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In addition to the client Chet sounds like a dumb ass also as the boss isn't he suppose to be reachable?Of course not if they can't reach him then he can't be blamed for telling them to do wrong thing can he? Judging by your story synopsis Damon has just returned to town and hasn't seen Cole yet but they both seem to go to McGee's and know the owner Tommy so do I sense a reunion here?If they do I hope Scott from the last chapter shows up and gets Damon ticked off enough to show some of his military training.

You got to be kidding me really?I can't wait It's not even close Bruce is the most evil character you ever written. That Motel Tom mentioned I'm guessing too much time has passed for there to be any security video available.I'm hoping Bruce messed up once and paid with a credit card.

The moment I saw Franklin's name in the the chapter even before the dialog explaining everything I went 'You got to be kidding me" It wasn't said but when J.J. told Rob the news I hope he said to tell the family to keep it between themselves because the way I see it all the possible legal issues they may have to keep things Status quo for awhile.I wonder if one day he will go by David Walters I guess that's who he legally is. I'm not 100% clear but from what I understand Franklin has figured it out but parents haven't yet that is going to be an interesting scene

A couple of thoughts Leo lost two Jobs in a relatively short amount of time is there something hinky about that? I picture Jake and Sammy while shoveling knocking on a house door where the resident recognizes them from their online content could be dangerous. I like the other readers is curious about the young women with Billy's dad.Maybe with Sammy's camera they can get some video of them.A principle with a women like that would not look good but I don't think Sammy and Jake would do extortion

Theres a shield law for rape victims but as far as I know there isn't for for the kind of extortion Bruce did to Tom is there a way to protect him if he cooperates?

Since the school board would be bringing the suit they would have to prove the article is inaccurate how would they go about doing that? It's a great sign that AM apologized to Stephen

Or another senior moment? Kidding😄

On the surface I also think it suspicious that Tom got a job at a all girls school but the above comment makes me wonder if Tom wants to use his influence as a teacher to warn girls of what to look out for.

It's already good can't wait to see how things go when Damon shows up.After he gets done tripping out over meeting Micah that is.

Make no mistake all those people attended the funeral because J.J. has made quite an impression on them and I think they also know he will be in the Forbes 200 soon.Just the same might want to be careful with his words when he speaks at the funeral and not reveal too much about his past while speaking about Jerry. It's a no brainer he has to meet his parents and his brother. I don't know what is going to happen but this would be a good place to see Shaun in the story again

OK I might as well add my two points.If Ridley still resists Gabe might have go to a full court press he will prevail but it might go into overtime

Normally I would say their Mom is quite naive but being a single who's working her ass off and her few spare moments are spent watching TV instead of the internet that's what people did before the internet so I can see her being unaware of what Sammy and Jake may be doing if she had spent her time online instead of TV she might have though of the possibility. Having said all that if they end up making a thousand plus or so a month that will raise a red flag.This may not happen in the story but what I would worry about is Leo showing them a way to fraudulently access the money on the credit card or somehow divert it to somewhere else to cover how much they are really making.I'm probably wrong but that is in the back of my mind.

Ridley is a very complicated person he kisses someone twice in one night something he's never done before and then wants nothing to do with the same person don't know what to think about that🤔 Well obviously Ridley and James are going to connect again otherwise the story ends here but Ridley seems to be really stubborn so while I don't know what is going to happen somebody will have to influence Ridley into making the first move or being receptive to move Gabe may make.Maybe his Father?

Interesting that Noah said Lillith reminds him of a friend.I can see Lil and Lia planning something together for the new couple. To me it sounded like Noah had a bad family situation but apparently has a decent relationship with his Mom if they were meeting for brunch

Noah and Seth are both just odd enough and have enough personal issues to be good for each other if that makes sense.

This is a strange time for me to be discovering a story just as it been completed, well the first chapter has piqued my interest I'll be checking in every so often

With the possible exception of Larry this was the first major loss in J.J.life. That talk about trying to take of their dad after a stroke was very accurate I had to take care of my step-dad for 3 years under those conditions. In California I think it has to be all electric cars by 2030 I suspect they won't be able to do that. I haven't been getting notifications either so until they fix this will your next chapter be on Friday like it usually is? I only find out about the chapters because I follow @chris191070and see his comments.You have a new duty Chris keep commenting so I know there is a new chapter 😄

It will make itself clear I forget when that part happens but it will hang in there

Well the way that happened at the end was unexpected because even in his private thoughts Ridley gave no indication of having any interest in Gabe or even if Gabe is gay perhaps Ridley was overcome by the gesture which was an awesome gesture on Gabe's part. What was in the article hasn't been revealed yet but judging by Matt seeming to want to say more to Ridley before they were interrupted one has to guess Gabe wrote that Ridley tried out for basketball because of his dad.Uh oh I hope something doesn't hit the fan.

it sounds like eventually whatever they plan to would have to involve Neil's help.Neil doesn't care for much of his family save for his younger sister but does he have it in him to turn on family?If he does he could be marked man.On the other hand Neil probably hates this porn stuff he does this could be his way out.

With all due respect to the other reviewer I felt this was better then 3 stars.I'm giving it 5 stars but I really think it's more like 4+ stars but I give 5 because someone looking for a story to read will see 4 stars next to it. I Think this story deserves to be read

I just jumped into the story when I saw that it was posted bur after Aric described Blake I just had to stop reading for a moment and go to the story page to see the picture of Blake and I'll say this Aric was sure accurate in his description. As far as the situation Blake is in Aric said he has seen him for about two weeks so it was the holiday season and Blake still looks clean despite wearing the same clothes.That tells me he's been at some holiday homeless shelter and hasn't been on the streets too long.I mention this because that tells me Blake hasn't had to do the obvious things to survive yet so Aric's arrival might be perfect timing before Blake had to consider doing that. You had me thinking in many different directions including that Blake may really be an angel(could still be the case) excellent writing

Im my time wayyyyy back when, the adults never seemed to catch the bully it always seemed to be the one who decides to stand up to bully is when they take any action even after all these years with a more adult perspective it happened way to consistently to be a coincidence

J.J. got a raw deal growing up but since that time his run has been unbelievable he found two awesome families three counting Larry and Greg he had a hook-up in almost every town he has been in and he finds Franklin St Louis and then Brian and Franky and they all happen to live in New York. But now the author said it's going to be a rollercoaster ride and I'm guessing we will eventually meet his bio-family a lot to look forward to.

So Billy's dad the principle throws him out on regular intervals.Just think there are students at his school what have gotten thrown out of their homes and he's their Principle.Isn't that a scandal just waiting to happen. If their channel takes off and it sounds like it will then Mom will wonder where all this money on her card is coming from.What can they say to her? Uh your card has a incredible rewards program? They got to come up with something. Happy New Year to all