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Wow so much to say I'll try not ramble.First I'm really pissed off at Sage I was beginning to like him sure you do stuff on the street to survive but this wasn't that.It really shows how much Brandon loves his brother I picture this line when Adam and Brandon meet again "I took it in the ass for you.....literally." I don't think Moorabak really thinks Adam can run Purity but he was pragmatic he knew Adam could win the world vote.He might have planned for the planet to be run by committee and Adam would just a figurehead but as we see Adam already made some orders and Moorabak actually sort of agreed with one at least as far as we know now.I just wonder if Adam does something they see as overstepping how they'll react the Puritans I don't think are above corruption Debbie will probably think Brandon is ignoring her again LOL. I ask because I know very little about Great Britain but is there a place called Heidgate? Or one similar to it?

I get an eerie feeling this is the calm before the storm. I also have to wonder do you really ever get out from under a loan shark?Is Kyle figuring the interest right?

Did Marco have a vision?Is there something specific he has in mind for 5 acres that he hasn't revealed yet? Or maybe when the third guys a charm finally shows up in his life it will become apparent you can see I'm guessing here

Adam as Grand Master of Purity I don't think anybody saw that happening.Can you imagine Mr. Spock or Data from Star Trek saying "The fucking pad is white" ? So Brandon's parents made Debbie get an abortion. I remember when earlier in the story when they discussed the time they threw Adam out of the house the Father said "There is no place in God's heart for people of his kind." I wonder if that moron considered even for a millisecond that would there be a place in God's heart for people who force someone to get a abortion.

Out of the three Puritans that had plans to return Adam to Earth two of them Relshek and Commander Skada are dead so that mean the other one HAS to be alive for Adam to have any chance and if the Puritan is alive he'll need some help maybe the Commander of the Tomleek might help because Adam helped them. The hypnotizing of Sage should be interesting the professors might still be skeptical but I think if they examine Sage then they will see his eye is made with technology not of this Earth. BTW loved the line "You must be Sam, Fuck you"

This place is the ultimate fixer-upper. Those kids work fast I bet they will be around to help for other projects around the house

Shane's Mom winked at him when she handed him the phone so she knows. Let's see unbelievably happy this morning which his mom made note of and then changes clothes before Deme come over how can she not know? Hell a blind man might even know

I'm certain this thought has already been expressed before in the story or in these chapter comments but when Luke leaves for college he may never come back I know I wouldn't Cindy has to know that right?

Is there a range limit on their teleporting? I'm not the type that says kill people casually but after they find and get Tristan,Xander etc back I mean its time to terminate Senator Caruthers and I don't mean out of office.

I hope Troy told his Dad everything that went down before Corbin left including the hand print on his neck the Fact that Troy and Jerry helped look for him is a good sign that things may be OK with them.The painting Corbin did was an awesome gesture. So assuming Corbin goes out with his Dad I could see him trying to tell him about a good area to work from based on what Troy said and his Dad disregarding it.The part about being in a tanker lane yeah I can see his Dad doing that if that idiot can't even drive it the boat down the street(it was the roads fault) then you know he won't get out of the way of a tanker we should be so lucky as long as Corbin isn't on the boat when it happens

Sort of a tiny spoiler there about J.J's midwestern trip but all along I figured J.J. would reconnect in some way with people who have been kind to him on his journey Although it's not In J.J.'s nature to take revenge I would love to see when he becomes a billionaire for him to cross path with that jerk cop who left all J.J.'s stuff behind to get stolen

I'm probably going to use the wrong word here but you probably know what I'm referring to.Could he get some kind of antique appraiser to look at the furniture maybe something in there is valuable to someone

J.J. has come a long way from riding a bike cross country at the beginning of the story to purchasing a state of the art electric vehicle. Something I meant to mention last chapter you named that one guy Wang Chung???Really? I'm assuming that was intentional. I get the feeling at the party next chapter or whatever chapter the party happens that J.J. and Shaun will get closer .There's a reason why Shaun is still only wearing a speedo at work

Written just like a typical Star Trek episode everything looks hopeless until....we know Adam isn't going to die the story would be over then LOL. it was said that Sage would not remember anything at all at first but he remembered Adam wouldn't be there at the laundromat but he didn't know why is it possible The Puritan didn't do as complete of job as they were suppose to?Would Relshek have something to do with that? When Professor Colwell asked how many people knew about the bar Sam said just the four people there but that's not correct Fred knows about it I wonder if that will be relevant

Corbin seems fairly intelligent so I can see later at night replaying the conversation he and Troy had then a lightbulb pops on and he starts thinking.. oh.......OOOOH!!!!!

To use Matts analogy it looks like he might be getting dealt a winning hand Mr London who gives a good first impression is going to give him a job nobody deserves a break more than Matt. Trent's back story certainly explains why he works there . I mention something about Trent and Matt last chapter looks like something may be starting there. The minor cliff hanger at the end I don't think is a going to be a big deal. I have a concern about something that may not even happen in this story so this may be irrelevant. New Morning sounds like a temporary place for Hayden and the other kids so that means Hayden could possibly go back to his so-called parents .I'm sure Matt will make his feelings known about that and Trent and Mr. London knowing who Pastor Simpson was will advise against Hayden going back to his parents but you never know what some dumb ass court and if that sleaze ball lawyer Laird is good at what he does he might make a compelling argument on behalf of Hayden's parents. If this happens God know what Matt might do to try to help Hayden.Again this may not be part of the story I'm just worried.

So the place has an outhouse.Geez I hope there is indoor plumbing.Why wouldn't he have keys to the front door?First thing on his to do list change the lock on the front door.

This is the best chapter so far out of all the good chapters.We got a lot more insight about the Father/Son dynamic when his dad said 'Why couldn't you have done something more manly and worthwhile? he was really saying" what are you a sissy?".I know that's a crude way to put it but he is crude and it explains why he acts that way toward his son.Also the part about Leah and Corbin it sounds like they should have been friends or FWB instead of a couple. Troy mentioned something about reading Corbin wrong we all know what he meant even if Corbin didn't.I wonder what it was about Corbin that set off Troy's gaydar.I would say maybe Corbin's dad sees the same thing but that would be giving him credit for having intelligence. Being a very small village and Corbin being six foot four the pub would probably serve him and they would probably serve Troy seeing that his dad is the biggest employer in the village.I point this out because I see Corbin and Troy becoming closer friends and getting drunk and...well I think you know where I'm going with this.We'll see

I had it in the back of my mind that those bastards might betray Sage like they are planning to betray Adam.But it would make more sense for the story for Sage to return to Earth as I suspect he will cross paths with Brandon. I like how Castro jumped to Adam's defense it sounds like he's pretty much like human.If I had change to design my own human I already know what I'd do are you this technology isn't already available

This chapter certainly explains why Neil is so surly most of the time and the lyrics to the two songs mentioned reinforce that. How is the principle involved in all this? I get that West is a great guy but I'm not sure why he has taken an interest in Neil like he has oh sure there's the obvious but I think there has to be something that hasn't been explained yet

Good I will get more from unemployment then I do now

Marco's job must pay well if he can already start thinking of buying a house good for him.Maybe number three will be part of one of the crews that will install stuff in the house

I love these comment made about the father "the Toad in the hole"😆.Oh and of course it was the roads fault that he messed up the boat

Not to mention Troy Winters

So Adam takes that green drink and sees lots of colors.We already had that on Earth did you hear of the psychedelic 60's