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My review won't do this story justice but I'll try.First this is a really really tough topic that's all too real but it has be talked about and never ignored although it is way too often. The story centers around Zack and the way the authors able to express the raw emotion felt by Zack tells me that this author was very close to a situation like this be it a relative, friend or maybe even...well I'll leave it there. As a reader you will feel very vividly what Zack was feeling on an everyday basic.Some chapters will make you cry and feel exhausted. What made Zack soldier on besides his own self defense mechanisms was when he met what looks to be the love of his life in Brody who was perfect is role also two very fiercely loyal friends in Adam and Sam if Zack didn't have them this could have very easily been a different outcome. Seriously I could have given this 10 stars but it only allows us to give 5.Certain parts of the ending may surprise you at times reading this will be tough but hang in there it will be well worth it
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Out of all the scenarios I though about happening this wasn't one of them but this was brilliant very well done. The police officer that approached Zack seemed to be aware of some of the stuff that happened leading up to this that tells me Mr. Schultz is his 911 call must of passed on to them what he suspected was happening all this time.If only if someone did it sooner. "And as I sniffled and wiped my eyes, Mr. Raffe said, "Just a 'C', huh? Heh, you did much better than that. But who knows? Maybe you can take the 'C' and make it mean something when you're older" That brought up a question in my head which I think would be inappropriate to ask here I wonder if any readers are thinking the same thing? This was a long time in the making but guess what well worth it. This story is a top 5 for sure
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For those of you who go this far back I can think of a ton of Dean Martin jokes to put here
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Joel and Lisa was told not to give Bridget a reason to go after them which means that they will more likely it will be Lisa
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Loren said what he does is "More than good looks and a hot body." But then Sven has him Lowering his boxers Just saying.No particular reason but I have a bad feeling Sven might end up being dangerous. I believe what Jay is doing to Loren is calculated and it seems to be working
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Something like this was long overdue for Zack.And also for Brody for being the perfect patient understanding BF
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When some of his classmates made a negative critique on one of his saying had I been there I would have asked someone do YOU!!! have a painting hanging in MoMA?Armand is way above doing that but not me LOL.
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If I had been Jeff the one thing I would have considered is if someone was really heavy and had man boobs etc.That would have been difficult for the certain party involved.Nobody even knew it was going to be like this until they arrived
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A nudist business retreat now that's interesting.Is this a product of our author's fertile imagination?Or has this actually happened? An interesting story covering the same type of issue brought up in this chapter.Former President Lyndon Johnson when he was Senate majority leader had a reputation for being able to get Legislation passed.One of his techniques was to wait in the locker room of the gym the senators used with a towel wrapped around him when a Senator he wanted to talk to would come in to use the showers Johnson would then show up take the shower next to him and start talking about some bill pending in congress.Johnson believed both of them being naked created a level playing field and in some cases gave him the advantage.This chapter reminded me of that.
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Sounds like incompetent FBI agents if they didn't make the Bruja connection like Gonzales did
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I would definitely feel self conscious about money being spent on me and it being one-sided.Noah will figure out the problem I hope he figures out a way to tell Seth to not make such a big deal about it.That's easier said then done. "By that I mean, even if you don’t like the outfit, you act like it’s the most amazing thing you’ve ever seen. Got it?”. Well isn't that a given with any couple?
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The chapter said Armand worked on the painting for the rest of the semester so that sounds like he put a lot of Time into it. That's why he's going to be a great artist
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I wouldn't wish anyone be as conflicted as Ned is right now and what he has to do. I hope that dream Peter had was valid not a result of the stuff they put in his water. What hasn't been explained at least as far as I can tell is was Peter chosen at random?Or was there rhyme and reason for him to be chosen.Does Peter being "that way" have something to do with it.
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Brock seems to be the kind of moron who wants payback as he was humiliated in front of his jock friends.Perhaps Lia could be Noah bodyguard when Seth isn't around I bet you she would be up to it.
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What we don't know yet is how will Bridget change her plans when she finds out the Kookaburra is alive and well
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I hate to ask a technical question during such a sweet story but how do they go about opening an account for Arrow?I didn't know this kind of thing was legal
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So Jay thinks Garrett should have the trainer look at his uh..condition before the season starts?I'm curious how would the weekly injury report teams release describe that?🤔
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Thank God for Fowler and I guess also thank C James for Fowler he created the character LOL. This is a great story but that one line " and don’t press the transmitter’s button,” has to be the biggest DUH!!! line I ever read in a GA story
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I have to imagine Armand would get a scholarship based on his abilities.I don't know how it works with artists That his parents had to ask to see the the painting makes me wonder how much attention have they been paying
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I know they'll find it ....BUT HOW!!!!!
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Now we understand the title Arrow you could have gave me a million guesses and I would have never figured it out. Mr Larkin mentioned getting a senior boy to help Armand makes me wonder will sparks start to fly
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Chapter 6: Fists and Feelings
weinerdog commented on Demiurge's story chapter in Chapter 6: Fists and Feelings
Oh there are still cliques according to my nephew who goes to HS at the present time. Kids in general are more tolerant of gay kids these days but there is even more of a dynamic going on here.When I went to HS somebody like Finn and somebody like Alec weren't even allowed to be buddies let alone a couple .It is almost being complete opposites that is causing the reaction.Judging by Finns age he's graduating this year and we know Alec plan is to get out of this town I can see him breaking this off on his own because it's better for Finn in the long run.Whether that's wrong or right It would be understandable for Alec to think that. Have to give Alec props for pushing Cody out of the way before he hit River.Alec is a good friend also.Funny Alec is the protagonist in the story but River seems to everyone favorite character- 26 comments
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Again it was mentioned that a band will be playing at J.J. and Henry's wedding is a name going to be revealed?Or will it be I can't believe you got THEM!!! So when wIll we see J.J. on the Rachal Maddow show?
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I'm the opposite they use to ask me to walk a straight line when they saw me walking in circles.Those were my younger days not any more. Great start to this story
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Good chapter why did no one comment until I did? I'll say one thing Babe is a hell of a lot better then sweetness
