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It's no surprise It's never going to end with Salvatore it will always be something else and then something else again. Kyle was not wrong in his reaction to Mathias but he still feels bad about it can't say I understand that

Perfect line to end the chapter. Well we heard from Craig and while he's as ignorant and wrongheaded in his own way as she is at least he's not as evil as she is for he wouldn't have thrown Cody out.Hazel uses a bible passage to justify her actions but when Craig tries to counter with another bible passage she abruptly cuts him off and doesn't want to hear it you can't deal with that kind of person. I wish Craig would leave her and cut her off financially like she did with Cody but we know that's not going to happen.If Hazel and Jenny ever talk I hope we get to hear it. BTW Kip is a really good guy

Another great chapter.Please forgive if I am mistaken but I am under the impression George Washington is loosely based on you.The reason I am asking that is George mentioned that he had a book published do you also have a book published?If you do here's a great chance to plug it.

Wow you managed to pack of stuff happening in this chapter I surely thought Jake-Ethen-Luke thing was going to be the most discussed part of this chapter but obviously it takes a back seat after what happened to Cody. Although most of us suspected this might happen but Hazel is even more of a vile evil POS then we could imagine.She does this even before Craig gets home shouldn't he have a say? And then she says not to tell any family that's not her call how arrogant.She must have shown this kind of behavior all of Cody's life because Cody let her have it and was not at a loss for words. Of course Jenny did the only there was to do but boy is this going to cause a lot of complications with Jake I think he'll want to do right by Ethen but Cody's a life long friend and they just found out about each other before they had a chance to take it further that just doesn't go away I can't see something not happening being in the same house. This story has plenty of drama already yet there are things that have still yet to happen like Callum and his abuse there is so much stuff here.

Most of the questions we had had about Ethen seemed to be answered.I guess I have to give Ethen credit if he's really going to tell Jake about his past.There is one thing that might not be said to Jake Luke was all friendly and hugged Jake a few times but then he referred to Jake as a straight guy.When Ethen was speaking to Ed it was implied that Ethen and Luke had a bit of history once Luke finds out Jake plays for the same team will that change?

Well Jake certainly moved on fast I would normally say too fast unless Ethen just has a certain something. I did notice something that could be a red flag Ethen saying the reason why he dropped out of school is because his Dad doesn't want him to alone before and after school.That doesn't make sense to me he's 17 and has mentioned friends that live close by I don't see a problem.IMO there is another reason and one that comes to mind is he's gay and he's out and it was a issue at school.It could be something else of course but it's not the reason Ethen told the Stevens

Again I don't know if the way Cody handled it was right or wrong but I will say that the letter expressed things perfectly no way would Cody have been able to do so verbally plus Jake would have kept interrupting so its good that the letter was written. Now obviously we don't know from here does the story stay with Jake in Nevada or will we still see Cody from time to time.I wonder this because the only way Cody stays in the story is if the absolute worse reaction comes from Cody's parents if they find out about him and the Steven's then find out about it. But this author has surprised me before so we'll see

It will be interesting to see what that letter reads.I can't say what is right or wrong when we moved around while my dad was in the military I was younger he retired just as I got into high school the thought of me leaving before my senior would have been too much so Have no idea whether Cody is right or wrong but I lean toward that it's a mistake. I wonder was Cody's tell was that got Kit curious enough to ask that question

I gotta tell you I had my share of dealing with arrogant public service employees and everybody I know has a DMV horror story what JJ went through was very believable . Anybody have some white chocolate peanut butter? All of a sudden I have a craving for it.What am I going to have it on? Uh...that's not important

For the most part the coming out part went as well as one can expect as far as Cody's parents goes my first thought isn't optimistic. In the U.S. depending on what state you live in by law they don't just let you go home like that after trying to kill yourself .I don't know the details but I think they observe you for a few days.I don't know the law in Britain but I'm surprised they let Jake go home so soon

What a situation for Cody to be in he might damned if he tells or damned if he doesn't tell.But I would wait for Jake to wake up first it won't make a difference until he does.Will this complicate the move?

The big incident that happened at the Center Mr. London saw that with his own eyes along with Trent they saw what he did with Evan and before with Hayden they have to give him a significant role there. Now that Stephanie want to focus of her story to be on Matt instead of the Pastor I mentioned this before if he does this his parents will come up in her story and Stephanie may contact them to get a comment from them.The sperm donor is a lost cause but possibly the Mother might want to contact Matt.I remember when Matt had that swollen eye her instinct was to check on it but her husband stopped her from doing that.In the Bible men are dominant and I think Matts Mom let the sperm donor make all the decisions based on that including not seeing Matt at juvenile hall way back when I'm just saying that because I can see Matt's Mother make a surprise visit at the center some day. Also I wonder if Stephanie going to use Matt's name in the story or use another name .People like Rickey and his Dad and Pete (The friend whose barn Matt and Charles were caught at) and his friends who he ate lunch with at school might see it.Even if his name isn't used some might put 2+2 together.Would that be good or bad? Sorry I did another word hemorrhage LOL

Great,Great chapter I knew about a quarter of the way into that we won't see Mr. Raffe's reaction yet AAAHHH!!!! we got wait least another chapter but seriously you have set this up really well.He trust his friends and they all are there for him and he's making progress he beginning to believe he's worth it. What kind of lame high school is this if they all get excited about soggy pizza?One way we know what Zack said was huge is when it got Sam to stop eating the pizza.

A couple of possible cryptic comments here Javier said “Kid has a date. A girl, probably" well what else? Unless.... Also from what I assume was a text exchange West: Wen do we meet the girlfriend? Neil: That wut he told u? West: Not a girl? Neil: Nobody im gonna b fuckin Yeah quite interesting indeed but since it's me saying this it's probably way off

If you're referring to the drop in reactions I have been reading a few stories that nobody is paying attention to and they are pretty good stories IMHO with one small exception it appears to me reactions have gone down across the board even with proven long time authors.I don't have any facts to back this up just my gut feeling but I would be interested to see what an analysis of the numbers would show.

I guess we'll find out more in the coming chapters but was the masterbation part of the process?Here's what I see while drumming at a gig with the band Owen is there and some guy flirts with him and Alex notices that while performing then gets jealous and turns into a fox on stage.Hey I had to throw that out there. Sounds like Alex is going to tell Owen about Sean should he? Oh and what story is he going to come up with to explain to his family and Owen as to where he was so long

I so hope I'm wrong but it seems obvious what Jake is going to do.There's a story here no matter which way this goes but I'm going to guess only from the title of this story what Jake intends doesn't happen.This will bring up a lot of questions going forward but I'll wait to see what happens before bringing it up

The Y where I grew up sure wasn't like that. But then I got into school sports and stopped going there ...maybe I shouldn't have🤔 LOL

Bravo to Kayden's Grandparents and pretty much the rest of the family except Mark.This turned out better than expected. Seeing that you're always open suggestions how's this for the epilogue Mark and Chase schedule a lunch meeting to talk what to do about Kayden and Trent while driving over in the same car they have an accident and die. I'm kidding but it would serve them right.

Interesting I never thought of James as attention whore. Nice friendship scenes between Casper and James. I have one question for Peter if what happened to Jackie happen to him and what happen to Charlie happened to James would he have given up and say he's dead without finding a body? I bet not

All that techno-babble talk while in the buff the whole time. What are the chances we can get @Altimexisto invite us over for lunch I would like to try some of these sandwiches I assume he makes them for himself

A very good song writer used that as lyrics in a very good song and they definitely fit this situation

Kyle has an idea how life with Matias could be if this drug thing wasn't hanging over his head. The only way out I see is if the police catch them and then make a deal with them but we shall see what the author has planned.

I grew up in a military family so we moved quite a bit and I had to say goodbye to friends a lot but this totally different this is saying goodbye to a lifelong best friend and at least you would want to graduate where you lived all your life. The way your chapter ended it doesn't take much of a imagination what Jake is going to do next.If there is a negative reaction maybe moving would be a good thing but then there would be no story would there? What you call the tutor class sounds like what we yanks call homeroom

I was thinking the same thing @travlbug was thinking that George was manipulating this but then you wrote in a reply that it could be Ben or Jake writing and that is a interesting though but I don't think you would suggest that if that was really the case in this story but it would be good. How cool is Ben Dad?Telling his Son about how the sheets show a certain kind of stain.Did he learn this from experience?