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And that's a problem?" Grandma shot back."You can stand to lose a few pounds,so this will be good for you " "Come on, let's get moving, " Grandpa urged."Can't you see I'm wasting away?" "Fat chance, " Grandma replied. You could probably last a month without having another meal" Yep they are a long time married couple alright.

And they are the lucky ones they can sell thier house to pay to live there. What about the Seniors that don't have that option?

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A few more thoughts managed to creep in my head.Judging by the title of the story and him helping out Chris (this time I got it right ) I guess Kevin is now a roadie. Is Deja Vu the opening act for the whole tour? Or just some dates? Would they be considered up and comers or already successful? I ask this because depending on what type of audience Deja Vu has can influence a lot of this. The story title suggests Kevin is in love with Eric (please not Chris) does Eric feel similar? Or is Kevin just a cute boy to him. And IF it is mutual is Eric popular with the girls? If so that might mean the band's manager might want them to be on the DL.But of course all of this spec might be irrelevant we'll see

You have put some of your characters through shit but in this case it seemed like "Let's get all out of the way in chapter one." You didn't say what age Kevin was so I guess it was 18 otherwise I don't think he would be allowed to live alone in the apartment at 17. If the Landlord knew Kevin had money from insurance then it serves him right what Kevin did before he left. Although I still wouldn't have done what Kevin did. The Landlord still got off cheap. It could have been Joe Walsh or Keith Moon imagine what they would have done. I was thinking If Eric is gay and saw Kevin three days in a row at his concerts no way in Hell he DOESN'T recognize him. I wonder if Mike is dicky toward Kevin because HE has a crush on Eric. The way you described Eric I can't wait to see his picture

Another story involving a band.This is in your wheelhouse. Is that a picture of the lead singer? Or the protagonist? Either way it makes picturing the story THAT much better

My sentiments exactly.I'm to to google "Canada Day " For what it's worth The Guess Who and Bachman-Turner-Overdrive were among my favorite groups And for some reason I have this stupid one one in my head I.once put a Canadian coin in a American parking meter...And a Mountie gave a ticket...DUH

There is one thing Justin hasn't considered yet and maybe Scott also but in his his case maybe he hasn't expressed it yet. Yes Peter has said these hurtful things without knowing about Justin. But he knows about Scott and Billy and since that time Peter at the worst has been at least civil to Scott and even borderline friendly. Of course it is for what Scott did for Justin but that would be a reason to think Peter would not disown Justin.One thing that would be good to know is did Peter keep saying these crude things about "poofters" after the incident? And I don't remember if it was his older brother ( think it was) who made that same comment at the time but I bet he kept making comments like that as he and Justin continued to grow up.That certainly wasn't good for Justin. There’s something else . . .’ Justin said to me as we neared the jetty. ‘What’s that?’ ‘Would you mind if I stayed for a little while? With you I mean?’ Why do I think a certain something is going to happen?🤔

That reminds me of a book I think in the 50's which later became a movie called Black Like Me. If I remember right the author took pill and did other stuff to make his skin black and made his hair afro like and this was in the South mind you. Thats not as dangerous as what Andrew is doing but it's up there.It turned out the stuff he did to made his skin look black led to him getting very ill. Oh and BTW......(sigh) congrats

“Freedom of expression, dickhead. I thought all you pigs knew the Constitution.” I don't care how Luis was acting that was a bit much. If that famous TV special "Scared Straight" had been called something else I bet some pseudo christians would have called their conversion camps that. “Do you think we can move on to the next chapter already? It's getting late, and I'm exhausted.” I love when you break the third wall😄 But you could have added "Besides I want to see what weinerdog has to say".....What? You don't think so?

SEE @kbois !@akascrubber knows about the same story.....

Er....Uh..... Kane is a character from another story which I though you knew about I was just trying to get your opinion

Great writing you managed to make the family scenes heartwarming while also keeping up the suspense. We've gotten attached to that family so don't pull a Kage on us with Andrew (eh @kbois?) These guys are not jokes or from a writer's imagination. Really?....Then how is this story being written🤔

While needing a kidney transplant isn't a good thing but with only one kidney Lars is a lot less likely to drink and he's a better person when he doesn't. Good story

I love Scott and what he's trying to do but throwing away a foil packet in the John doesn't mean Justin is on the way back from wherever it was that he’s been for these past couple of years. I hope I'm wrong but an incident Justin had with his parents could be the kind of thing that will make him want another taste. Sad that Justin would rather have Sally think he was passed out on the Pub toliets rather the sleeping wit Scott. And now for the most important question that beach where Scott met up with that surfer where is it now?.........Never mind

Doing a police officers job is challenging enough throw in what looks like a crazy ex and some tension from co-workers sounds pretty explosive

I closed my phone and looked out the window. Dwight smiled and nodded his head. If that's not foreshadowing of something I don't know what is❤️ I told him about having to give up my home and move into a nursing facility. I shared with him my hopes of someday leaving and moving into an independent living apartment “You had a beautiful home,” he said. “I can imagine how you feel to have to give it up They are speaking in the past tense like Phil longer owns the home it is still in his name right? That's important to know in regards to our theory about Susan and Stanley moving into it. The HIV relevation was a bit of a surprise.The time Phil said it happen was around the same time the NBA star Magic Johnson announced he was HIV positive. Well Magic is still with us so the timing of Phil being diagnosed was fortuitous perhaps it may have been the difference between not suffering Dwight's fate

I almost left a laugh reaction after what Sally said😄 I shudder to think what was in the foil packet. Those chills Justin was having I'm guessing since they don't seem to talk much his parents are unaware of that Scott should at least speak to his doctor about that. You know something Scott you're way too good. I would have taken a closer peek at the open buttons on Justin's boxers after being awoken at 1:27 AM you deserve at least that much😄

Interesting same thing happened to me

Gee you write that like you think it's unrealistic or something

And you're a brilliant judge of talent

Where did you get that picture of @kbois on the way to the korner? (Oh and I guess while I'm at it) FIRST!!!!!!!!

Nice start but a lot of sadness there.

Andrew enjoyed watching his parents interact. I agree they were a little mushy but the way they did it was cool" "That sounds rather selfish, not altruistic, I'm afraid. You're not going to help them; in the long run you're only helping yourself." Andrew opened his mouth and closed it. Shit. He's right, and this is for my book. How will it help anyone but me? If Andrew ends up buying Matt or arranges for Matt to be bought (Robert?) I think this conversation would be the catalyst for that to happen

I may roll over and go back to sleep for an hour. I don't need to leave until much later,' Not a good idea Andrew this morning I awoke at 4:30 AM and said to myself "Oh good it will be another hour or so before @Mikiesboy posts the new chapter" SO I rolled back over.....Look how long it took me to get here