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Based on the story tags there's nothing in this chapter that gives any clues.West is established as a good guy liked by his friends and teammates the parents seem OK the sibs seem to get along good naturedly kidding each other so what in the world will go wrong.I guess this is the calm before the storm
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Well they are living in Nevada because the government is concerned about the Brian issue but to me that thought is hanging by a thread.Surely the Chinese traveler and Shevardnadze will eventually figure out they will able to get to Davey by being a threat to his extended family like his Aunt and cousins not to mention Grandparents I think they would eventually acquire the necessary info to put 2+2 together this would be a couple of years down the line needless to say and who's to say they won't figure out his friends anyway.Maybe I worry too much but I think there is too much to account for without missing something important whatever that might be to help the bad guys.
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I'm guessing they were at the drive-in again at the beginning of the chapter.There not too many around any more we still have one in San Diego and it gets good business.The fact that Scott can sit in Brad's lap at a drive-in should make the concept popular again some day.You can't do that in a theater well you can but.....
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I guess I interpreted it wrong.Tasha seemed to be able to withstand the lightning so that's why I thought there was something new there
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This is an ability Tasha hasn't shown yet my first thought is when Tasha had that confrontation with one of the birds and it stressed her out and as a result a new power made itself known.I'm probably way off I can't think of anything else
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Looks like the sting operation is going to work out well.
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Fact: Someone should be hitting dat ass
weinerdog commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Fact: Someone should be hitting dat ass
The previous night should have told Matt for sure Seamus was into him.If Seamus hadn't gone to Iron Works would he have ever have gotten it?Matt might be lamer then me in that department. Jase was cool for going to the place for Matt but I bet he won't ever do that foe anybody else ever again. That story Seamus told about getting fired made me think just once I would like to see a Karen get decked.If somebody got in legal trouble because of it I would start a Go Fund Me page for him or her- 50 comments
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Where Have You Been?
weinerdog commented on Littlelovestories's story chapter in Where Have You Been?
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It's no surprise Brad got scholarship offers first those coaches on football team can't mess around.They are out of high school Scott shouldn't hide the relationship any more
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Davey is trying to learn from mistakes made in the last timeline but with the Chinese guy and probably the Chinese government in the mix this time it will be harder to account for everything. There might be new kind of mistakes made this time.I find these scenarios very interesting but it also hurts my head LOL
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Where Have You Been?
weinerdog commented on Littlelovestories's story chapter in Where Have You Been?
What Tyler was saying to Zeke made total sense as long as Tyler is in that place he can't be of any danger of any info of the mission leaking out so just tell him everything. They scouted two safe houses for Tyler to stay in and the bad guys knew about both.That would suggest there's an insider feeding the bad guys info so maybe Tyler may not be safe where he is either.Zeke said"It's a date" I wonder if it will end up being a real date😉 -
Forgive me if this should be obvious @Chris L alluded to it in his comment. You haven't said one way or another is this the Vic from the other story?If it is then he's perfect for Scott and Brad to talk to since Vic grew up with a gay couple who were like his Uncles.
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Hunter has some great friends it will help a lot.Like Olivia earlier Hunter being unfamiliar with term pansexual is somewhat surprising while it's still a relatively new term it's been around long enough that they should have heard of it. I'm surprised Vicky let Olivia move in after hearing her bigoted attitude apparently she doesn't share @JeffreyLworry about Olivia seeking revenge if she shows any signs of that at least Vicky will be close by I have a stepsister who when she forgets to take her meds changes her behavior is like night and day so I'm willing to reserve comment on Mayson at the moment. I wonder if the school was aware of this.
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Wow is all I can say.The fact that Father was stunned that Casper resisted made him for a moment not knowing what to do otherwise surely he could have done some spell to make Casper stay.He knows his full name so that's not good. I don't remember if Casper actually saw Father when he was taken to building by Lewis if he did I would think his guard would be up as soon as he saw him with the goblin
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I figured Ronnie would be OK with them.Now lets see for the rest of the team, school and sadly possibly some teachers
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Now Casper is with the Family on one hand it's good to be exposed to the healing power other then that not good.I'm guessing he knows Casper is something out of the ordinary but does he know what exactly?If he doesn't maybe Casper could use that to his advantage
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You said Jonah turned on him and that could be true but Jonah did two things that contradicted each other.It might be Jonah wanted to stop Dallas and the Faggot line was a cover the story Jonah might tell Dallas is if he goes too far there will be trouble.Jonah may not be able to be an ally publicly yet.I try to be optimistic
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Meeting with the grandparents went great.When Nonna said“He’s your family. If they don’t like it, then that’s their problem.” Was she referring to other member's of the family?
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I was kidding of course.I'm afraid with me being your editor your readers would really get confused lol.I barely passed my English and writing classes.If you really are serious feel free to message me and tell me what I would have to do.
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Gee that's a loaded question are you sure you want us to answer that?
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As far as the chapter goes when I read the flashback with Tristan and Damian and you mentioned it later in the chapter but I immediately thought "Yep he's definitely a TJ clone alright".I love the relationship he has with his sister and I suspect he has the same relationship with his brothers(brudders?) Tristan mentioned his dads is that a foreshadowing of their appearance?Did I read this right that Tristan took the stairs and its 190 floors?I guess he can skip the gym today.And it explains from the time TJ said to come down to the time he saw Jackson southing happened BTW Mr. Romero should be made aware of what Tristan can do with someone's junk lol
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When I got the notification that you posted the new chapter it said you did it 8 minutes ago @Wesley8890 had already commented what is he getting advanced copies now? He'll do anything to be the first comment huh?
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The one thing from Casper's perspective is whoever he is with right now are enemies of the birds so at least at this moment he's in the right place until he finds out more about them .Let's hope they are the good guys or at least the non-evil guys as opposed to the good guys.If these people are a problem in their own right then Lewis would be needed to help the others find Casper but we have to find out what's up first.
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I understand why Scott and Brad have to be discreet but it sounds like they can't even be friends out in the open at school what's up with that?
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The weekend sounds like it's going to be a blast.Does somebody have good portable recording equipment?That could come in handy when they check out Chuckles house
