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  1. weinerdog

    Sneak Away 4

    I love how you describe something like touching bare feet so stimulating. Wouldn't it be something if Micheal got rid of Stephanie on behalf of Seth. So Seth wants to go somewhere more private with Adler? Nothing could go wrong there like perhaps Steven's parents finding them...nah of course not
  2. 1888: So who did the protagonist really want Monica or Marty? 1988: Did you base that on me? Thats when I got my first CD player. The other stuff sort of resemble me also 2088: Sorry can't comment on that one without breaking some political guideline Great stuff
  3. They already had a prosecutor ready? Sounds like the Keystone Kops already found Roy guilty. Now that they know Roy's Mother is a defense attorney the next time someone tries to frame Roy maybe the police will actually do their job right I am purely guessing here but one of the two players in trouble is the kicker. You don't have to be huge to be kicker maybe Cory has some ability to do that
  4. If you are familiar with the Charlie Boone series then you will love this if you are not nothing I say here will make sense this is one series you absolutely have to read from the beginning it will be worth it happy reading. Back to the readers who are familiar with the series this particular story has one thing missing that the other stories have but you will find that it is appropriate in this case.Although your imagination on what's coming next might serve to have the same effect. Something long overdue happens in this one I can't say more without giving anything away so get to it.
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    Chapter 6

    I heard of all of those except the melted chocolate and marshmallows Well that will be enough for me what is everybody else going to have?
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    Chapter 6

    I'm with @drpaladin it was about time the parents knew about all this and it only made sense that they had some Skwish also this makes a Christmas to never forget. And what is it that Uncle Ken can do? My name is Ken.I have a nephew named Charlie ...am I Uncle Ken? So Nicholass showed the parents movies of all of Charlie's and Kip's adventures. I wonder if he released it to the the theaters.Perhaps that's how he keeps the shop running. You wrote all these adventures Geron has Nicholass cut you in on the profits?
  7. weinerdog

    Chapter 6

    Or pineapelle or olives but everything else though I'm game....well within reason
  8. While I loved the chapter I couldn't help but leave a sad reaction after what Dennis has been through. I sort of figured that this is where this was going. Adam and Dennis have something in common so it sounds like a good match.I guess Dennis is too young to get a prosthesis
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    Chapter 5

    I always considered Pacha the most awesome of the group but the pathways Nicholaas made which impressed Pacha makes me think perhaps Nicholaas is the most awesome. I assume we are going to follow them to the party Horace is going to be there right? You omitted one huge thing you didn't leave a takeout number for Otherworld Pizza surely they have to have some deal with DoorDash right? If not I'm sure they can hire Kippy to teleport the pizzas.Although I will need to be tutored on all the toppings they offer
  10. Just a guess too soon to tell I have it in the back of my head that they will have to go to Saturina
  11. weinerdog

    Chapter 4

    Of course you meant you were playing cards right?
  12. Stay safe
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    Chapter 4

    More surprises in store for the next chapter can't wait. Pretty clever Having an elf named Maxine.......🤔 What's the female version of the name Geron?
  14. Toto I don't think we're in Florida anymore but we are in Kansas
  15. weinerdog

    Entry 33

    One possibility maybe Ross was hard that could have stopped me
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    Chapter 3

    365 steps? Is that one for every day of the year? If I had to climb those every time I want to visit I would say "You're a great buddy and I love you but 365 steps?......uh Rick looked briefly embarrassed. "Well, Charlie and Kip can't have all the good lines!" Rick you're going to have to talk to @Geron Kees about that.
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    Chapter 3

    Maybe they arrived just in the nick of time
  18. Didn't even get his side of the story
  19. It's a good thing Roy had Cody record everything those airheads (That's being kind) weren't even smart enough to notice Cody recording. Too soon to tell but I suspect the police may be biased against Roy.At least the head coach seems to have the right attitude. Cody may be officially the team manager but the coach might unofficially use him as an offensive coordinator
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    Chapter 2

    Perhaps it was because Mary Lou was leaving the nest but other then that factor it looks like the Mom and Dad are on shaky ground with each other. Also the girls and the guys doing everything separate seemed odd. A Merry Christmas to you and yours @CLJobe and to all the readers
  21. weinerdog

    Chapter 1

    Pleasant surprise on Christmas day. Excellent story. You would think being a HS principal and somewhat familiar with teenagers that Greg would have realized he was monopolizing Chip's time but thankfully it all worked out
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    Chapter 2

    So Mildred is not from this Earth? I'm beginning to get it now @Geron Kees is not from this Earth either. Where he's from he's a best selling author.Every idea for a new story he gets he tries it out on us GA readers first and if it's a positive response he goes back and publishes it. I bet Browbeat is his pet.
  23. Great update. Just think how different things would be for them good and bad if the pandemic hadn't happened
  24. weinerdog

    Chapter 1

    The guys forgot one thing to consider perhaps. They should have a generator outside the house because in a blackout Lugh will have the house with power but not the garage.Also they may have to explain why their house is lit during a blackout unless I'm missing something obvious
  25. weinerdog

    Chapter 1

    I'm about to start reading the story but I see the title and I think if someone gave me a partridge in a pear tree what the hell would I do with? Not to mention the French hens ugh having to clean up after them okay on to the story
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