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Everything posted by weinerdog
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Is gang the correct term?It sounds more like organized crime.
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I wouldn't be surprised If @CLJobe had that many ideas left for this story.200 chapters would be a record for GA if I'm not mistaken
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Unravelling A Web of Lies
weinerdog commented on Littlelovestories's story chapter in Unravelling A Web of Lies
What do we know about G background?Is he even qualified to do this stuff seems like he's not. I wonder what memories Tyler was referring to?Based on what the story revealed nothing like that happened .Could Tyler possibly believe something happened but it really didn't -
You have to tell us us what items Marcel made got the most popular reaction.
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That made me think of something.As far as I know there has never been a situation where the person inheriting the throne was in a same sex relationship I think we would have heard of that.So say in the future something like that happens in England do the rules allow for there the be two kings or queens?
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It would not have happened if Ethan didn't forget his book so risky for them to go anywhere in that school alone and that sucks. Jackson conveniently won't believe that Derrin started it. Wayne's Grandmother comment to Ethan about "A happy place tp pitch your tent" sounds like she has them figured out already.
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The very idea of upchucking and seeing worms go out of your mouth Wow!!! I guess as far as the wedding goes I'm sure Adam will ask her but we readers don't know what Marie wants.But the reception maybe could be at the academy.Who's the best man? Bill and perhaps Billy could be in the wedding party
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Scary stuff.I wonder if Dr.McMillian would have missed it.
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Oh man I surely thought when I checked back I would see Wesley's comment before mine.I'm first again OK drinks are on me only you have to come here LOL
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Well that's certainly one way to kill a relationship when someone who knows the future says it isn't going to last.If its me I would do something stupid like 'Oh yeah" and then not break up even if I wanted to so I can say he's wrong.Of course we could be talking about death here😢
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What you wrote could have been in the review section with 5 stars of course. I was just like you when I read it I couldn't put it down or whatever the online equivalent is.I cried and smiled though out the whole Interesting what you shared about your personal life some of those issues was touched on in another @Parker Owens story called Double Concerto.In that story the main character Rick is in his late thirties or early forties and had some of the same issues you have except he didn't get married. It is a 5 star story in its own right. What you expressed about AtoZ was spot on perfect
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Pretty smart idea the Knight and squire system and it will work because they are all good kids.I don't know if you have this planned in the story but these are kids living in close quarters and things can happen how would Adam handle a situation where a couple of kids end up liking each other that way?
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So if I understand this right with 51 new students there are now 111 total now.If they are going to use all the chalets that's 60 boys that is going to be one huge feeding job even if you catch enough fish there are still a lot of sides dishes to prepare.
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Well because of Adam Billy has the option of running for Liechtenstein but one thing I would have been tempted to do when the one trainer said Billy wasn't any good was to challenge their "best" runner to a race.When he wins the medal I would like Adam to tell someone from the media that he could have ran for the U.S. but his coach said "he wasn't any good". I might have this wrong bit two times you mentioned a Bobby was that suppose to be Scotty?
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I didn't get the notification on the previous that seems to happen occasionally on other stories also.I have a feeling Ethan jumped the gun with his outburst and didn't let the Coach finish his thought.The Coach may have been a ally.Or maybe he's just an a-hole like the rest of the faculty seems to be LOL.But that hasn't been established yet.The coach may have been emphasizing 'You" because he heard Ethan was a swimmer in California.He probably is unaware of Wayne's ability. I'm not writing the story this is just me thinking but one thing I would consider if I were Wayne and Ethan is go to the trials if both of their times are among the best and then the coach announces that they made the team Ethan and Wayne would announce they are not joining the team they just wanted to show that they are good enough
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Define Pompous Ass: Those two prima donna's who left the seminar You think those two were a plant that they had a connection to Arlene and the others?
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I'm thinking maybe once every two weeks or so the academy can have a pizza day with the pizzas supplied by Moma . I'm sure Marcel wouldn't mind the break.Once word got out enrollment would increase even more.
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Needless to say that chalet is going to get built.So Billy is training for the Olympics it would be cool If Adam could score some tickets for that for him and Billy's family maybe even Johnny could come hint, hint.
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You momentarily confused me when you named the new kid Adam.They are going to have to come up with a name for him at the cabin for the grandparents to call him.The poor kid was going to stay at the academy all summer?Why did his folks even bother to have a son if they are too busy for him.
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The way all those kids reacted at the cabin when Adam went to say good night to them makes me think not only are the kids away from home a lot but when they are home they don't have much fun.It also seems before Adam arrived the academy didn't organize many fun activities the Fair should help a lot with that
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What was a great night with Ricky has turned into a nightmare for Matt.So I guess this is a "Pray the gay away" program.And for what? Coming to the aid of Charles" One of them "That's suppose to be proof that Matt is gay and needs to be fixed? It could be for the way he yelled at the parents the previous day still that's extreme. Charles is still going to school so I assume that Matt will also.Unlike Charles who seems so far at least to be a little passive and has no friends Matt will probably tell Ricky what's going on I'm scared that Matt will try to escape or something and then he will be in lockdown mode. The Pastor must have the local law enforcement and politicians in his pocket to be able to get away with this.I feel like saying a lot more but I'll wait to see what happens.
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Do all the boys have a running program at the academy as part of their routine?Otherwise I'm surprised Adam would get them up to run if they weren't daily runners.
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Pretty cool that West and Casper are heroes to the little kids.I'm guessing by tone of chapter that Neil's older brother being Teresa fiance is not a good thing.
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Is Tristan talking about a literal nightmare the kind you get when you sleep or is something really happening?As far as Tristan wanting privacy as long as Hunter can teleport everywhere is the there any place he can be alone? I was on the GA site when the notification pop up and Wesley was finished 8 minutes before I was.You should give us a test after the next chapter to see if Wesley is actually reading these LOL
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Book Two: Winter. Prologue.
weinerdog commented on Rhythminthemind's story chapter in Book Two: Winter. Prologue.
Very interesting chapter.It makes me wonder if Charlie is in his right mind.Did the Whale not unlike Father or any other cult leader brainwash Charlie?Will there be a confrontation does Peter have a another way of finding out that Charlie returned other than going there? It's also interesting to note Jackie could not find hide nor hair of Charlie but Charlie knew she was there.
