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    IMO it wasn't as confusing as @Geemeedee made it out to be as I was able to see as the story went along the motivation and reasons why the bad guys kidnapped Derek Dad. But I also concur that it could have been set up better and about his point about more of an emotional response from the characters still all in all a good chapter. One small itty bitty thing thats no big deal but Derek referred to Molly Hatchet as Country Rock I have always classified them as Southern Rock like Lynyrd Skynyrd I don't remember any country elements in their songs but perhaps more recently they have done that .
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    Chapter 8

    weinerdog commented on kbois's story chapter in Chapter 8

    How do you think he knew to do that?
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    Chapter 8

    weinerdog commented on kbois's story chapter in Chapter 8

    They can still be business partners but one complication about staying long term is what if Vann asks Caleb to stay in Montana
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    Chapter 8

    weinerdog commented on kbois's story chapter in Chapter 8

    I resent you calling us in the korner hooligans OW!!!! Something thrown just hit me I'm going to find out who it is bye
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    Chapter 8

    weinerdog commented on kbois's story chapter in Chapter 8

    That won't work after awhile you would pay them to take me back
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    Chapter 8

    weinerdog commented on kbois's story chapter in Chapter 8

    So glad I amuse you
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    Chapter 8

    weinerdog commented on kbois's story chapter in Chapter 8

    OK what twisted roadblocks are you planning for them. I have a guess(probably wrong) they will cross paths with the kidnappers Asa heared about on the podcast
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    Chapter 8

    weinerdog commented on kbois's story chapter in Chapter 8

    Excellent chapter .Very good to see Corbin again. The mating was so descriptive I could hear the boink ba ba boink music my head
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    Chapter 8

    weinerdog commented on kbois's story chapter in Chapter 8

    While you get to blame T-Mobil I don't I see
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    Chapter 8

    weinerdog commented on kbois's story chapter in Chapter 8

    Well WHO'S fault is that hmm? Certainly can't be the author nooooooooo!
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    Chapter 8

    weinerdog commented on kbois's story chapter in Chapter 8

    Hola I'm on the smartphone which is smarter then me so God knows what I'll post so in a little while
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    Chapter 224

    weinerdog commented on CLJobe's story chapter in Chapter 224

    Things are transitioning (is that a word?) I sort of forgot James is only a little younger than Armand and Colin. Speaking of replacing whenever Armand finally joins GG will Armand speak to anybody like GG does to him in his sleep? And who would it be? Tommy perhaps
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    And don't forget while enjoying that to all sit around BAREFOOT
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    Are you happy now @CincyKris
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    Now what can she possibly miss editing your chapter while ogling the cabana b.....what was I thinking? Forget I said anything
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    Are you telling me if there was a cabana boy in your field of vision you wouldn't be ogling? Besides I think @Mrsgnomie could write some very interesting stuff under the influence of that
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    If I Had One Wish

    weinerdog commented on astone2292's story chapter in If I Had One Wish

    I think my friend came across the same genie. He wished for his unit to touch the ground......his legs fell off.
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    What you said there would make sense if you were twins but this is schizophrenic
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    @kbois beat me by 2 seconds to bad I had a good one ready. Notice how she's not happy with just page 1 it has to be page one AND two
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    Loved everybody's part in the chapter. Well everything seems to be going smoothly and they are about to tell the kids.Something is nagging at me that it's going too smoothly. My guess? Kyan parents will enter the picture and do God knows what.
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    Oh yeah?........The story is good. That's story related right?
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    Where's @spyke he was so anxious for the chapter to be posted
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    Chapter 8

    weinerdog commented on Libby Drew's story chapter in Chapter 8

    This chapter gave a good reason why someone wanted to kill Sam but to do it in a way that makes Micco look guilty that is still up in the air. You can feel the tension between Chase and Micco.
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    Chapter 1

    weinerdog commented on chris191070's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Goes to show all that time wasted because the brother didn't communicate.But thankfully that resolved before it was too late.BTW in the real world some yahoo would have leaked the winner
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