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Everything posted by weinerdog
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My thick skull just thought of something .When Rick crossed paths with his former classmate who's a lawyer most readers understandably figured Rick was going to be her client somewhere down the line.Well we found out that Zoltan has a condescending view of Gus intelligence and that got me thinking what kind of work agreement or contract does Gus have with Zoltan? I bet there is something illegal or some violation there and THAT is where Rick's lawyer friend comes in.I'm probably wrong again but I like to speculate
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So we have an idea of where some conflict will come from. I guess I have some limited knowledge but Neil's comment "Flower boy" I take it that it's a gay slur
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I love Tasha's priorities "Pie first" I knew I loved that girl.With Hideyoshi training her she would almost be as invisible as she thinks he is. This would just like the Government not even child prostitution would make them do the right thing
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So Angelina is not a blood relative she's an orphan, or is she both?At any rate she sounds like a sweetheart.
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Farmer was deemed not fit to command but somehow got a job in charge of kids?There is some other corruption going on here.
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Happy Easter to you also. Hunter has a great support system but it looks like he needs the professional help really bad.I fear they might be rushing him back to play. BTW I'm glad you posted early but in the future you may not want to post the same day Parker Owens posts a new chapter LOL other new chapters from other authors might get overlooked when that happens
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I didn't think it was possible but there's a character that I and I suspect most of the readers hate more than Heinrich and Rita.I had a sense Zoltan was very controlling but I didn't imagine to this degree.Rick in his thought process after Zoltan left felt he had no way to fight Zoltan he even thought that he didn't have a lawyer.Well he then gets a emergency call from and old classmate who's...A LAWYER!!! Coincidence? I think not but I can't speak for Parker so we'll see.I have to think Zoltan said some illegal things to Rick I'm no lawyer but maybe Debbie can strike first for Rick by having a restraining order against Zoltan or something like that.A corporate lawyer from New York would be a good match for anyone Zoltan has The chapter did end on a silver lining IMHO.The master of great timing Heinrich decided to call just then and finally Rick speaks to him the way he should have spoken to him a long time ago Just thought of something it would involve Rick revealing himself a little.He can ask Jared to speak to Marta about what Zoltan said maybe it will get back to Gus.Yeah risky
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Ending the chapter while the story in progress that's mean😄.Seriously I'm willing to bet this story might explain the Angelina mystery
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I knew Davey would think of something for me the surprise was he set it up before he left for the base he didn't know about any changes but I guess the experience of the last timeline got him trained to think that way.And say what you want about the Dad's shortcomings Davey knew if he was missing Dad would search his room looking for clues and it worked like he thought. Speaking of the Dad he's a lot different in this timeline what changed?
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Bonus Chapter: Ray Sullivan.
weinerdog commented on Rhythminthemind's story chapter in Bonus Chapter: Ray Sullivan.
So Ray and Peter know each other and Peter was aware of Casper. Didn't Peter consider that there might be a supernatural reason why his son is hanging around Casper sure he doesn't have any details but in the back of his mind he knows that both of them could have powers and are keeping it secret unless we find out different it looks like Peter though James and Casper just randomly became friends. I think we can say based on what we know Peter might have dropped the ball here. So did Ray of course but in a different way -
All train trips should be something like that LOL. A Shawarma that's the first I've heard of that.You said the meat was lamb so I guess it's Greek.Is that the same meat they use in a Gyro?
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Chuckles would be pretty arrogant to leave some evidence on social media but arrogant is the least of what he did. Maybe there is what looks to be innocent photo but in the picture is one of the 16 missing boys.We maybe talking serial killer here.He must own some land or something maybe that's where the bodies are
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Maple, cherry, walnut, hickory, oak...
weinerdog commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Maple, cherry, walnut, hickory, oak...
It sounds like Brad doesn't know the extent of Matt and Seamus relationship otherwise he would not have brought up staying for the summer.If Matt was smart and let's face it he hasn't up to this point been smart about what to do in this relationship he would say to Seamus what plans he and his dad had before he moved in Seamus place.But knowing Matt he will just blurt out'I'm staying there for the summer"I hope maybe he'll mentioned this to one of his friends and they can at least ask Matt"How does Seamus feel about this"? Having said that I don't think a lengthy visit is inappropriate say maybe a month would be Ok.But talk to Seamus about it PLEASE!!!- 34 comments
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How far away is Cincinnati from where they are ? Depending on where it is they would be separated during the football season five or so months.They are mature enough to handle it.Scott investing the money is a great idea.
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As we know from the first Do Over Davey is very resourceful these guys are seriously underestimating him combine that with Grimes arrogance and Davey will know what to do and when to do it. I had forgotten that Davey lived there in a previous timeline so he would remember friends from then this would lessen the impact of no Brian and company. Since you can come up with so many scenarios with time travel I could see people he knew from both timelines crossing paths depending on the situation
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The sex scene was beautiful. Glad for the most part things went well with his Dad.The Grandparents?I'll be charitable they were....interesting Both Lauti and Valentin said it well they both want to be better for each other
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My first thought is Dr. McDermis has news of Scott qualifying for an advanced program maybe on a scholarship or something along those lines. When will they go to Italy?After they graduate?This Angelina thing is quite mysterious
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That is a lot to take in first you seem to to be bodyless then to see it outside of yourself and it seems like it's 100 ft long how do you wrap around that?The best my limited mind can figure is he was in another dimension when he went through that wall. Thankfully I don't use drugs but If I took an hallucinogenic and then I looked up and saw James flying naked my first thought would be "Wow I want to take more of this stuff"
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Well college is working out for both of them.Scott does have a point didn't the high school have a clue on how advanced he was in math?
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One reader said it was James Father. and another said it was his Grandfather I think it was the Grandfather.I don't think Tasha will have to put 2+2 together I think Grandpa was there because he knew James had been there I bet Grandma passed on the info about the birds.I see no reason why he would not reveal himself as James Grandfather. I admire Tasha's determination but she was taking some knocks also if some bad ass flame man comes by to offer help geez take it what good are you if you're all broken up
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It may have different back then but Brad's football practices would start a week or so earlier then regular classes. I wonder some diners offer polenta for breakfast I don't think I ever had that
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Philip didn't act like he was damaged he seemed well adjusted. It does explain why he cares for the kids
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I didn't think that would happen so quick maybe there are some feelings from when they knew each other in the past despite the age difference which really wasn't all that much.Ethan mentioned Michael had a look of distrust I wonder why that is. What's with all the birds in the place?It's a costume shop so maybe they rent them to people who want to dress up as pirates.Sorry about that🙄
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Can't wait for the big bust.Dirty Harriet?Maybe you should copyright that name I could see somebody making a movie out of that
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They both didn't want to be with anybody based on bad previous experiences but they found each other and took a major step they are right for each other
