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When I first heard of Scotty's problem in a previous chapter I was thinking jockstrap but but I thought that was obvious I keep forgetting how young they boys are.I also learned something that there is a special jock designed to go with speedos I guess that would only make sense.
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Susan's dad knew she was raped WTH.Not to speak ill of the dead but her Mother who went to church asked for Susan to have abortion unless that was all the dad also.In this time period a lot of times underage girls would be sent out of town to either carry the kid or have an abortion .You have to wonder if Susan traumatized by the rape never got help and as a result in her condition let the house deteriorate.I hope she will be comforted to know that Frank will be cared for by a family with a lot of love.
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Bonus Chapter One: Bex.
weinerdog commented on Rhythminthemind's story chapter in Bonus Chapter One: Bex.
I have to admit my head hurts after reading this but that is the fault of the reader me not the author.Very interesting stuff. It's also interesting that your readers chose Bex the one we know the least about perhaps that is why.It would only stand to reason Bex would have some supernatural power. -
I have a friend who back when he was 19 had a similar thing happen and he tried to get custody of his infant brother and the state didn't approve it.I didn't understand why while it would have been difficult he always had his act together.I wonder what the guidelines are for this situation. It's early in the story but I think Seamus is going to have some big part here.
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Rodney has a good bunch of friends all of the coming to the hospital to visit
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Well this chapter brings up a lot of questions like with Ethan having a old picture of him with his Mom and Sister in most of these GA stories when one has a picture like that it's because they are dead.I double checked the previous chapters in case I didn't remember but no mention of them being dead.So it's either that or he's been keeping his distance from them because of what happened back then. Michael mentioned his dad only hits him and not the other's in the family that makes me wonder if that's not his actual Dad. I also wonder if the police were eventually called it would be risky of Mr.Jameson to do that but that would be in the back of my mind if I were Ethan.They also may say Michael ran away from home without mentioning what happened I don't know the laws in Canada in the US if your 18 it's irrelevant it may be 16 in Canada.
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Some reading this might think Tony went overboard with giving Amo a car and buying land so Amo can build a house but the way I see it Tony doesn't find out about the gold without Amo reading the journals so I think of it as a well deserved finders fee. Vic is such a good kid.Frank's bruises are not explained yet but it had to be the Mom I guess.
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I guess James is going to tell Tasha about her being found by her scent so not only do they have to temporarily hide Tasha they have to do it in a way where Lewis can't pick up her scent I'm not aware of a way to do that hopefully James is. If Lewis finds out Tasha escaped again and Casper is still with him I have to think he won't let him go
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Sorry to beat a dead horse but things are too good right now. BTW does Philip have any kind of a relationship with Javier's brother Juan?
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I'm worried one of the reporters might stumble on to the skinny dipping parties then things might go kablooey
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Pretty good cliffhanger there as you know I like to guess but other then it's something significant I have no idea what they found but if it's stuff from 1700 and 1800's it should be a doozy.
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Casper won't be there to help come up with a plan for James so one part would be for James to fly up to the second story window. The other part?Somehow create a diversion?James won't be strong enough to open or break the window.Can't wait to see what you come up with. These kids Lewis referred to maybe they are his own kids who have some kind of power that is the only thing I can think of.
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This part of your comment got me thinking.None of what I'm about to write this may happen depending on which direction the author will go.But if Mayson has lost his legs then Hunter will realize as you say karma has paid him back.Since Mayson can't really hurt anyone anymore at least not the same way perhaps Hunter may not cooperate with the police investigation or he will say nothing sexual took place the reason would be obvious he doesn't want to be outed and like any victim would not want the details to become public.Other factors might come up to make this more complicated.Then again I may be way off nothing new there LOL.Can't wait to find out
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Spanking would not be a punishment if everybody did it the way Philip did it
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Philip is awesome.I have one worry that one kid unintentionally opens his big mouth and draws attention to what goes on there.Philip now being public that would be a sensationalized story but I hope it doesn't go there
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I agree with @CaJu I think the accident Dale overheard the ladies talking about was Mayson. I'm guessing it will be revealed that Hunter was in a drugged state all this time.If it was Mayson that had the accident he may have been unfit to drive. After that crap Olivia said it would be very hard to stay friends with her.If it was me and I had been friends with somebody for a long time I would do some soul searching but I would be leaning toward dropping him/her as a friend.How did Madox miss this side of her?
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When some these bullies get positions of authority as an adult watch out.I think more school systems still turn a blind eye then the ones that try to have anti-bullying programs and society pays for it later on. In school my peers and I all did a little of what Mathew is doing gay and straight.One good one is walking or riding your bike pass the house of the person your interested even though it way out of the way you're going but when Jonah passed the restroom to go to his locker and then doubled back to go to the restroom and Mathew still followed not very smooth. Is Mathew as big of a tub of lard as he says he is or is he exagerating because he has low self esteem
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I guess details will be revealed in the next chapter. but the place in Philadelphia did it get sold does the family still own the land or did something hinkey happen? That story of John on how he started dating his former classmate that could be a GA story in it's own right. If my math is right when Angela and Maria become freshmen in HS Vic will be a senior.If the girls are as pretty as their Mother then Vic will still have a full time job making sure suitors treat his sisters right
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I hope Casper had enough time so that his text to James made sense. I imagine it will have to do with James flying outside the window of the floor Tasha is on. One of the kids Casper spoke to Alistair his sarcastic comment to Casper about meeting a super human who isn't full of himself makes me think there's a rebellious streak in him.He might be pretending to be going along with the Family program but really isn't and is waiting to find a way out. Or I'm way off again LOL
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I'm curious what Philip's answer to the reporters will be
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I guess the police fund will take care of the brothers. 40 bucks a month huh?Am I too old to join that program kidding LOL
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Hey no hurry post at your own pace we ain't going anywhere. I have to admit I'm not familiar with cross breeding Friuts and vegetables are there any examples? Just like Brad and Tom took Peter and John under their wing Charlie remembered he was better at farm equipment then school and offered to help John there are some good people at Tony's farm.One day maybe John can do Tony's books he has a lot to keep track of
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Perfect there's nothing to add to Rick and Gus beautiful first time. Other observations I guess Mrs.Lee's chickens being in Rick's back yard will lead to Mrs. Lee finding out how Rick's night went. My first reaction to Rick's Dream is I'm thinking it's the place where Gus lived as a boy where all that stuff happened.My guesses are usually wrong but that's what came to mind. You mentioned at the top of the chapter that anyone looking for Rita or Heinrich will be disappointed.You mean there are actually people looking for Rita and Heinrich???
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I said in a earlier comment that I said hope Dale,Evan and maybe even Madox(that's how I worded it) would help Hunter but I didn't see it happening like this.There was also another figure in Mayson's video I wonder how that is going to figure in this.I'm hoping that Olivia while still a little homophobic might be changing perhaps Vicky spoke to her or is that wishful thinking?
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I'm staying with this story. The only thing I'll say is it affecting his performance on the football field and if that continues he'll lose his scholarship anyway for these day the are arranged one year at a time and they can cut him loose if he doesn't perform at a certain level.So Hunter might as well come clean and hope the coach is not a homophobe because this way is unsustainable.
