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Interesting cliffie I'll reserve comment until the next chapter on this figure. What does Pacha know about Amy? That trick Frit has about making sleepy people alert he could put Starbucks out of business
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Can Tim go to the Chief of Police? I would worry that the other police officers would close rank and protect Benny.So how does Tim go about this?
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I like a good mystery. Max said it ain't elves is that because elves are not bad or can't be thieves?
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I'm guessing what Kippy and Uncle Bob did in this chapter might come into play later in the story. I think I might have some friends with skwish when I hang out with them it's like they are thinking "It would be nice if he were somewhere else"and all of a sudden I am oh well at least I didn't have to take the bus
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Thank god Tim answered the phone and was there when Benny tried to pull a fast one.How far will these guys go to cover their ass?I think I know the answer to that and it makes me shutter
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Chapter 9 - Paw Patrol Returns
weinerdog commented on Arch Hunter's story chapter in Chapter 9 - Paw Patrol Returns
I might remember this wrong but Sean is the one Alex saw in the gym correct? Well is this is fascinating.I have a lot of questions which I'll assume you'll be answering in the future book.I'm curious why the Owen,Alex siblings and parents aren't all like that or are they? Great series -
Wow what a brutal way to go.But I won't shed any tears for George wait actually I will shed some tears.....CROCODILE TEARS!!! Get it? Hee Hee!...OK sorry about that.
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Yikes hearing the details of what Alan Farmer did its a miracle J.J. isn't a basket case
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Can testimony under hypnosis be used in court? Otherwise any case against Dr Stevens would be he said she said unless there is some daming evidence around like a piece of AM clothes or something. I'm dense so you have to spell it out for me is the guardian Angle to Aunt Clara Donnie?
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Remember the old show The Odd Couple?That sounds like Jake and Sammy especially the part about Sammy cleaning the mess. I'm convinced now after Mom losing her job that the boys are going to push the envelope further now.They might do what @scrubber6620 said. BTW judging by his last comment and his previous chapter comment he seems to know a lot about this HMMM🤔 I'm kidding😄
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This might be the biggest WOW!!!! chapter I ever read. Outstanding it kept me up really late reading Damn you C James LOL
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And the Sea shall give up its Dead
weinerdog commented on C James's story chapter in And the Sea shall give up its Dead
As did a lot of the readers I figured this was the case .Now the details as to why things went down this way I can't begin to speculate. I'm eagerly waiting to hear the details. With his Mom alive there is no point in killing Trevor if Bridget finds this out the hit would then be on her but then it would look more suspicious I'm all over the place I'll just see what happens -
And the Sea shall give up its Dead
weinerdog commented on C James's story chapter in And the Sea shall give up its Dead
As did a lot of the readers I figured this was the case .Now the details as to why things went down this way I can't begin to speculate. I'm eagerly waiting to hear the details. With his Mom alive there is no point in killing Trevor if Bridget finds this out the hit would then be on her but then it would look more suspicious -
Well Trey has convinced himself everything is going to be OK.And I suspect it is going to look like that for a few days but if everything is OK then the the story wound end now right?Lets brace ourselves for what's going to happen whatever that is.
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That description had me imagining it very vividly.There is no story if the others don't find out about this so it will be interesting to see how that happens. If Neils band moves up the music ladder and becomes super successful well he already knows who to hire as the group photographer
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Now that they have a possible name associated with AM rape is it in the Doctor's purview to ask AM to confirm the name?I don't know how that works out legally or otherwise. As soon as Tim informed the Doctor of the name the Doctor wanted to have a meeting with them makes me wonder if Bruce Stevens has been accused of other things
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One advantage I thought Trevor might have is his different hair color but Lisa said his hair looked brown in the yearbook picture online so does that cancel each other out?
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The best soap opera writers will probably borrow this from you wow.Tim being a lawyer looks like he's going to be busy again but maybe it should be some other lawyer handling it Tim might be too close to the situation. Three boys on one girl would not be viewed the way you described it in today's world. Are you saying that's what would have happened back then because of the small town mentality .
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I have except for about 5 years of my early childhood when I lived in Boston always liked I. A warm weather city so I can't relate to going to place like Hellzone in the cold I didn't even know places like that did that. If the Stoner recognized them you know others will I wonder what life will be like for them now.
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Chapter 8 - His Royal Musk
weinerdog commented on Arch Hunter's story chapter in Chapter 8 - His Royal Musk
Along the stuff that was mentioned in the above two comments I remember in book 1 there was a big cat in that one. Ian's father? -
Well a calm chapter Tim and Stephen needed some reasonable quiet time computers not withstanding. So while Dad has been allowed to visit AM I'm guessing the Doctor has told him not to discuss the incident that happened with AM. Not only should the Doctor be there when Mom visits AM but maybe the Doctor Mom is seeing should be there to advise her also
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So far sounds like a kick ass vacation even without their extra activities they do. J.J. might be really smart but he has to learn something when he spoke of that Mexican restaurant "Chipotle it wasn't" maybe it's different in the midwest but in San Diego where I live some of your hole in the wall Mexican restaurants are the best places to eat and yes J.J. better then Chipotle.
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Here is something I haven't seen anybody mention Bridget still thinks Trevor has blond hair so I'm sure Sanchez thinks that also so could Sanchez or whoever he gets to try to kill Trevor will make an attempt on Shane instead?
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While it is totally on the Mom for not telling Dad about AM rape he still was unaware of AM behavior and how she dressed he probably was also unaware of the bullying Tim and Donnie received he might chide himself for being too busy with work to know what was going on
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The one thing I keep seeing happening is Sammy might in a future YouTube vid might accidentally upload the unedited video. So if someone asks Sammy how he makes his meals so good he might say well before I start I go in my room watch our video and then I....never mind. ..
