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I suspect something has to happen to get Carter out of their orbit before they can make any kind of progress
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The roles are reversed in this chapter .In previous chapters Marty was making sure Peter did what he had to do. But then there is this “You rest here for a few minutes, and I’ll get dinner ready.” “But I told you I’d do that!” Marty protested, his back arching as he was about to get up. Peter sprung up quicker, however. He stood directly in front of him and placed both his hands firmly on Marty’s shoulders, playfully but firmly pushing him back down. “You got most of the stuff done already, so it’s not a lot. And I hardly did anything all day, especially compared to what you went through.” “But I said…” “Stay!” Peter ordered. Now I'm looking forward to the trip home. Good luck Angela🤞
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The Drop In Centre 3
weinerdog replied to Mikiesboy's topic in Mikiesboy's Drop in Centre's Mikieboy's Topics
WOW!!!!! You really have cut down on your whiskey intake that's about 95% less then what you used to put in it Seriously it sounds great I gained 5 pounds just reading the ingredients -
Well obviously at the dinner table
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“Promise you won’t think of anyone else while you suck my cock,” Alexander ordered again. “I promise.” Lyn presented his pinky with a big smirk on his face. I'm surprised Alexander didn't say "I can read minds" And mean it Brad had assured them that this part of the island was never visited by tourists, so it was okay for them to just swim in the nude. Like in their younger years, I disagree NOT like in their younger years there's a difference a BIG difference....This time Luke was there.........Well to me it's a big difference😛
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No communication between Mark and Johnathan whatsoever.You can't solve anything like that
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Noticed Larry wasn't mentioned That's good. They’ve had some name acts perform there in the past.” “So who’s gonna be there tonight?” Paul asked. “Never heard of them, but they’re supposed to be good,” I replied. “Folk music, I think. I was hoping you would come up with a name of a band that hadn't made it big yet. This was 1972 so The Eagles were just starting to get known. You could have used Jim Croce even if he never played there. What they said about cars was so true .My brother worked for Toyota in the 80's and there were a lot of stories about how far behind American cars were then
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I do get what you're saying but remember while it's been 10+ chapters for us hence 10+ weeks it has only been one week for Joel.Hmm🤔 14 chapters to cover one week? If this story goes to the Baseball season how many chapters will it take?
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“Get your feet off that damn table, the cleaners are coming,” So? That's what they are there for. Unless the cleaners have to report to the parents how dirty the house was when they cleaned it🤔 wondering what the hell I just got myself into. If it involves more alcohol...geez. I think this is unlikely but perhaps Colt somehow gets the secret out of Joel.He would then tell Joel he would have no problem with Celia. Perhaps Cole would see Joel issues as an distraction for Trace and Celia while he goes off and does God knows what with Sierra. So if Celia goes with them could you have Joel's mom tick her off so much that Celia decks her?🙏.......Yeah I know that's not Celia so how about but how about a cutting remark instead😄
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The Drop In Centre 3
weinerdog replied to Mikiesboy's topic in Mikiesboy's Drop in Centre's Mikieboy's Topics
Hate to burst your bubble but they contacted ME on your background check.....I'm kidding call off the hit on me -
A Graceful Exit / Epilogue
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in A Graceful Exit / Epilogue
Hey I live in San Diego you can buy me lunch 😁🤪 -
Great chapter with the family.But Mike and Brad being surprised by Peter going to sleep so fast is it related to his condition?
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Well so far this is different AND fascinating some with rusted carcasses of old motor vehicles parked beside them, I now have an idea what happened to some of my old cars two young men and three young women – all of whom perfectly fit the modern-day description of a hippie, with long hair, clothes that ranged from shabby to way-out, and bare feet. Do Cheech and Chong appear in this? The first boy laughed. ‘No, most of us don’t go by our old names here. We consider ourselves to have been reborn. We’re starting over in a new environment, so we’ve chosen to change everything about us, starting with our names.’ ‘Oh . . . I see.’ ‘I’m Arlo, by the way,’ the boy said. ‘And you’ve met Taren and Nova. The others are Wren and Luna.’ In addition to Cheech and Chong is Moon Unit Zappa here also?
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A Graceful Exit / Epilogue
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in A Graceful Exit / Epilogue
Great stuff❤️ A bunch of random thoughts that do't connect in any way (So from me what's new😄) "Oh. I guess since Rich is OK with it, I'll have it and he'll take care of me." We said a lot of things about ML all of them accurate but what we didn't say enough about is her general cluelessness For most of the story ML was the most hated character but in one short appearance Uncle Doug became the worst character. He also never remembered the details of that fateful day. I guess that's a good thing. When I have vivid memories of my worst moments (obviously not as serious as Ed) I cringe with shame.But he still remembers that he probably is responsible for the killing so I hope the shrinks helped him and it seemed like they did. Just a thought since you have all the players later on in life some with multiple children how about Billy's now 18 year old child contacting him? If I remember right you're going on vacation .Enjoy❤️ -
Don't worry about posting new chapters concentrate on getting better.🙏I was told this by someone who said this worked for him so I'm just throwing this out there and you probably thought of this yourself. But perhaps acupuncture or acupressure?
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Where the hell did you come up with THAT ONE!!!!!
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weinerdog replied to Mikiesboy's topic in Mikiesboy's Drop in Centre's Mikieboy's Topics
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it seems that people are constantly finding priceless objects You're not kidding about that two example that pop up to mind are a guy at a garage sale saw a plain white album sleeve with a hand written Velvet Underground on it for 75 cents. Turns out it was a demo recording BEFORE they became well known that was never released and if fetched $155,000. Another was a guy who saw one old worn out painting for $4.00 and bought it also because he wanted to use the frame. When he took off the frame he found a copy of the Declaration of Independence and carbon dating determined that it was from that time and it was worth 2.42 million
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Like @drsawzall and @Lee Wilson I'm also wondering if Pa will win. “Because sometimes there are really creepy guys hanging around outside the ladies’ room and hitting on the women as they pass by. If there are more than one of us walking together, the creepy guys will usually leave us alone, especially after we all give them a piece of our minds.” I have always heard comments about women going to a public restroom together and comedians tell jokes about it. But after what what I read here it all makes sense.Did another woman tell you that @Bill W? And if we’re lucky, it will be a huge sum that will last for several lifetimes.” Well since they are going to live several lifetimes they are going to need it and that means @Bill W will have more stories to write oh wait.....That would mean @Bill W would have to live several lifetimes also.....Is there something you're not telling us @Bill W🤔
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Part of me wanted to leave an angry reaction because of Larry but that would be dissing @Altimexis and since this is autobiographical that wouldn't have been right. Larry is obviously academically smart being in this program but in all other ways he's a moron. I have no doubt that one day you’ll carry a computer around in your pocket, Well Dr. Ellis sure got that right I assume he's based on someone you know. So did this Professor also see these little computers being also part of a phone?
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[Memory, October, Sophomore Year] – Visceral Reaction
weinerdog commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in [Memory, October, Sophomore Year] – Visceral Reaction
When this story started Alexander was easily the biggest douche of the three. After. This chapter he might be the least. Although he still had to say "Roman not Greek" Brad probably doesn't even know Lyn vomited because he was too busy looking at the two boobs showing the four boobs- 29 comments
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Baker got off cheap IMO. But I can imagine this will be the gift that keeps on giving for Baker everything being on Facebook an all. Maybe you already have but I see material for another story with these characters .Perhaps from Zack's POV. And speaking of another story It's not prom night, mum,' I protested. When I read that line I was thinking of them actually doing that and The Catholic school's reaction to it,
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The Aftermath, Or, Nelson Hears the Truth
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in The Aftermath, Or, Nelson Hears the Truth
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The Verdict and One More Problem
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in The Verdict and One More Problem
Well I was trying not to pile on while this one not as good as the other ones but here goes ML is also known as Mrs. Lincoln, Why? Everyone took a shot at her in the balcony -
Coffee with pods is the best but while the Keurig machines are affordable the price of pods is outrageous so it's drip for me also. BTW how do you make instant water? Just add water?🤔
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