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There was so much good in this chapter done by so many people despite all that the one thing I can't stop thinking about is Ann's parents that's their grandson who has no fault in any of this and they are letting him be malnourished?That is evil.Billy bless his heart is stepping up above and beyond
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When Adam started at the Academy there was no way he could see everything turning out like this.
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My first thought exactly maybe their parents are GA fans so why not? But then they would see these Charlie Boone stories and know everything
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I guess Hans and his team have to think about how to increase security at the lake especially since there were over a 100 boys there. I'm curious to see what Adam does with Jer and Abe and their Mom
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One small inane question when Max said to group"There will be more from all of you coming" did that include Horace also? Thank you Geron for another awesome Charlie Boone adventure.Happy 4th everybody
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Well silk is pretty shiny so it wouldn't be dull.OH! I see what you mean
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I am stunned that as of 45 minutes ago as I'm writing this there was no review of this story. I'm guessing it because this a premium readers story.I concur with @DaveinLA review on all counts.The only thing I would add is Mr. James also uses humor very well. I have heard many many readers talk about Circumnavigation also well it's 159 chapters so I guess I better get started
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I have a question that might make me sound clueless(so what else is new)Are the Moths aware of this defense system that has to be activated I have heard them say nothing about that like they are oblivious to it's existence.If they knew about it surely they would consider that's what their opponents are here to do.
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It went from "I may not be at the cabin this weekend" to 110 kids plus the chefs at the lake.There is a saying God laughs when we make plans.
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Lawrence and the other 5 who will be attending the college I guess they have their priorities .Beer. Adam better be prepared for when spring break comes
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The illusion bought Charlie and company some time.But the last words of this chapter "Here is where our endgame will play out. Here is where we will know if we are to win...or retreat, and wait for another day." You're already writing the sequel aren't you
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That college is building up very fast. This is not that important to the story but what laws and requirements did Adam have to meet to open a new college?It's obvious that Adam is qualified but I'm curious what he had to do. I love the way the kids are treating Anton.
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And now comes the part where The Moth looks like it has the upper hand and Charlie and his friends are doomed.The fun is in the details
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The thoughts Trey had in the previous chapters it seems like Dallas had the very same thoughts it's very mutual so everything should be great.We know it doesn't work like that especially in GA stories I guess one obstacle could be Trey's willingness to be open about the relationship I think that is something he must do I say that like it's simple but we know it's not.The soccer team seems to be OK with Dallas being gay will their attitude be different if there is a gay couple on the team?
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I live close to the Mexican border and I'll tell far more Mexican citizen's are bi-lingual and speak English thenthere are American who can speak Spanish. Gerry is showing a lot of character it sounds like he's willing to give Gunther the son of the stepmother who hated her a chance many kids might be reluctant to do so
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I get the feeling that the two items purchased in the first chapter the cloak and the time traveling globe are going to be put to use here. So the two Madracorns didn't understand the insurance reference? I bet if they visited Earth after about twenty minutes they'll say "We're outta here let's go"
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"But that don't mean no time at all passes here. It's just so slow it can hardly be counted." I think I had some classes in school under those conditions
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Alaric wasn't just greedy he was a dumb greedy.He could have raised the rent a modest amount and pointed to cost of maintinence etc. making his not raising the rent for ten years argument more valid even if he was lying it would have been hard too disprove.But he opened his big mouth saying he found good fortune. When Adam is at the academy who runs the country?It's a tall order to be hands on in both places
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You must live in this country because what you described sounds like Americana to me.Having a student from the school Hunter is going to teach at living across the street will come into play I'm guessing
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I don't remember reading about the elves " no bulge" policy.That brings up a question what does a well endowed elf do? That vendor that kept going "Huff,Huff' sounds a lot like vendors I've seen here on Earth some things are universal. Great first chapter
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The way I think Jackson will be caught is if when he tries to lie about not having a teacher as a witness the lie will be executed so bad that it can be disproven.He would have to get another teacher to lie for him well the more lies you tell the better the chance you slip up.The thing about the truth is it's the only story you have to remember. This is a aside when I was in middle and high school when a bully like Parnell did his bullying no teacher ever sees it but when someone stands up for himself and a fight starts THEN some teacher arrives.I'm sorry that happened to often for it to be a coincidence
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If you're late for work tell your boss you were reading the new chapter of this story and show it to him.That might work
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Excellent chapter. I think after hearing about Gunter and Anna the obvious thing to do is to sent some teachers who attended Adam's seminars and have them run the schools in their country.Anton had to be in a lot of pain what kind of country(before Adam got there) can do nothing?
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I thought it there was going to be about four people to run with him seeing how these countries are about security but Hans is more than enough.No surprise none of the council or ministers joined him.I't also no surprise how big of man Adam is wanting to make peace with the stepmother's family.I hope the family is receptive and she was a bad apple. Not my place to tell you how to write a chapter but I would love to see a chapter where Billy visits the country with a gold medal around his neck
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We find out more about Matt's family that they're estranged from them more signs of extremism every body in the family is evil except them. I have to wonder if tha Pastor will let Matt and James go to school when it was just James he was ostracized and Nobody talked to him so no one knows what is going on. With Matt it may be different at school Matt might say something to Ricky or somebody so I suspect the Pastor will keep them locked up.Why would the Pastor room two gay teens together?That would tempt both of them for something to happen between them .It would seem to make no sense unless the Pastor wants something to happen to justify what he may do. Could be a trap
