weinerdog
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You have have to say this about the boys both older and younger they hae made the most of their opportunities visiting these places
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Well here I am Its really late out here in Cali but I had to start this before retiring for the night love what I'm reading so far
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You like mysteries? Then you have come to the right place. If I talk about the story too much I will give something away except this story will have everything you want .Told in the style of a unique and talented author.You're going to have a blast
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Jace,Lucas and Macy never have three people needed each other more and they are perfect for each other.Like other I can see a story centered around a older Macy. Thank you so much for two things .One this incredible story. And two?You have helped me decide what to do next. What's that you ask? Why going to read Great Restorations of course
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Along with hearing Jace's back story there are a couple of other questions I hope gets addressed .Why didn't Jase and (not so)Swift ability affect Lucas and also how was Martinez able to overcome Swift's command
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@Libby Drew is aware of the Korner Krew? Hope we don't warp her too bad
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On to read chap 19 so I'll take my wild stab before I read it.Macy somehow prevents Swift killing Lucas.
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Interesting all this time Jace assumed he was working for good and he might very well be doing that but those questions he asked himself about Christian and Harry Karns if they had gone on to do evil OMG. One would think Jase would want to do do some google search to see how the the people he healed turned out. Did something prevent him from thinking about that?
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Oh my.You gave a hint things might turn out well in the end but not without a lot of drama before that
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It's sad and dissapointing that dad said something like that to begin with
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I have the same question @scrubber6620had why can't Jace heal himself🤔 It seems like all these stories about people with supernatural abilities have these annoying rules.People who are called on to do what Jace does have the ability to heal people....except for themselves of course
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"Unless you hit Master Bait and Tackle Shop. Their T-shirts are worth their weight in gold on eBay.” I'm not kidding I have a step brother who lives in Ft Myers Beach and he sent me one of those t-shirts for my birthday. Excuse me while I go on eBay.
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Simple deduction if there isn't a clue in the stuff Lucas and Jace brought back with them then this chapter would have been pointless and you don't write pointless chapters
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One thought what an incompetent security staff the hospital had.
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So many theories expressed and every single one of them plausible .Thats the sign of a good mystery
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If Macy was taken against her will there are two possibilities It somehow has something to do with Martinez car or Connie looked at Lucas recent assignments and noticed Lucas never returned the keys to the condo and put two and two together
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Adding one more thing to speculation about Swift if he were really a detective assigned to this case he would have had more of an objection to Jase presence
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Intellectually we all know this will happen again and again but it still hurts deeply especially when its such a gentle soul like @Mawgrim
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Every thought I had has been covered in the chapter comments.What @raven1 said is a concern but Jase has been at this for awhile and after that talk with Philip he's aware of that possibility so I'm guessing he has found ways to counteract that. Only one flaw in this chapter Jace went to Starbuck and only had a bill of $4.16?Even in 2007 that was almost impossible to do😄
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Remember the slogan "Must see TV"? Chapter nine will be "Must read GA" I'm going to get slightly off topic here when Lucas said “On the lam? Really?” Lucas arched his eyebrow at the tiny pair of sparkly jeans Jase had picked. “Do people still say that?” I reminded of a recent local story on the news about about a person who been going on farm and how should I put this? Diddleing the sheep.A couple of nights after I saw that one of the late night one of the late night comedians(I forget which one) referred to that story and "Police haven't found him yet he's taking it on the lam" Sorry I thought this would be a good place to share that
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On one hand thats an excellent question on the other hand if that would be the case perhaps Jace would stop trying to save Macy(maybe not)This tells me Jace expects to move on.
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Was there any explanation why Waynes mom never told the dad about him?
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I was thinking the same thing @Daddydavekwas thinking that the boys were in love but your response implies something else.BTW I'm in th USA like yourself can you imagine that.
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The main reason I'm writing this review is so this story will get the 5 stars it deserves although I'm confident others will follow. There isn't much I can say about this story without being redundant about what I reviewed about his other stories what I wrote about those apply here it has all the elements a great @Ronyxstory has and of course that can only be a good thing. I will say in this story there are two supporting characters who are exceptional even by Ron's high standards( I won't do a spoiler and say who)
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We found out the reason why Dion stole food from the cafeteria. I liked Mr Marshall as a character I but I felt after finding out why Dion took the pieces of fruit he should have just let it go but then again if he hadn't given Dion detention he probably doesn't get interested in James. I'm so glad Mr Wilbur was at the barbecue. As good as all the characters were Mr Wilbur was the star of the story I hope I'm not out of line for mentioning this Ron has this on his Facebook page but there is a brand new story coming soon (he didn't say when) I can't wait😀
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