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Big Brother with Ultimate Big Brother Powers
weinerdog commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Big Brother with Ultimate Big Brother Powers
First and last month's rent?Security deposit?Not that Seamus is worried about Matt taking off but he doesn't need a security deposit even if by some tiny chance there's an issue well Seamus knows where to find him HE WORKS FOR HIM🙄.Matt should figure out that Seamus made this offer because he loves Aidan and that Seamus is into him it's like Matt feels he's not worthy of Seamus when in reality there's a lot to admire about Matt When Seamus talked about $400 rent and his reasoning behind it I was reminded of my situation where I rent rooms to two friends and I could get double maybe even triple of what I charge but it isn't about that for me so I get what Seamus is talking about.Maybe Seamus should have put a condition on the $400 dollar rent that being Matt had to pick up his towels. BTW $850 for a one bedroom I don't know if it was mentioned where they live but in California where I live that would be a super bargain if you can believe that.- 40 comments
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I agree with what @drsawzall wrote that James family is in cahoots with the government maybe even part of the government. The timing of these men getting Casper comes shortly after James grandma had her encounter with the birds it was as if she tipped them off about the birds although after what these birds did it's hard for the authorities not to take notice
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I see that Scott learned what to say about his Pa's wine from his Dad😄.They have a brick oven? I bet they make great pizza.Can't wait to see how the grandparents are with Brad.
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I'm less then 50/50 at predictions so take this with a grain of salt but I think Rita is marrying Willy Kohler.As far as the plans that Walter "just happened to find lying around while faithfully doing his duty" well we figured Rita was a wheeler dealer and the school board men thought with their little head instead of their big head. I imagine they can call a meeting and raise a big stink among other things Irene might be able to accomplish that by herself but it won't be easy I'm afraid. I would have liked to have heard Rick's explanation to Jerry about the hickey if Walter Hadn't called😁
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Sun, Mon: Trent and Kayden
weinerdog commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Sun, Mon: Trent and Kayden
I laughed at @Wesley8890 comment but he's right college students being grounded?How lame.There has to be some way to get the hell away from Mark.Unless something new gets introduced in this story the only way I see this happening is for Trent to get Chase involved so Kayden wouldn't have to be so financially dependent on Mark.I know Trent hates Chase but if it means he could be with Kayden he might try something like that. Hey I'm going to be annoying pain right now.When Trent text Kayden you had it say Can I call you baby? He texted Kayden. I’ve got to tell you something then when Kayden received the text it said Can I call you baby? I’ve got something to tell you. Mark would have taken off 20 points for that LOL -
There's talk of meeting the Grandparents they being from an older generation what will the reaction be? So that kissing game Scott and Brad played they kissed until they got back to the lips uh..Does that mean they kissed EVERYTHING?You don't have to answer that LOL.
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Cole being 17 and Ike being 14 would get a few comments around school that would happen if it was a boy and a girl. If they were a little younger maybe it's a problem but at this stage I don't know what the big deal is.In a few states if some one over 18 is with someone under 18 if there is less then a 4 year difference in age it's not illegal conversely I remember reading a sex offender registry from another state where the "offender" was 19 and the "victim" 17 now THAT"S ridiculous. You tend to forget although Philip has some fun with some cute boys he really does miss Javier there's a hole that needs to filled .......I mean emotional hole pervs LOL
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Well all of this is moving pretty quick. Both set of parents are in on it from the start so that should help things
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Good call that was the perfect place to stop.Can't wait to see what follows now.A couple of weeks ago I read a story chapter that was three times as long as this one so don't sweat it.
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Casper is going to have to figure out how to do a certain kind of spell and quick.I know he's new at this but is a desperate time.
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Scott surprised me at how he took the initiative.Nice chapter
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I waiting for Chuckles to go down.hey I have the same Pin on my smartphone as Tyrone has LOL.Seriously my Mom rest her soul used to like to use 1234 for her PIN's I got her to start using 4321 still lame but not as bad
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The teacher called Scott a math whiz he would have to be one himself if he realized what Scott did at the scene of the incident.It will be interesting if @Kev is right about Ronnie point Scott out to Brad.I'm not sure would Brad wave at him?And how did Ronnie figure it out?
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ESPN shows a Friday night college football game thought out the season how do you know it wasn't that one😆
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Oops never mind I see how I misread that one sentence my bad
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I have to wonder if some of what Seamus did at The Purple Canary was intentional.Earlier In the chapter Seamus said he fell in love it seems like Matt thought he was referring to Aidan I think Seamus was referring to both Matt and Aidan.Matt can be a little slow in this department I was slightly confused at a conversation where they said Adam looks like he's from Miami Vice then Matt cracked a joke about that then it said Jase flipped him off was there a mistake there? Or did I miss something? While I like Matt and Seamus My opinion of them when way up when we learned they liked NCIS.And Matt is right about Gibbs LOL
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Sounds like Dad would have been good friends with Tony in the other story.What's up with that sleaze ball driver?
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I think James is going to know his Grandmother is something out of the ordinary after witnessing that.Why is she being so secretive?She must know there is a possibility James discovered his powers I'm sure they know of a way to ask about it.The power Tsuru showed might be what Casper will be able to do.That made me think another thing Casper has been over James house couldn't Peter sense something about Casper? This movie goes way back so if you're not a old fart like me you may not of thought of Alfred's Hitchcock's movie The Birds when reading this chapter.Google it if you don't know what I'm referring to.It was hard for me not to think about that while reading this.
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Seth and David's Revenge
weinerdog commented on JamesSavik's story chapter in Seth and David's Revenge
Hmm sting operation maybe?Philip can talk to his police friend but how does he explain what he knows without revealing the computer site that they are not supposed to view.If I was David sitting in Philips lap I would have taken a little longer to find Chuckles house"Just give a minute or 2 or 3" -
The time period and it being a small town would explain how Scott didn't know much.Yes he said he said he was naive but in most public schools kids start to joke about that and say negative things about people doing that but Scott seemed unaware that it was taboo he wasn't against doing it.That tells me his peers who was his age didn't talk about it .In that small setting I guess it wasn't until you were Larry's age that you knew this stuff. I suppose the next chapter we will see Larry as an adult or college student because it would be difficult to find a boyfriend in that school setting.BTW I'm trying to figure out the story title all I know is biscotti is an Italian cookie is there another meaning?
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So without finding out more it sounds like they are in the New York subway system and it was abandoned except for the strangers.This gave me visions of the movie Escape From New York.Will the elves be hiding in New York or creating havoc?
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Grayson Middle and a New Challenge
weinerdog commented on JamesSavik's story chapter in Grayson Middle and a New Challenge
It sounds like the vice principle emboldened the bullies at the middle school.Philip new found good rep will go a long way to get the Mayor to do something about it. Swin tean catch? Cool I wonder what the trip to the regionals be like? -
Does the train stop at places for people to get up and stretch their legs outside etc. like a bus trip does? I don't know having never taken a train trip I ask because if it does do that I would find out where before the final stop and have Jonathan meet them there to possibly avoid Mr. Jameson should he choose to go there but Ethan is resourceful he'll think of something. I totally understand why Michael felt like he had to tell his mother things especially after hearing her and his sister cry but it was a possibly huge mistake under no circumstances at least at first should he contact his Mom's cousin
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I'm surprised Nobody here brought this up yet I thought for sure@NimirRaj would have caught this but why,why,WHY are there knives in the place both Zeke and Corey are aware of what Tyler has done how can they overlook that?Unless there are nothing but dull butter knives in there. I'm so glad Tyler has a iPad I'm glad was dancing even if it looked funny.Hey Jasper from the other story made an appearance for those who don't know what I'm referring to go to where Corey was taking Tyler's pulse.Now that he has a iPad maybe Tyler can go on GA and point it out to you in the chapter comments LOL
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Just making sure readers see the 5 stars next to this when they look for a story to read .What I said in other reviews of this author's stories applies here.I will add one thing the title of the story was simple but also spot on.The place wasn't just a nice house it was a home in every sense of the word not just for the immediate family members there were three people living there not related by blood but were brothers uncles and grandpa to everybody there that they never left tells you a lot about that place.We should all be so lucky.
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