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GA must have been a different site back when this story first appeared it certainly deserved more attention then it initially got. I suspect after your more recent efforts gradually more people will see this story. I'll add another 5 star review to the mix BTW I think TV show about Drew and Quent PI business would e a hit.

Very well written I was in suspense and considered every possible outcome even the ones we didn't want to happen. I guess after this turn of events Rob has a job even Quent wouldn't fire him after this. But then again he is Quent

I'm not so sure it looks like she's going to out Drew and Cale to save her ass

Sarah was a crack-up this chapter

So what else is new?

Well you reminded me of how ignorant I am I didn't realize O negative and O positive blood are compatible .While I'm asking stupid questions can only Lycan's donate blood to Thad? Or can they also take human blood. The Doctor mentioning the staff taking up more bed spaces then actual patients got me thinking what if this happened during the height of co-vid when all the hospitals were overcrowded. Would Thad have made it? That would have been a big challenge for your writing ability. Alright. Get back to your manwich. Love ya, bud.” That line made me laugh😄 “Part of me wishes I wasn’t going back to school at the end of August. But I need to finish that. Hopefully Randy and Skyler are able to give each other what they need when I am gone.” .Well some readers wondered about that. This is just me and my quirky thinking but this chapter seemed to calm for me I now worry something huge will happen next chapter

Oh boy Adam has it bad for Ross more then he realizes if he's going to buy an R.E.M album just because Ross likes them.I remember in the U.S CD's had just started to take over I guess in the farm community no kid had a CD player yet. I suspect Ross has the same thing for Adam If was surprised while I was doing that certain activity Ross apparently was doing I would deflate very fast. Sounds like that wasn't the case with Ross was that because it was Adam who was at the door

Stuart would have been a perfect unsub for the show Criminal Minds

Rob surprised the hell out of me

Maybe Drew's conversation with Rob followed by the word association game was meant so Rob would call Stuart

Too many chapters left for Dr.Cobb to be revealed as the killer IMHO

Drew was amazed that Quent was elected but he keeps getting re-elected apparently

How does everybody hating Cale's father figure in this?

Hiring Rob back?Wow good help is really hard to find in this town.

"Oh my, nipples. It’s been a long time since I’ve seen nipples.” Now THAT was an unusual thing to say especially when a stranger he never met is there. Judging by by what Adam wrote in his diary he was self concious about being shirtless although he didn't have a problem going swimming the day before.Adam wondered if Ross was staring at his chest. If he was I say be complimented but I do get Adam struggle with his identity might complicate this We don't know yet if Ross is just visiting or if there is a family situation that has caused him to move there. If Ross is just visiting he might be the right person for Adam to explore things with there would not be the awkwardness that could happen if it was someone he went to school with.

You paint a very vivid picture of how beautiful the surroundings were.The youngest part of my childhood was in the New England area but most of it was in a city but I remember places such as you described though not quite as pretty as this. I'm assuming this was based on your actual experience if so I was so sadden to hear that house burned down. So your Grandfather made his own bourbon? Hmmmm

Being a closeted (at the moment) gay and having hot friends that can be difficult. Walkman? It's been awhile since I heard that.The day is coming soon that you're going to have to explain what that is. I wonder what percentage of Adam's country (sounds like. It's in GB) and the U.S. still know what an eight-track is

Somehow I think it will be more then babysitting

You had me second guessing myself It wouldn't have been the first time I forgot a character's name. The fact that YOU!!! forgot your own character tells me we may not hear much about Seth in future chapters. We will hear about him right?...I'm in California right?...Biden is still President right? OK I'll stop being an smartass😄

So turning Randy🤔 All indications say it should be no problem but of course it's always a risk.Forgive me if this is a ignorant question I haven't read all that many wolf-shifter stories but would Randy be obligated NOT to tell his immediate family. Since Trevor will be leaving for school it's hard hard not to see something happening with Randy and Skylar. Thad is the priority now of course but when will we get an update with Seth? I'm still worried he might not be able to walk

Adam says he's getting sarcastic in other words being a teenager

Well since there are 12 more chapters there is some unfinished busines

Only I can do this I meant this for another chapter

Well if he was going to kill Cale he had to be successful,Since he wasn't the brainstorming between the three led to the answering machine(do people still use those🤔) I wonder if the killer is smart enough to know that they might have been able to figure that out

"I’m sure your inflatable doll won’t mind waiting." Out of all the great lines in this story that is by far my favorite (at the moment) 😄