That was as action packed a chapter as I ever read.What I was worried about the whole time was a crooked cop who knew the messaging system might screw things up. Is the number two person of the mob Parker at the place where they were holding the family? If not then he is still alive and perhaps another attempt.Nobody in the mob knew what an Apple Watch could do?
Outstanding chapter❤️❤️❤️❤️
Only one tiny disappointment I wanted Corbin to come with Asa and Caleb.I hope you'll have Caleb call Corbin to come on up once the twins are cured.I would be very interested to hear what the twins will say to him
Nice chapter if not a little melancholy.Had no idea Roger was 95 he didn't get cheated. Would Colin and Armand be considered too old to adopt now? What I would like to see is the first group of kids like Tommy,Ronnie etc. continue Armand and Colin's tradition of adopting the kind of kids that need it
The previous two comments pretty much said it all about the fall out I will say the only difference between Mike and Tony's dad island their sons are they are not stupid enough to damage property and only because it may cost them otherwise they are just as bad as their sons.
I have an idea what they could do for a history project. This wasn't in any history books when I was in HS and maybe not even now (Florida for sure).How about they write about the Stonewall incident in NY I think was 1970,1971. Im guessing this wouldn't be what Mrs. Landsdowne had in mind.
When the Shaman said "Do you know what a chipmunk looks like, and I do not mean a cartoon chipmunk either?” I couldn't help but think you put that line in because you anticipated me writing something like that😄
Trees are important for the environment so it's quite a quandary.Could they one day have to lessen the number of beavers because they are killing too many trees?
Wow Ron in this chapter shows he can still surprise(other than posting on Monday) two things I didn't see coming I'll get to that in a minute. One thing I liked a lot was we got see the better side of a few of these characters when they went to clean and do yard work on Mrs. Bowen's house.I always thought Seth was good guy who just made some bad decisions in bad situations .Craig I wasn't so sure about but he is showing more how he really is now that he doesn't think he has to act to the image of a jock.
The two surprises of course is Blake and Ty we did get a little bit of a clue in a previous chapter when Seth said in his words Blake and Ty at the lunch table talking like they were old friends.The second surprise of course is Seth seeing his Dad Of course we figured he would show eventually but not like this.One reason I speculated why Seth dad stayed away was because Julie hired a lawyer and Jim couldn't afford to fight it but according to Seth he lives in a better neighborhood then they do. So which direction will this reunion take? Will it be a tearful happy reunion or will Seth get angry and say something like why "Why did you leave me with these two monsters???"
IMO it wasn't as confusing as @Geemeedee made it out to be as I was able to see as the story went along the motivation and reasons why the bad guys kidnapped Derek Dad. But I also concur that it could have been set up better and about his point about more of an emotional response from the characters still all in all a good chapter.
One small itty bitty thing thats no big deal but Derek referred to Molly Hatchet as Country Rock I have always classified them as Southern Rock like Lynyrd Skynyrd I don't remember any country elements in their songs but perhaps more recently they have done that
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