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When they first went to get Kenny and told him to get his stuff from his locker I thought uh-oh is he going to another school? I think we see another side of Billy in this chapter. I see a little of a contradiction though Diego honestly wasn't prepared for that situation. His trust of Billy has been up and down more than a stripper's backside. If Diego still have some doubt in the back of his mine maybe he shouldn't do this. I do see one thing while Billy has made sure he is NOT his Father does he know some of the same people?
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I'm thinking Steve should start learning Spanish also(Especially after what they did in this chapter)
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Another House Visit, A Minor Issue, and Moving Days
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Another House Visit, A Minor Issue, and Moving Days
I know what you're doing you're trying to get us to tell stories on this topic .Well I have one. When he was about 13 my Mom caught my older brother doing that (And YES!! it was my older brother) She said she was going to tell Dad about the "dirty" thing he did. Later at the dinner table (Funny my brother did the "dirty thing" yet my Mom thought the dinner table was a proper place to discuss it) When she told Dad ___ was playing with his thing he replied "So what? It's his thing isn't it? (that could have been interpreted a couple of ways) -
Another House Visit, A Minor Issue, and Moving Days
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Another House Visit, A Minor Issue, and Moving Days
Except for Sal's activity a calm chapter. But the next chapter? After 29 chapter we meet new characters? I'm guessing won't be dull but will it be good or bad?- 21 comments
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Another House Visit, A Minor Issue, and Moving Days
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Another House Visit, A Minor Issue, and Moving Days
Why would I not be surprised if Dom and Jiho already know about that.- 21 comments
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Interesting insight in River's life and what he does. It was mentioned late in I Hate This Town that Alec really didn't think of River's friends as his own (Until he had epiphany) but here he seems to be interacting with August just fine. BTW August being in a band is it good for him to appear in River's productions. It sounds like this is River's private site he didn't mention being on OnlyFans or a site like that. I know he isn't on Chaturbate I looked and........"cough, cough" I"M KIDDING HA,HA,HA,
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Chapter 167 The Cat's Whiskers
weinerdog commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 167 The Cat's Whiskers
If Nathan doesn't call or is incommunicado when he's in a show in the same town and same school as Robbie what do you think is going to happen when Nathan is out of town filming an actual movie? Combine that with one of Robbie's thoughts "something I was more than willing to do for another opportunity to stuff my manhood between Nathan’s wobbly buns and pretend it was Rory." Oh yeah Robbie and Rory WILL cross the line -
Hate what Zack is going through.WTF with Adam? Going out of his way to do that? What a POS
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A New Home and Two Moves
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in A New Home and Two Moves
This probably won't be a problem but the only people who may not like this would be Colton's parents although I have to believe he spoke with them beforehand. You also have to worry about Patty's condition I can picture her unintentionally saying something offensive to Colton's Mom. After Sal starts school with him being older what kind of friends will he make? Would he bring someone who's a bad influence -
I left an angry reaction although I'm not really that angry just annoyed at that busybody Karen next door.I hope she and the guy at the park don't know each other. I have an idea how to deal with her. Late some night when it's dark appear as Bigfoot to her. I would love to see how she would tell the authorities about seeing Bigfoot
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The only thing that was hard to believe is Jim's parents never knew he boxed even among the wealthy there are boxing fans you would think someone would have came up to Jim's dad and mentioned that they saw his son box. Otherwise it was an excellent take on a classic story
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What is not to like? A intriguing murder mystery and whodunit. Add to it Mother Nature making it more difficult along with how different cultures clash, communicating with animals and two soul mates crossing paths after years of seperation and you have ingredients for a great story when done right. Well this wasn't done right........It was done perfect
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As soon as the pup was mentioned I thought " A connection to Kane?" But to find out it IS! actually Kane...even better .Thank you.
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Jimmy/Joe seems to believe he will box just as good in Jimmy's body as he did when he was Joe. But while Jimmy can work out and build himself up bodies have different athletic abilities perhaps Jimmy's body lacks some of those.
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Although the Judge hates Billy if he see the recording he will know act or not Bryan asked legitimate questions .And when Calvin stated to say “Fucking fa--” I think THAT should disqualify Calvin right there. But you mentioned the next two chapters so I expect the Judge will do something dicky and they will be more hurdles
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The only part I don't get is Burke said he was friends with Micco's Mom and Dad in school didn't Burke sense there was something off about Micco's Dad then? He did mentioned drugs but you can have a drug problem and have some goodness in you this guy was a total POS. That letter from Sam was good for Micco to read. Where and when did they find it? Was the letter the reason why Calhoun stopped thinking of Micco as a suspect?
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Adam said "Wish me luck" So Good luck Adam
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I'm glad to see this story continuing.It has been suggested that maybe the companion is the reason why Charlie is acting the way he is. Why is Father involved with this?
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River is at a place where he has determined some thing have to change so it seems like Kenji came along at the right time. So it seems like Kenji as the other comments have mentioned is either the owner of that place or is some big time mover and shaker perhaps even some kind of mob???? I bet Kenji spotted River from his room on the second floor (or perhaps his sister) It wouldn't surprise me if Kenji had someone tail August and River home.could the next thing be Kenji knocking on Rivers door? River painted his walls black in an APARTMENT????? wow there is going to be a huge bill the day he moves out of it
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Goodbye Denial, Hello Acceptance
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Goodbye Denial, Hello Acceptance
Very productive meeting with the doctor. Happy for Colton and Dylan. I Liked the line "Get a room but sell tickets" It good that Dom has an older brother type relative in Sal. Can you believe it I actually had a semblance of a life yesterday and was too busy to read anything on GA. That means @kboisis going to give me 50 lashes for being late -
Goodbye Denial, Hello Acceptance
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Goodbye Denial, Hello Acceptance
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There really isn't anything I can say without giving anything huge away except to say it is worth reading and it will be explained in a chapter comment following this story but you have to read it first
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The kid is obviously intelligent and I think anybody his age would come to the same conclusions he has come to. I can imagine what has happened to him I'm thinking he's a victim who is being treated as an offender. I guess Hardin will have an idea on how to help but it is going to be uphill the whole way. BTW do we know the kid's name yet? I looked though the chapter again and didn't find it
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Louella is still a Karen but I have to admit if I was a city clerk I would probably check up on some people who gave me a bad vibe it still would not be right but maybe I would do that. JTT and al those others they mentioned🤔 Could you give me the number of that Shaman by any chance😄 JTT should expect a letter from Louella asking what he was doing at a certain address on a certain day
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Explanation, Compromise, and Love
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Explanation, Compromise, and Love
Oh yeah a lot of people I know refer to Dr. Goggle When I first saw the word bradyphrenia I thought it might have something to do with playing against Tom Brady
