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So will that be it for Farmer/Bridges or will he still pull strings from a distance?Do the police officers really have no idea that he may have faked his death. After reading those thorough and detailed reports they had to consider the possibility. Can't wait for them to get Sturgis.
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So If Chaz really retires what"s next?He's really good at this and I was under the impression he was reasonably young
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Oh -oh I don't know what to make of that.Sounds like Grandma has to intercede.I definitely didn't see Hideyoshi losing. I wonder if Jacqueline's house is insured against people with superpowers trashing it. It looks like James ,Casper and Charlie's parents thought it was best not to tell them about the possible powers they have in hindsight it looks like it was a bad course of action to take.
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Interesting chapter. One thought has come to my mind Narthies and Crites and all the others seem to have a solid understanding of right and wrong.Did the Armenti have something to do with that? Or do they believe in higher being such as God .I wonder if they think of the Arment ilike we think about God if you get what I'm trying to say.
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Thinking about the way The Crites talked about their peaceful co-exisistence etc.Has this kind of thing happened there before?I noticed there was no mentioned of any kind of justice system
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The men he has the meetings with do they live in that city/town?Or did they have to travel there?I only ask because all the guys seemed casual about their wives all meeting someone for lunch at a tea cafe.They are in the security business after all they didn't ask any questions.I'm sure its nothing but if they are out of town I would have asked.
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Papa is already noticing Davey being different when you think about it how can you remember how you thought when you were 7 or 8?Davey said to Papa "Don't look a gift horse in the mouth" What eight year old says that? Davey being younger in this time travel he has a chance to stop some things before they happen like Chris getting molested.He may have already change course on one incident he had forgotten about his Dad beaning him with the baseball in the face from the first lifeline.Since Dad didn't get away with that asshole prickism move and was called on it for the reason why he tried to do that it could have changed his Dad especially when Papa was heading to the house his Dad was staying at after he found out what happened.Now Davey has to watch out for Jenny again. Davey mentioned learning how to throw a curve from a friend David Wells .I wonder if the author meant the David Wells who later became a MLB pitcher IRL.He lived in the area and the age would match it could be a coincidence
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So Hideyoshi has a challenge here but he's up to it I just hope it doesn't mess up Jacqueline's house too much.If it does Then James and Casper may have Charlie as another roomie.BTW Jacqueline doesn't seem to know James and Charlie are friends. If speculation by other reader's and myself are correct 23 is on her way to get Bex since James is indispose we might see Tasha vs. 23.If I'm right this was not meant to be a spoiler LOL.
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Somebody with a 3.9 GPA should be able to get some kind of scholarship help what's up with that?I hope Kent doesn't try something stupid like vandalize Chaz place.
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Remember Derry and Cally having that conversation with Mike about him going somewhere first alone?Then they agreed they would go together.Well Mike reverted back to the previous way I understand his thinking but unless I misunderstand something Mike is carrying Nyf right?In that case Derry or Cally should have gone with Mike in the event something happened to one the other could go back to the group with Nyf because he's going to be needed .If I'm missing something obvious then Never mind
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Maybe The Armenti aren't so intelligent after if they are borrowing something from Earth. I wonder if they watched any of our movies that would really be scary.
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It will be interesting to see how all this relates to the prologue.Is Pete going to be a bad guy in the story
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What will be interesting is what he did after 2013 has he been trying to set-up pedophiles?Did he kill others like Allen etc.
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I thought the target date they set could be off due to the circumstances but 1976?He's really young in this timeline.Papa I guess will find out this time about the time traveling thing this will be new twist how will he react? It was mentioned that missiles was heading toward Eureka It's possible that this Sean might not make it back. I think I see Davey's plan with betting on the Super Bowl.He got Papa's confidence with the basketball scores.With the Super Bowl I would think Papa would go to Vegas or some other betting place that can cover a big payout.Davey mentioned Papa was honest and fair so he will give Davey his cut which would be sizable he would then know what to invest in having lived during that time before so it looks like Davey will be wealthy again.I think Papa would say nothing to Davey's dad about all this.I also wonder about those headaches Davey is experiencing if it has any connection the time traveling with this machine.
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Surely Nils must have known he had no chance against Tsuru. Unless there's something we don't know Caleb should not take the Boss at her word in regards to 23. So this power Caleb received from James is it permanent?And does that mean James no longer has these powers?Sorry if these are dumb questions
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"Pant! Pant!Gasp! Wheeze!" I read the first two Doorways stories and binged read the 6 chapters and I'm all caught up. I've been slaving a over a hot video monitor reading this LOL.I love what I'm reading so far.Mike would make a great Secretary of State as long as he brought Nyf with him to tell him what to say
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The Boys didn't know who George Carlin was? Now THAT'S tragic!!!
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Good thing there are no women on this journey.What if their suits clash with their shoes or something?
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Okay sounds like some abuse is going on and Neil is the victim.Explains his surly demeanor.If West somehow finds out about this then he seems like someone who would try to help.He's due to go out of town soon with the family will he want to find a way to stay behind due to the Neil situation?
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Awesome all the way through except maybe Mike making bail. Matt said I love youIt was also awesome that Seamus sees Brad as the Dad he wished he had and should of had One tiny gripe Matt could have put the pancake he dropped under the faucet for a few seconds.Oh wait maybe he called five second rule if that's the case then it's cool LOL
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You would be surprise that fans of groups and singers never forget them and there is still a market for doing performances well after they peaked in popularity.Tony could always do that but on his terms.A lot of performers never stop because they know nothing else so good for Tony and Jim.When I was a kid if you Told me The Rolling Stones would still be still be active in their 70's I would have said you were nuts. Glad they still go to Anna's.I know the shack means a lot to them but will they ever remodel it?GGreat story
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The only reason that I mentioned in the last chapter comment that Bush would have Jeb go back was based on a comment @NimirRajsaid about Bush using the do over for his own political purposes.Well in this chapter he did just that and then I knew Jeb was going to die because no way the author was going to continue the story with Jeb Bush being the narrator LOL. Davey communicating with the two Brians was a nice touch.Was it a dream?Or did the two Brians actually communicate by hearing thoughts?I'm not sure but I think Davey forgot something he said "Watch out January, 1981, here I come!" But didn't Bush set it for 1979? Also this this is a machine made a little differently and it was a rush job with taking shortcuts maybe he may not even arrive at the set date it might be off give or take some months or even a few years there are some unknowns with this machine
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Operation Butter Biscuit
weinerdog commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Operation Butter Biscuit
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Operation Butter Biscuit
weinerdog commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Operation Butter Biscuit
Are you going to write the part where Mike gets arrested?Hope so.Twenty grand a month is a lot of embezzling for anybody.I wonder if some of it went to Kelly's parents they don't need it but they probably loved the idea of ripping off Seamus. BTW operation Butter biscuit????You couldn't do better than that?🤔- 52 comments
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I hope things will be explained in the next chapter but as for this one I'm not really sure what happened and why. All I know is James is messed up and Tasha is taking him back home how does that accomplish anything?But I'll reserve comment until we find out more
