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That's a heck of an idea to have Gavin crossover into the other story. You mentioned Preston and the team appearing again and I'm betting Jacob speaking to them will be a big reason for that. Just think if Jacob's Dad wasn't an abusive A___HOLE quite possibly none of this happens.It's more then just a child being abused which is horrible enough but also the lingering effect it continues to have in the aftermath

Just found and started reading this story .Love what I'm reading so far.It's getting late where I am so I'll stop here for now. Petrified scat? That's not the same as being scared shitless is it? I know lame but its what my weird brain thought of

Think of the most heartwarming Christmas stories we grew up with reading or watching on TV and this story has all that .Well except for two cute 14 year old boys experiencing their first time what more could a GA reader want

I would have been more persistent If was Aric but Blake had a point and he would ave never known if he didn't try to talk to his folks.When people ask them what were their favorite Christmas the answer would be easy only they probably couldn't give much details😄 Outstanding story.On one hand you would hope Aric's Grandparent would come around but if not doing so would mean he would not go with his parents when they visit that means more alone time with Blake .So if I was Aric I would wait until I was 18 to forgive his grandparents😄

Wow you got 3 excellent stories going on at the same time when you get a good idea you don't mess around do you? My first reactions Nathan has a good family I do think he should look into anger management. I'm undecided on Corey if he DID know about Nathan's mother then that was the worst comment he could have said. Perhaps that's why Corey was so apologetic. I have a feeling Corey only acted like that because he was with his jock friends

I didn't know school kids over there was familiar with American Thanksgiving.Other countries seem to now more about the U.S. then Americans know about other countries.I do know there is a Canadian Thanksgiving celebrated on a different day.One day I'll check the story behind theirs It's too bad Ross parents are having financial problems and I'm sure Adam wants that to become better but if it doesn't that probably mean Ross stays where he's at right now. So it's one of those good and bad

This felt like another Calm before the storm type chapter🤞When Wade said "Trevor avoided hanging out with you and your friends early on because we don’t even get a buzz from alcohol.” For me If I was asked to turn that would be a hugh selling point for other people I know they would react "No buzz? Then what's the point of drinking?" That bitch (The one who's name begins with a C I refuse to call her by her name now) in addition to her other horrible qualities lacks common sense.She saw how her rant against Seth caused her break-up with Trevor so why repeat that same type of rant in front of someone else? You would think that she would know that does not play well. I can think of two possibilities one she always hung around like minded people and has always gotten away with this or perhaps she mentally ill maybe something happened to her to help cause these irrational over reactions

That's great to hear. Just in case you misunderstood I was asking about the Salvaging The Road to Redemption story. That one is every bit as good as this one is

You are so good at finding words for your characters to describe what they are thinking at any given time but especially when they have a crush on somebody. Here's what we know Steven assumed Seth and Alder didn't know each other so he introduced them and Seth said they had no classes together and no common friends except for Steven. So how does Alder know Seth name? At the very least he would have had to asked someone what's this kid name is so at the very least Alder have some interest In Seth.This is a time where a close friend would have been useful to point that out to Seth but then we wouldn't have this great story😄 This is like 3 or 4 stories I'm reading now that has a character named Seth in it. In fact there's a new story that has just begun to post by Ronyx named "Seth". Imagine that two new stories by two excellent authors starting at almost the same time. If you can OD on reading excellent stories this would be it

Not be greedy but when is the next chapter of the Redemption story?

He might want that to be Andre but hasn't come to terms with that yet

If seems to me school administrators have a different take on reality then the students and most of the faculty and most of the time it was wacked. This extends to when I became an adult (at least age wise) and I would see them be interviewed on the TV news and I would walk away thinking 'What planet do you live on?". Dr Davis would be a good example of this while Dr. Vu was the exception.Dr. Davis playing amateur psychologist throws out this Stockholm syndrome crap when she obviously didn't know enough about this situation to make that kind of assessment.She also seemed more worried about the optics of the situation "What will the parents thinks" all to typical of people in her position.Thankfully Tyler's eloquent and heart felt speech help cause the right thing to happen. It still says "In process" instead of complete on the story page so that's encouraging .I still think there is some story still left to write here. One thing I would like to see when this story does end I hope the author finds somebody for Travis he deserves it

Now THAT would be a reason to hate @Jeff Burton

I knew realistically Luke probably wasn't going to be able to go to Georgia with Jackson but the romantic in me wants it to happen.Maybe it still can someway🤞 When Luke said “I needed a place like this.” and Jackson said “For what?” I would have said DUH!!!!! To get away from Cinzilla BTW do you think Cinzilla is capable of planting a phony rejection letter for Luke to find?🤔.......I'm only half kidding

What kind of scoring system do these matches have where they won 17and lost 11 but still wasn't sure they won the competition. Is Rafe going to have to keep his guard up 24/7?

I love all of your comments, and your debates I'm almost done with Chapter 4, it'll be posted tomorrow. I did something though dont hate me. Ooooooooh boy!!!!😲 But whatever it is things like that is what makes a story great

That certainly explains Justin Bieber doesn't it

I'll say it again that is an incredible group of friends( I didn't say awesome this time @Summerabbacat 😄) true Jacob revealed what his father done to him and even the angriest person would have to take that in consideration but even before Jacob said that it looked like the friends were willing to listen I attribute that to Tyler's influence to give Jacob a chance. One person whose judgement I question is Dee Jacob's mom in chapter one it was said she thought things between Jacob and Tyler were like they always had been .Surely she must have noticed Tyler hadn't been over their house for awhile and there had to be some kind of change in Jacob's behavior at home I don't how busy her life is but she should have noticed.I wonder if her ex husband damaged her also? The sort of cliffhanger said "my next challenge ...The School" is he referring to the reaction to the incident or everyone at School finding out about him being gay along with Travis

Jonathan confronting Adam would have meant nothing at all to Adam if it wasn't in front of Ross he wants Ross to think of him as a certain kind of guy and you just can't keep that up.

Life is good another Ronyx story😀. My initial observations. We find out right away what a self centered piece of work Seth sister is and the scenes where they are all together with their Mom the Mom seems to ignore Seth for the most part in favor of interacting with Stacy the and seems to side with her I wonder if she's aware that she's doing that? Early indication are Craig is going to try to get some off of Seth.He was somewhat verbally abusive to Stacy (Although it seems like she might deserve it) One guess to that could be she doesn't put out and if that's the case I see Craig getting frustrated and now that he know Seth is gay and their Mom works long hours and is gone most of the day well you can guess what I'm getting at.It would a classic s--t hitting the fan Stacy finding out her twin brother who she doesn't know is gay having some kind of sex with her BF.I'm afraid Craig might physically force himself on Seth . It sounds like Craig is going to be out of hospital pretty soon so at least in the short term Seth won't be seeing that other boy after Craig is discharged Seth didn't mention anything about seeing him around school.But a good part of the chapter was spent describing the boy so we'll probably see him in a future chapter. I can already tell this is going to be good

When I read “my parents took it way better than I thought. My friends too. I kept it to myself because of fear. You know the horror stories that are out there. I feel lucky and relieved to have the support I do. Because if I didn’t I don’t know what I would do, and we probably wouldn’t be sitting here right now.” I Immediately thought that it might have been totally opposite for Jacob and could be a contributing factor on why Jacob is like he is. Couldn't help but notice Jacob's Dad wasn't at court and there has been no mention of him at all are they divorced? Did he die? Is he in prison? I suspect something going to be revealed here. I hope Jacob gets Gavin as his therapist in the counseling sessions. Couldn't help but smile at how awesome Tyler's friends are, and Travis needless to say was a big surprise nobody deserves that more then Tyler

So that determines when your chapter ends?🤔 Well it's a good thing you don't have my sister-in-law as one of your characters your chapters would never end then.

I bet family gatherings like Thanksgiving for example must be fun huh?

@Salerion if he DIDN"T make that the cliffy I would be worried. After devoting an entire chapter to this I would be surprised Randy didn't eventually accept but with this author you never know. One thing Randy should do is speak with Ethan to ask him about if turning did anything to change the dynamic with his human family since I only read one other of this authors story and it wasn't a wolf story I don't know if that aspect of it was discussed when Ethan turned

Gus figured out Ben situation very quick and Ben saw the look on Gus face after Gus" said you aren't a throwaway" combine that with Dylan's statement “I understand dude. Don’t be a stranger though. Me, my brother, even Josh, hell especially Josh knows about having a long answer to certain questions.” Tell me they all have had experiences similar to Ben. To early to guess but I think they are going to tell Ben to stay in school