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    Chapter 23

    That was so cool that Billy called Adam's Mom Grandma.Does Billy have a car yet?I have a hunch he might want to get one so he can keep going to that restaurant if you know what I mean.
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    Chapter 22

    I'm reading a story right now where that is a recurring theme.We can't really prove that one way or another but I suspect you're right.
  3. A lot of interesting thoughts expressed.G and Zeke discussed the possibly Tyler isn't who he says he is.Let's think about that the bad guys murdered this family including the son but then planted somebody to pretend to be a surviving family member?That would be one hell of a crazy plan but how else would Tyler not be who he says he is? I think the conversation G and Zeke had was to plant the idea that Tyler isn't who he says he is and Wyatt is saying what he's saying to make Zeke think that or maybe Wyatt is under some kind of mind control to make this look authentic.I could be way off as usual. The one thing I do know is G cannot be trusted and I think both Zeke and Tyler know that I believe both will respond to this as something G set up.Maybe that's what they want them to do that's what makes this fun
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    Chapter 17

    This story from what I understand was written around 2007.The reason why I bring this up is because if the author had written this today he would have wrote it differently.He had Davey's Dad winning all 50 states with almost 80% of the vote I think history since that time had shown us that it can't happen like that here in the U.S. Oh Davey's Dad would still win but it seems no matter what happens about a third of the country that would vote for the losing candidate and they would still win a few states. Reagan once won 49 states but it wasn't anywhere close to 80% of the vote. Why would Bush pardon Davey?Maybe so that history will acknowledge that he did the right thing at end or that he knew it would get under President Jones skin?After all this Davey is still working for the government. This looked like a great place to end the story but we know there's another book.This is what a friend told me that the next story had a great premise and 10 really good chapters had been written but as far as he knows it never got completed.Maybe the rest of the story is available somewhere else and it will get posted here but if it's not completed I can't see it being posted here.If somebody knows different please correct me
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    Tide: 7.2

    🥁Da dit boom
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    Tide: 7.2

    My first reaction is it's The Whale that James sees.Charlie kept referring to James as some kind of creature are we to assume his mind is in some kind of altered state?
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    Chapter 16

    I don't know how the author is going to do it but I'm going to bet Davey is not going to see jail time.
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    Chapter 21

    I'm glad everybody is enjoying the trip .I'm no expert on this by any means but is it possible Scotty is getting too attached to Uncle Adam?Adam may have to leave town for a job opportunity or something.Maybe I worry too much
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    Friday: Trent

    A lot of thing got covered in this chapter.I'm glad Sarah actually listened a lot of other people in her position would have already made up their minds.I'm glad she's going to find some scholarships for Kayden. Good for Kayden for not going back home right away.I wonder if Mark is going to ask Kayden to pretend thing are hunky dory when the Grandparent visit? Diana seems to fall for men who are abusers.I hope I'm dead wrong about this but a lot of people who were abused as kids become abusers themselves so I'm really worried that Trent one day may really lose it and hit Kayden.If something like this does happens I hope it's in a way where Trent stops short of hitting Kayden and then starts to realize he's becoming his Dad and step dad.I hope none of this happens but you have to realize it could.
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    Chapter 20

    I remember years ago we took a trip to Disneyland we stayed in a close by hotel we first checked The Disneyland hotel it was more than twice the nice hotel we stayed at I think they charged more because Disneyland was in the name.I bring this up because most likely The Disneyland restaurants are most likely similar but if Mickey and Goofy can make a 7 year old kid happy then it's worth it.
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    Chapter 16

    This chapter sounds like it is setting up for Davey's dad to become president.I guess the idea that they could have stopped 9/11 but didn't and they were getting away with it was too abhorrent for Davey to let that happen despite the risk.I know his dad said he would face justice but if this went to trial you would get a a lot of hung juries I would think. I agree that Davey did this for the right reason but it's easy to see somebody doing something like this for the wrong reason.
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    Tide: 7.1

    Maybe James can recall an old Batman episode and act accordingly. The way James stayed close to that bird it would have scared the s--t out of me. Why did James want the jacket?To wrap around his midsection?
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    Chapter 19

    Maybe you said in a previous chapter but which Disney are they going to Disneyland or Disneyworld?They said 8 hour trip so they could be close to the midwest one direction or another. I've been to Disneyland but everyone tells me Disneyworld is better.
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    Chapter 18

    In my experience I have never seen a set up like the one tried by Adam's mom work not with me or any friends.Not that it can't happen but I suspect it's rare.I'm willing to bet most happen in an unexpected way
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    Chapter 15

    Sean is somebody I see finding out about a kid who abused by his parents most likely gay and wanting to adopt the kid.
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    Chapter 15

    It's cool that Davey and Brian have kids I wonder if the author was still around if he would have been inspired to use their kids to go back in time to deal with more recent events.I don't get why they would not at least check out the information on the disc to possibly stop an attack no matter where the intelligence comes from? I am glad to be way off on something I was worried about.Sean and Brandon's company is very successful.Some of the technology comes from the time machine could the wrong kind of person figure it out?
  17. I was thinking Bex was going find Sarah all out of sorts and when she couldn't comfort her it may have stressed her enough for her powers to manifest.I guess that can still happen in a later chapter.Althought it hasn't been established when it was either Caleb or 23 that was assigned to kidnap a girl and some of us thought that was Bex.But since Charlie has been taken shouldn't Peter's family be going the extra mile to make sure they don't take Bex?I know they have James on their mind at the moment but I wouldn't leave Bex alone in her room I would have Tasha stay with her.
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    Chapter 17

    I wonder if Billy makes the Olympics I wonder if the so-called Coach will tell friends '"I coached him"🙄. If he does well in the Olympics they can make a running shoe named after him
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    Chapter 16

    I knew you can catch lobsters in a net but Never saw one get caught on a regular fishing pole. They were talking about carbs in pizza.I have seen in the frozen food section Pizza made with a cauliflower crust very low in carbs.I hate cauliflower so I have resisted having it but I'm told it's not bad.Maybe one day I'll be brave enough.
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    Potato Detox

    I'm about publish a book '"!00 reasons not to have kids" but first I have to get your permission to use day 1 to 7 in this chapter ...Ok you can have a co-author credit LOL. Both Seamus and Matt have valid complaints but also insecurities.There's no good guy or bad guy here it's both of them.But they will work it out they love Aidan too much not too. There were bigger issues here in this chapter but nobody has pointed this out I appreciate how much of a loyal friend Matt is saying he made plans with his old friends for spring break and this may be the last time he sees them.Same with Jase and Hilary about missing them. A lot of friends forget you existed when they get a significant other. BTW I must have missed the chapter Where Seamus and Matt got married.....Oh they didn't? Sure could have fooled me
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    Chapter 14

    Cool that Davey the won Bronze medal so his baseball playing in this timeline wasn't all for naught. This truly is a changed time line his dad became a Democrat? Davey ended up in the military again along with Brian but only as a reserve and as a JAG so I don't see a war happening.He does mention trying to stop 9/11.I wonder if he'll try to tell Clinton to stay away from Luwinski. To me nothing obvious has happened in this chapter so I still think the Sean/Brandon project will be the big thing that might cause trouble
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    Chapter 15

    Hmm Omelets.Who stocked the fridge?
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    Care: 6.11

    There has to be a way to find them is Charlie's tracking device still working?That's the only way I see that they can find them.But you're the author you can make up something LOL
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    Chapter 7

    Things are going to get more strange?Really? In that video if the guy in the balcony was Neil ,West could probably see that so I'm guessing it's a bad guy with a connection to the three guys at the construction site.
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    Chapter 14

    25-30 mile that's a official marathon(26 miles) Is that the olympic event Adam has in mind?
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