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Everything posted by weinerdog
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Why is the old agent even bothering to call Tony he had his chance and he blew it. The British tour sounds exciting
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Mrs.Graves sounds arrogant and someone who usually gets her way.She's going to find out the hard way Tristan isn't somebody you tick off.Tristan can't use the disappearing nuts thing on her.What's the female equivalent to that🤔 Something tells me I don't want you to answer that
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I almost missed this chapter I deserve some demerits for that.Jim is doing a great job I think they should create a YouTube channel as well as a Facebook account
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Has Pete been in the story before this chapter?I don't remember one way or another.He would an adult now unless he got murdered. One of Farmer's entries rang so true to me.A couple of time walking out of a restaurant that was close to a part of town where this activity goes on I had a a few of these kids approach me for a hand out I had a pretty good idea they were hustling.Like Farmer I wanted to take them home feed them have them take a shower wash their clothes etc. but it's just too risky to do that .But I almost did anyway.
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The think he withheld the name for just that purpose.I guess we will find out in either the next chapter or the one after that
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Wed, Thurs: Kayden and Trent
weinerdog commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Wed, Thurs: Kayden and Trent
I wish Audrey would say some other words in French to Mark.Hey Audrey I'm glad he's not my father also.I wonder how Mark would feel if some Frenchmen talked smack about the Korean language? While reading this I was thinking couldn't they come up with a plan to get some leverage on Ivy?She sounds dumb enough to be set up.But then Mitch may have a idea I hope it's a good one.Anybody know how to hack e-mail accounts? I may have mentioned this before but I have a feeling Mark is going to find out about everything in the presence of the Grandparents -
I can certainly see Bush doing that.If he is 100% certain or close to it that the machine will work without any snafu's then this might sound nuts but I can see him sendin Jeb back who better then to contact his earlier timeline self right?I read somewhere once that he wanted Jeb to run for president first before George W. but something is going to happen similar to what happened before where Davey has to do it himself.With Sean and Mr. Rush help Nobody mentioned this yet When Davey told Sean and Mr. Rush that he and Brian were kissing Sean said "It's about damn time".So I guess David's reaction to Davey and Brian wasn't all that irrational
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OK I'm a little confused nothing new for me.I thought I read that 23 was called that in part because she's 23 years old and I thought I read Caleb was 15 years old but he was referred to as 13 .It's not a big deal but .... As far as what is happening James is really motivated because now they are suppose to capture Charlie so now it looks like the whole gang is going to get involved in this .And I just had a horrible thought while typing this is that girl that 23 is suppose to capture ...Is it Bex?
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I've read a little over half your catalog But I haven't read any of your Doorways series yet so I guess it's time to do that.I see the other two stories were one chapter with 25,000 plus words so it looks like this one will have multiple chapters am I right? The Darkness Between Doors? Well that describes my bedroom at night but this about something else LOL.See you when I catch up.
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That is such a one sided contract since Tony's own written songs were out there I think they could have found another record company willing to go with different conditions.It used to be the norm for record companies to select songs for the artists like Frank Sinatra and Dean Martin but when the Beatles came along and they wrote their own songs that started to change.Two albums a year was common in the sixties and seventies until some artists with some leverage told the record companies 'You'll get it when it's done".Two albums a year today is almost more rare these days but not unheard of. Here's a thought record one of Tony's concerts for kids at the hospital and then make and sell a DVD for charity something to do with kids.
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Did Farmer have a day like this planned way back then?It would seem so with all this detailed information he left for the police to find
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Well it seems like a couple of years of maturing made Brian be a lot more like the Brian of the previous lifeline.It's too bad that he had to lose not only David but also Sam his brother as friends.I didn't want to predict Brian getting hurt or killed because of an attack but I sort of saw it coming it seems like the most unthinkable stuff is happening in this lifeline such as being surrounded by communist countries and actual attacks on the homeland.With the worst case scenarios that are coming through well it doesn't take much of an imagination to see that the person Reagan picked go back in the new machine will probably die leaving Davey to be the one to go again because there is no other choice and of course most likely followed by Sean only this time he might have to go back to sometime in the later seventies because I think they said he couldn't go back the same time as before.That itself means a lot of changes again
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The one thing I kept saying to myself is if had someone like Brice interested in me I would grab on and never let go. Having never had happened to me what happened to Danny I cannot judge I'm glad it worked out.Brice was right Adam did make a mistake.
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One thing I noticed no mentioned of the Mom when Grandfather fell ill.You would think Jim being gay would not be such a huge deal that she couldn't try to make some kind of peace with her Mother and Father.
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I'm sure I don't remember this right and it will take me awhile to look at what chapter this was but did Jacqueline appear in a previous chapter I think with Peter? I may be mistaken I guess Casper is vulnerable also will James or Tasha talk to him?
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Remind me never to get on your bad side
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I'm surprised the Dean spoke to Jim .Some are legitimately busy but others wouldn't take the time to speak to Jim
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Well Davey and David connected.And David said "I love you too" But no way does Davey feel the same way and David knows about the previous timeline.I think Davey loves David the way you love a good friend .If Brian matures and is closer to what the other Brian was and Brian and Davey become friends there is no way David cannot be aware of that and being human and a teen at that I think means this relationship will be ill-fated.And it might mean Davey loses a friend at the same time.
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Well that was a bit of a surprise.I wonder does Dale's dad have to recuse himself in this case since his son is close to the victim?I'm not sure how that works You usually don't associate football coaches being supportive especially in this kind of situation but let it be said that Hunter's coach is.
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So glad they had the very revealing talk.While Matt made his share of mistakes Seamus seemed to not consider something,Seamus was 19 and somewhat imtimidated by Kelly and felt he never measured up.Now here's Matt who's barely 21 with a kid and Seamus is this wealthy guy who owns 5 businesses .Couldn't Seamus relate that Matt felt the same way he did with Kelly? As far as Seamus concern about the possible embezzlement it all adds up (no pun intended).Mike was friends with Kelly since childhood and most likely knew about the upcoming divorce and may have felt Seamus didn't deserve the assets.It sounds like Kelly's parents felt the same way they most likely knew Mike since he was a kid it would make sense that they would be in on this together.I'd love for Matt to find the evidence for that
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So it's just Tony and his guitar.When I think of that the first person that comes to mind is a James Taylor type am I close?I may be missing someone else obvious.If the right person hears him he could get musicians hired and a studio to work in .
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As big of a badass Hideyoshi is I guess we know Tsuru is the head badass here "Yes Dear" LOL With all these people here Tasha,Tuva,and Caleb this could be an impressive bunch.As far as the steaks go if an army travels on it's stomach ten they are well set. It would seem Father would be a enemy to all of them which makes me wonder what will happen when they find out about Casper's and Father's connection BTW cool playlists
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Mission - Do Your Job
weinerdog commented on Littlelovestories's story chapter in Mission - Do Your Job
I hope my fear is proven wrong but during the time between the last chapter and this chapter I was wondering what if G ends up being a traitor. This so called fake mission seemed off to me.The reason why Zeke and Tyler were told not tell each other what they were told might be because then they might figure out what's really is going on.We find out Zeke was once G's favorite are ther feelings G has that Zeke is unaware of? Don't know the timeline of this story but we know Tyler has had some depression I don't know if he used the iPad to check on any news but having Blake on his screensaver I wonder if Blake died yet at this time and how Tyler would react to that. -
Wow what a suspenseful chapter I kept saying to myself 'Hurry up Rick" Good ole Marta I had to laugh at her "Hockey whore" comment. Too soon to think this but the fact Heinrich hasn't called yet makes me wonder did he collapse at hearing the news that he may be broke. That conversation Rick overheard the when Zoltan said "You do not have a choice.You will do as I say." It's like he still thinks of himself as Gus guardian.There must be some kind of one-sided contract or perhaps illegal contract for Zoltan to be so arrogant.I'm looking forward to see what words are exchanged like Gus finding out about Zoltan's visit to Rick. You sort of gave us a clue when you mentioned "Willy advisories" I guess that means there is going to be some kind of confrontation.Rick better keep some kind of heavy plumbers tool close by to use.
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Yeah I get Mom 's grief but it is no excuse for being unethical and a lying sack of.... As we saw enough signs that he was going to do and say exactly what he did.Last time he had Brian to help sort out hit feelings and what was happening with his uncle this time he had nobody he was and is a mess and the country's ill-conceived quarantine policy looks like it confused him more.On the positive side he did own up to starting the fight and did seem to be listening a little bit when Davey told him about before .That is more then I can say for Davey's mother. Davey is going to have a lot of time to reflectI can't imagine he made many friends with Davey's group of friend here.Will Brian when he thinks back on things that were said put 2+2 together with Trevor and Brandon and the barn?Speaking of that Davey told Brian that Sean was a time traveler also will Davey tell Trevor and Brandon that also?If they know that Sean knows about them in the other timeline then their current treatment of Sean would be pointless.Maybe Sean would have a chance with Brandon again after all.As for Brian when he's not playing sports he will have a lot of time to think perhaps he will talk about how things were in the other timeline with Davey.He is what a sophomore now?Maybe by the time he's a senior he will mature enough to be a closer version of the other Brian.
