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"That asshole " Tony was talking about at the diner was that his college classmate from the previous time at the diner?
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Grandpa asked Tony to get the stew then told Jim what he found out.They seem to be doing this in secret why aren't they telling Tony about this?
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There is a lot of evidence Brian is a lot different but the fact that Brian wanted to tour the place with Davey indicates he's drawn to him in some way.Brian is far coming to terms with any gay feelings he has . Brian asked Davey if he was married in the previous lifeline and when he found he was he then asked if was to Marcie. Davey thought that he reacted with a hint of sadness. One can surmise from that is to Brian that marrying Marcie would mean that he isn't gay.Brian could possibly be the guy he was in the previous lifeline but at the moment that seems to be a long way off.
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It's so nice that YouTube could help you be a safecracker. I have a nagging worry that Philip might mistakenly be arrested
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Good move by Olivia I'm sure it was done by Vicky input.Some people just leave without sayin anything so this is at least something. Mayson has been in a coma ALL this time?Detective Bullock must have already questioned Mayson I think he would do that first before telling Hunter.What interesting timing the night Hunter and Dale become official Mayson wakes up
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Lee came off as a everyday guy giving Evan a lecture about respecting women etc. The question now is was Lee just some everyday random perv or was he connected to somebody else?In other words do the grandparents have someone else to look for? I noticed the box I also seen this mentioned by guys who have YouTube channels but I haven't checked it out let
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24 chapters? Try 36.I will say it does look like we are coming close to a resolution.
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It doesn't make sense that the Uncle would lock everything up and not let Tony get his clothes.There is something more there and it's not good.Jim and Tony had gone through a lot but if the end result is they met each other then you can refer to that saying about 'mysterious ways"
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I think G wants Tyler to fail at the training so he ends up in the safe house but what if it doesn't work out that way?If Tyler somehow ends up in the field it would only be with Zeke that makes one think of all the possibilities
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Those must be kids pajamas
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This place definitely it has a small town feel to it with Anna bringing a extra hamburger and Mr. Thomas calling the grandparents to br prepared for a guest Jim must be very well liked in town.
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That's one part of Zoltan's plan I don't get.I'm sure he didn't tell Gus that he can't see Rick even if Zoltan has some kind of leverage on Gus no way would Gus take that.I have to assume Zoltan will think Gus will contact Rick on his own and Rick would say they can't see each other anymore.If Rick doesn't do what Zoltan wants him to do well he probably has a plan for that. After he finds out the blackmail didn't work Zoltan most likely handles Gus finances I could see him using that in a way where Gus would have stay with them.Is this where Debbie Beck comes in? Perfect kind of Karma. Willy's way out of the hole he put himself in was foiled by the person he raped. BTW can Heinrich still afford to fly into town?Maybe a bus trip?🤔
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Brian's thinking is even more off than Davey's mothers.I don't know what Brian thinks he could have done anyway even if he brought back the recipe for the AIDS cocktail treatment they do today it most likely was too late. Davey and The President are in agreement on not building but the way events are going to happen is going to determine whether they would do that or not maybe Bush later on might want to.
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The only way what Caleb said makes any kind of sense is he thought Casper was dangerous but how did he come to that initial conclusion?Of course he would think twice about that anyway now after he found out if he does anything to James he would have a PO'd Tasha to deal with. Is this how kids make friends these days “Hey, guys! This is Casper. He’s a doof. Can we friend him?” Interesting.
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Now that I think about it The government would do that if for no other reason is that they would be afraid Russia and China would
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When I came across the line "She said that wasn't going to happen because my dad wouldn't let it" I took that to mean it was his Grandparents but if it's her side of the family even worse
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Well obviously his Mother's reaction was horrible but then to call her husband's parents not her parents which would have been bad enough but her husband's family to tell them not to let their Grandson stay with them is just the hight of arrogance
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Good story.This is no big deal but the only thing I would have done different is to reveal the words she written and if it said the father knew. Thank you.
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Can't say I'm at all surprised at Davey's Mom reaction and although her reasoning is flawed it is certainly understandable.But I get a feeling this will never get resolved in this lifeline she won't ever let this go. I"m also not surprised Sean came back from 2004.So many many things have gone wrong in this lifeline that if they had the chance go back a third time they would take it. I mentioned this because maybe Sean from 2004 had observed enough to maybe try to build another one of the invention they would only do that if armageddon or something close to that happens but seeing how things are going they might have to try. Another thing Sean said about how the guys in Modesto acted toward him it looks like not only Brian but Trevor and Brandon are also different as a result of not having met Davey earlier.
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Aidan's terrible first birthday & the big move
weinerdog commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Aidan's terrible first birthday & the big move
Well it's a good thing they had the talk.Matt and Aidan needing time with Brad well you can't argue with that.I have no experience in this but what is the proper etiquette here how much visiting by would be too little or too much? I understand Matt wondering what if it doesn't work out with Seamus but I'm not sure he should have expressed it in those words to Seamus.I think it would have better if he said what if something happens to my dad instead- 41 comments
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Aidan's terrible first birthday & the big move
weinerdog commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Aidan's terrible first birthday & the big move
You just had to let everyone know @kbois was wrong didn't you- 41 comments
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Wow I knew Hideyoshi was a bad ass but wow the was they handled Lewis really brought that point home. My first reaction is Lewis will find out it's Father he finds and since he has worked for Father might be conflicted .This would set up a Hideyoshi vs. Father showdown. Or I have it all wrong and everything I just wrote is invalid LOL Now that Peter told James about stress bringing out powers will he on his own make the connection that's what happened to Casper?
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David mentioned Alex making unbelievable noises.I hope nobody on the crew is a fink and tells the King.I know David said there was no protocol but on the yacht while it's at sea who's the boss David or the Captain.As far as those rules and laws go imperfect humans made those laws so why can't humans change them?
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Wow all these rules about marrying into a Monarchy are these based on what other countries like England did way back when?
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Wow this lifeline is worst then his first lifeline at least in his first lifeline his relatives died in conventional ways.I was so worried it was going to go down like this and in a otherwise very good story you can say it was unrealistic that the military and intelligence community didn't understand this well enough. It has been brought up a little by other readers like @NimirRajin the last chapter comments.Davey is excited by Brian coming but he more than anybody else should understand there's a chance this won't be the same Brian. I remember in Do Over Davey saying Brian had been a borderline bully in this timeline Brian doesn't have the advantage of meeting Davey when he did so his personal maturation process may not be the same.
