    Chapter 28

    Thanks for that @Paqman......"sigh" OK you too @Al Norris
  13. Of course so obvious
  14. Like Hearst, I don't believe you guys can truly guess what Jamie's 'dark side' is about. I made a conscious decision about Wen here, to show his actual 'dark side'. Even so, I invite you to speculate to your heart's content! This is my first reaction so I'm probably waaaaay off. “He’s a coward. He’s a leaver,” Wen continued. “He’s the worst type of person you could meet in your life.” The only reason I can see for Wen to have that reaction is he has interacted with Jamie himself .As what? One of Jamie's customers?Or more directly? I would say Jamie did something to a friend of his but I bet Wen has no friends
  15. It happened at Walmart. When I was at checkout the cashier said "Strip down facing me"........I DIDN"T KNOW SHE WAS TALKING ABOUT THE DEBIT CARD
  16. weinerdog

    Chapter 28

    Does @Mark Ponyboy Peters have a story like that? The premise of the story sounds really good so I hope he does a story like that. OR get Randy(Randi?) Thompson to post it on GA
  17. "While that is sometimes the case, it is the exception, rather than the rule." "You're not serious?" "I am." When I got to that part my reaction was did this guy father the future idiot meteorologist in the Peter story. But to give the guy his due he did respond well when he got some facts from Les.Still those facts were out there and The DA's office seems clueless "Of course. Michael's been nothing but a little gentleman whenever he's here. I wonder if she would have said that if she knew what went on in the kitchen moments before Next Up - "An Overnight, a Phone Call, and Assholes" Was that last word really necessary? Your stories always have enough of those
  18. weinerdog

    Chapter 6

    Classic way to end a chapter
  19. So Kieran is going to go to this place called The Silvertine Ruins to see The Morain of Mending? And he can't tell anybody about this?Everybody is going to think Kieran abandoned Rory.Why do these things in your story have to have such F---ed up conditions
  20. Well I have to be sure the cat isn't around when I'm doing a certain activity.(You all can use you're imagination on that one)
  21. weinerdog

    Chapter 27

    When it rains a lot in San Diego where I live there is flooding and people here do the same stupid thing.As much as people from different countries are different they are the same
  22. Every word you wrote in that comment @drsawzall was spot on especially about Luca bringing Ari and Jordan.There is only one thing you missed is this, reporting the car stolen is filing a false police report right? Lets add that
  23. I remember John Lennon saying in an interview he was never satisfied with any of his music even the groundbreaking Beatles stuff. That tells me a lot about people who are great at something but always believe it can be better
  24. weinerdog

    Chapter 27

    Everybody loves this pleasant chapter and rightfully so.So leave it me rain on the parade a little😄 ‘Mum! Those two men just hugged each other!’ We turned and noticed one of the two young boys had stopped and was looking in our direction, his mouth agape. ‘It’s all right, Liam,’ his mother quickly said. ‘They must be friends.’ These days even in the uptight U.S. thats not considered too unusual Or (gasp)GAY!!!!. But the mom seemed to be calm about it.The poor kid must have gotten it from his dad. there isn’t much future for it, is there? Most of them will just become landfill,. Oh you would be surprised.Years ago when I lived in an apartment I had a big life-size card board of Elvira (Does Australia know who she is?) And a friend of mine had one of The NBA basketball player Magic Johnson
  25. weinerdog

    Chapter 6 S3

    Uh...uh.....He eats too many popsicles?🤔
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