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Unknowns, Achy Bones and Flashing Phones
weinerdog commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Unknowns, Achy Bones and Flashing Phones
I'm starting to like Steven a lot Puppy sure is having bad luck with Doctors first Dr Listern and now this doctor who didn't give him crutches. I think Cindy's new family is the reason why she hasn't called Puppy and I suspect the reason is lame -
Nailed at Cutters Farm
weinerdog commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Nailed at Cutters Farm
Maybe in a odd way after Puppy started choking Steven for talking smack about Cindy perhaps Steven admired that because of.....Loyalty -
The first part of the chapter was a real tearjerker. Franz really needed to have his mother come to him in his dream. So Gerry will name his son Adam you can't have too many Adams around
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I can see Human Rights groups having a problem with castration.I know Gerry is on a honeymoon but I think that was something he should have ran by Gerry first.How about chemical castration? What would Adam do to one of those priests involved in the alter boy scandal? I do believe in the punishment in theory you just have to make sure no future leader would abuse that.
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Nailed at Cutters Farm
weinerdog commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Nailed at Cutters Farm
Happy for Cindy.Sounds like Max has some bad news😮 -
Loved the chapter but the suspense is killing me you're sure dragging out Sturgis getting her just due LOL
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I'm slightly confused is the man they spoke to and the Parish priest the same person or two different people? In either case what a piece of work. I'm glad they found Emma.Her parents saying running isn't what girls do? Who thinks like that in the twenty-first century?But they changed their tune when they found out she might become a celebrity that's sort of a red flag her parents might not be evil but they do seem shallow
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So the Uncle is throwing parties using the boy's income ? I bet the investigation will show he's related to someone from the previous regime. Kidding but it also wouldn't surprise me.
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I was checking up on this story this day because I wanted to make sure I had my facts right I sort of referred to this story in the chapter comments on Ron's current story. I read this years ago on TMJ before I was a member of GA. while looking at this again I was reminded of something out of all the great characters Ron has created Nicky is by far the sweetest. The Part where Star and Gene show up at the banquet and Joey stops speaking then Nicky turns around and yells "Uncle Gene" and runs a jumps in his arms always leaves me teary eyed.To this day it's my favorite scene.
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Another Genius in the House
weinerdog commented on Altimexis's story chapter in Another Genius in the House
It's a very good thing JJ noticed the signs about Henry.How are they going to bring this up with Henry's dad though. -
I like how you handled CC dying with the conversation in Tristan's dream. Well you heard what the doctor said to Tristan he has to avoid being near a blast impossible in your stories you're going to have to write him out.
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Adam is getting it done.I'm curious what other ideas and projects he's going to have in the future.
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I have to say I didn't see that coming.I believe this is the first time Ron has done this fast forwarded to the future but there are a few of his stories I haven't read.We have seen some of his characters who we first met as teens and later saw as adults but that was two different stories.I'm so interested to see where this is going. I got a lot of thoughts here so I hope I don't ramble.I wonder if anybody bothered to look for Matt his poor excuse for parents didn't even come to see him at the facility the pastor had to come with a court order of custody(Did his father refuse to reassume custody) and I think Matt's right the Pastor let him escape to wash his hands clean of this.So who else could have looked for Matt the grandparents? They probably never found out.So now that leaves Ricky's dad but since Matt spent a year and a half taking care of the old man very rarely going out and he had no bank account, debit card, and never used his SSN for anything Matt was off the grid and pretty much impossible to track down.I have to wonder if Ricky and Charles became closer maybe even BF's now they are now 21 and might want find Matt but how short of a random crossing of paths. As far as that job Dexter spoke of I don't know that kind of business too well but it seems sort of too casual to say show up and we'll put you to work.If were Dexter and Matt I would be worried about walking into a trap and being put in human trafficking. One more thing (whew) Matt taking care the old man shows what a good heart he has he's a hell of a lot closer to what a christian suppose to be then that sperm donor and POS pastor.BTW if we readers are right about that POS Pastor he might be a patron at that place they are going to work at.The one thing I would love to see happen is that the old man Matt took care of left a special account for Matt to access after he died but that's me and my wishful thinking.Sorry I'll try not be as long in future (LOL)
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Final Mission - Starting Over?
weinerdog commented on Littlelovestories's story chapter in Final Mission - Starting Over?
While this is definitely a love story it just might be the strangest one I ever read. Zeke and Tyler might actually have a relationship without all the BS.Since it's been implied in the story that at this point in time the band is still around I know where they can go on a date an Obsolete concert. -
Again just like an old Kung Fu episode and bunch of dumb asses who have no idea who they are messing with( in this case boys) get the crap kicked out of them.As crude as Gideon Priest is somebody in that group must be educated most likely Feng Li because I don't think a lot of people in the old west knew much about vampires. Deke will have a lot of stuff to work out once he finds out more about Colby
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The way the barkeep reacted to Feng Li I couldn't help but think this sounds like an old Kung Fu episode.Anybody who watched that show knows what I'm talking about
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Thats the one thing that is truly universal no matter what country teenage boys with huge appetites. DoesAdam now know German well enough to communicate with Stephan?I guess the Academy or college has a German speaking runner yo work with Stephan amd Billy
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Wow you had a lot of disclaimers there.Sadly what was said sounded like a typical day at the highschool I went to albeit with less anger sounded like Kasper started the fight.While the Westside studenrs have their issues with West and co. The really serious threat it seem comes from adults from over there.
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Just came across this did you go back in time and observed how the people spoke you seem to have the dialect down.I got some stuff to do but I think this story might delay me
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When Gerry said before Adam was at the Academy that food was only bearable except for when the parents came was it so hard for the previous staff to have the food good all the time🙄
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The Board wanted to think about a Girls Academy? Adam proposed it and look at his track record what is there to think about? Have people really eaten Crow? Or is that Just an expression
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I dunno Hunter never tried that before
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I know you love to do this But the usual suspects have been dealt with as I write this I just thought that it is someone connected to the Judge.Can you say if it's someone who has already appeared in the story(I'm not holding my breath) TJ still leads Tristan in comas 2-1 unless I'm forgetting one.Lets hope he doesn't catch up
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PROBABLY!!!!!!????
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The only possible problem Richard could have is Adam not talking to him before he buys the land otherwise I think it's an overreaction. Those people who sold the property also wanted Adam to get them a placein Florida? Geez
