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I think the Uncle and the Brother are the same person and for some reason while writing this the author kept going back and forth on that .From what I understand he doesn't use an editor so this has gone unchecked. But if I'm mistaken @James Matthews will correct me.

When Adam made a reference to Max Whitlock I thought to myself surely The Puritans know how to access Google Images son't they.The jokes sort of wrote themselves as Adam went along describing what he wants.When Adam mentioned playing God it made me wonder if the Puritan have there own version of that.Interesting Relshek mentioned free will so the person they create could end up being someone of bad character. The only way I could see Brandon finding Adam is if he cross paths with another alien who would know what to do and have the means to do it.

Your synopsis said something about the third time being a charm.Tony and Marco sounds like the first one. Normally I would say nobody is right or wrong here but I have to wonder if Vinny's nasty glare means something. Sounds like a classic story which I'm sure you will do very well on.

At the moment Applazon is going to back JJ but down the line they may have a disagreement and Applazon maybe tempted to threaten JJ with that info but I bet JJ will be thinking of a plan if that should happen. JJ and Henry might be genius level but Darren is very perceptive in his own right on how he figured JJ's past. Three cute boys relaxing talking about everything under the sun all while being naked and then later JJ giving them instructions...Good times...very very good times

So there is unsolved stuff and I guess there is another story to deal with that. The alternative is Jack decided not to say anything and they all lived HEA well we know gay male fiction stories don't work like that. But the good news is it definitely looks like Joey has turned a corner Dean also but he has a longer road.

So there really is a place called Big Gay Ice Cream? Greenich Village would be the place for that I'm going check out their website. Mack accepting the job at the Shepard Center means Xander won't be going anywhere right?

Of course what else could I be talking about

Of course Xander likes Tristan's '"ass"sets especially considering sometimes where Tristan's ass sits

Red flag when Alex said he is just substituting and not in Black Fox and Mike responded with a strange smile well that implied they want to make Alex permanent needless to say you can imagine the shit storm that will create.

First there is this exchange between Joey and his mom "First rule of screwing around Joey? Never do it on your own doorstep. By that, I mean, if Jack was going to screw around with someone else, or already is as you think, do you think he would do it in our club right in front of you?" "Well, no, I guess not." "Well, there is your answer then. Joey? Jack, and you are never apart as far as I can see, so I don't know where you get this idea he is cheating on you, plus the fact I don't think he ever would from what I know about him. Plus where is all this free time he has on his hands to do it?" she laughed." Okay with that in mind if Jack tries to tell Joey about what he has done without mentioning Roman(speculation on my part of course)Joey will think back to this part of the conversation and think ROMAN!!!!! Hope I'm wrong😟

I was about to thank you for another great story but I noticed it still said "In Process" so is there more?

Based on the conversation between Relshek and Adam I can see that day that after they get what they need from Adam they will decide Sage doesn't serve any purpose anymore and then decide to terminate him of course that would be totally unacceptable to Adam .Adam is going to want to return to earth WITH Sage and I think the Puritans will have a problem with this. Interesting that the Puritan didn't terminate Fred did they disregard him like everyone else did?If Brandon somehow manages to find out what happened to Adam what can he do about it? We are talking wormholes and different solar systems etc. this is going to take some really creative writing can't wait. I challenge Brandon's mom to find a passage in the bible that can be interpreted as to call for kicking your son out of your house and on to the street

Right on Matt for what you said to Hayden's parents. I was thinking the same thing @drsawzall mentioned that any money awarded SHOULD go to Hayden in trust I wonder if that would be a federal law or do they vary from state to state.The scumbag lawyer would not be representing the so-called parents and the parents would not bring a civil suit unless they thought the parents would get their grubby hands on the money. They might still need Matt to make the case stick so depending on what the legalities are If I'm Matt I don't cooperate unless it is put in writing that at least 75% of the money goes to Hayden. Too soon to tell but Trent invited Matt to go Morning Center with them he must have noticed the big brother/younger brother dynamic Matt and Hayden has I'm guessing Trent may want to keep Matt close by so perhaps he'll get him a job there maybe bussing tables in the eating area or something like that. It would be great timing because Matt wants to be there for Hayden and this could be a way.Trent's around the same age as Matt hmm🤔 I know too soon to be thinking about that LOL

So what would Jack's plan be?The only thing I can think of is Jack telling Joey his part in it without revealing Roman's part in it sort of a mostly true with an omission. Not sure that would work I hope instead that it's a good plan that I'm not smart enough to think of which isn't too high of a bar LOL

They are so advanced in their medical tech but yet they have to go earth and basically kidnap a 15 year old boy to solve their pandemic go figure

Maybe it's suppose to be obvious but my guess is the minor narrating is Neil.Man his family seems to be in all kinds of stuff.

I binged read this over the weekend starting on Friday and now I'm all caught up loving the story and looking forward to more. I bet it will make Welker's day to arrive at JFH on Monday

Joey reacted surprised by the envelope by the NHS which tells me he didn't contact them on his own.I don't know how it works in the UK but could someone else other then Joey contact the NHS about himself? I hope this horrible incident finally convinces Dean to reach to somebody out it is a different dynamic now that his POS uncle is at his house again

Oh man this reminds me so much of the time I was with my mom in the hospital during her last year.The hospital we were in was good hospital but not nearly as nice as you described this one.I can vouch for hospitals using animals in my mom's nursing home they used dogs and my mom's biggest smile came when the dog visited

Since Jon's family is here might as well get married any reason not to?

I didn't see that coming but I guess I should have.Roman and Jack say lets forget about it, it can't go any farther but we know that every time we see this on a TV show, movie, or in a GA story it never happens like that Joey is going to find out.Part of me wants to say since Olly was at first interested in Joey why don't they just have a foursome. I know I don't mean that. Is that part of the reason why Roman hasn't done anything with Olly yet?

I guess I already commented on this because my comment is still there in chapter 8 .Honestly I didn't notice anything off I wonder what that says about me LOL

Good to know I remember that now .I still don't get why they think Sage is a problem they can still find a mate for Adam it sounds like they are like Vulcans unemotional do they expect Adam to stay with this mate?

Sounds like a good first step.Joey actually spoke to us when said "right readers" LOL Regardless of being on probation Olly SHOULD get that 800 pound commission .He made some interesting points about Joey being abusive James is back at Dean's house? Not good. I think the truth must come out there.

So this one is from Alex POV.I'm not sure how to read Chris's reaction The opening scene where it's just before performing a gig makes me wonder did something happen with Alex and Owen