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Everything posted by weinerdog
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Well I'm glad they had that talk and everything's cool but does James really have to apologize?Casper pretty much knows what he's thinking anyways. It will be interesting to see how this Caleb plan works. BTW is Casper aware that Father means Tasha harm?
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I don't understand what "the war is on" means.I guess the next chapter will explain that. We'll see how the cocktail party goes
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I have always respected someone being able to write a song yeah it helps to have a good singer singing it but someone has to be creative enough to make a good song to begin with I think that part of it the public doesn't appreciate enough. So is some big shot at the cocktail party going to discover Tony? Kidding.
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We got a couple of big clues of what may happen in the future.Trevor revealed to Davey that it was Brian's idea to throw Sean in the trash and it seemed Trevor and Brandon went along with it because they were afraid of being suspected as gay by Brian.Sean wasn't in school on this day so that might mean when Brian sees Sean when he does come back to school Brian will show his ugly side and Davey will witness that. The other clue is Sean talking about building another machine the only reason why this would be brought up in the story is although they may not want to they may have no choice but to try to time travel again to fix things.The direction this timeline is going it would seem to support that
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Until I read @drsawzallcomment I was going to ask why is Casper agreeing to these meetings?Then your response to that just made go ooooookay! It's safe to say Casper is not stupid so I'll assume it will make sense
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The gesture of Tony putting Jim on his bank account says a lot
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There's a consensus here that WW111 has been adverted but all the pieces for that to happen stillest and one little mistake can make this happen again.In this lifeline it looks like Bush run against Reagan in 84 that alone can upset the applecart
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Something freaked Neil out when that car with tinted windows showed up the fact that Neil left without finishing the game tells whoever the person in the car was is really bad news.Some stuff still needs to be found out.
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You sort of answered the question I was going to ask you, you only mention Jim,Tony and Mr.Thomas are Jim and Tony literally the only employees?
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This might be an insignificant line in the chapter but Davey leaving the PE locker room while saying the reason had to leave had do with David as he described his bare legs being smooth and silken that tells me that thing might not go as well with Brian as he hopes and if that's the case well there's David . Some of the talk Davey had with Reagan leads me to think everything heading into a disastrous direction .Shevardnadze arrives earlier ten expected ,Reagan speaks of doing a bombing raid and then they mention where they are possible becoming a target which as if there hasn't been enough already more main characters getting killed.Hope I'm wrong
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The main question I have is how did Det. Murphy know Farmer wasn't setting them up.Farmer hung up abruptly so Murphy had to make a snap decision.I hope he explains what he was thinking in a later chapter
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Matt has a talent for saying the wrong thing at the wrong time.I don't know what hell I'm doing when it comes to this topic but when you wrote that Matt's friends were no Dr. Phil well I do know that I don't want Dr. Phil giving me any advice. Talking to Brad is the right course of action to take. The one question Matt should ask himself is does he want Seamus in his and Aiden's life or not?
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Mission - Success, is Letting Him Fail
weinerdog commented on Littlelovestories's story chapter in Mission - Success, is Letting Him Fail
What will happen if Tyler actually succeeds?He might do something unconventional or have just plain dumb luck. Considering what Tyler had gone through in his actual life this kidnapping him in the middle of the night was a bit much. -
Bonus Chapter: Natalie Sharpe
weinerdog commented on Rhythminthemind's story chapter in Bonus Chapter: Natalie Sharpe
Would James have been revealing too much if he asked Natalie about the Caleb situation?Overall it sounded like a good session when they were talking about the gay issue.I hope he and Casper will be OK. Did Liz really call Jack like.Who needs a friend like that -
Dad paid for lunch because he was late?As far as I'm concerned he can be late every time LOL. So Mom is going to just stay away?She also missing time with Jim's grandparents because of this
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Wow Ethan walking 6 miles in freezing whether he's a hearty soul.That reminds me of my Uncle who used to say he walked 6 miles going to school everyday..uphill..both directions. The Gordon's sound perfect and seem to understand the situation I hope Mr.Jameson doesn't visit there causing Ethan to go there. The next big step is seeing his sister.Maybe we'll find out more about his family dynamic
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Another excellent chapter,Sorry for the unintentional spoiler from last chapter.It proves even a blind squirrel can find some nuts sometimes.If that happens again DM me and I'll delete the part.So does a musician drop by to eat at the diner and then asks Tony to sing for his band?Stop,Stop.STOP!!!!!LOL
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Davey intellectually knows how to approach things with Brian he said I all he could be is friends with Brian then so be it.I get the felling they may not even be that at first.Sean being there might make the guys do or say something they shouldn't.
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In Farmer's mind he's doing the right thing.It's difficult to say but Farmer doing what he's doing is better then doing nothing.If CPS is corrupt and these boys get send to deprogramming camps that's not good either.It sounds like he's going to set up those Johns
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That training seemed like a video game except real If it was me I would be reluctant to help Caleb
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The Uncle is a piece of work.Could he still be brought up on charges? Maybe Tony can on some days be the entertainment at the cafe
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The mere fact that Jim's dad bought a bed for THEM should tell Tony that it's ok.While the Mother sound like a total you know what the Dad who we know is a good guy is still with her.Maybe it's little more nuanced .
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It's interesting Davey didn't remember that incident with Sean in the first lifeline.In some ways what he did was worst he was a friend in junior high and when Davey became a "cool jock' later in high school it didn't even register that This person the guy were picking on was someone he knew and was once a friend . It shows Davey could be as big of ass as the others were.I think this story Sean told is setting up Brian doing something along those lines that will cause a confrontation between Davey and Brian.Trevor and Brandon after they found out Davey knows what they did in the barn I think that fact might moderate their behavior.To be fair lets not let Sean off the hook he chose Davy for the time-travel experiment thinking Davy was going to die and apparently not caring if he did.I know he had bad memories of what happened but Davey did what he did when he was a dumb teenager while Sean was a grown man
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What does James have in mind? This sounds so much like something he should tell his Grandpa about he would know what to do. I'm confused in one sentence James is beating Caleb referring to him as a former friend but then wants to help him which is what a friend does so which is it?
