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    Chapter 6

    Uncle Mark is really a piece of work 5% interest?Geez.And what up with uncle Mark telling Bobby's parents about him having a bottle of beer?He should get that giant stick out of his....Well you know what I mean. I get the feeling Bobby will be going to college in California.Since his Mom sides with Uncle Mark I wonder if she withheld info about Bobby getting a scholarship.Just spec on my part
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    Rondo

    😥😩😫
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    Chapter 12

    After the last two chapters was 2000+ words this one was almost 7000 words so I knew a lot of stuff was going to happen.Great cliffhanger that cloud sounds really scary Mike,Derry and Cally have a lot of guts. When Mike is on earth he must read a lot of your science fiction stories how else could he come up with that story when the Schrikken doubted he was an Armenti.Has Mike ever left a chapter comment? Now time for one of my weird observations.The names of the Schrikken's was Ssistraa,Ssalitand Ssraik.Then he referred Their Commander or leader as Ssiam Ssali. With all these names that begin with Ss shouldn't this race be called the Sschrikken?......OK I can feel all your eyeballs rolling
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    Chapter 5

    Be curious to find out the details about why Mark and Bobby didn't get along
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    Rondo

    Perfect ChapterI don't really want to ruin it by talking about the other stuff but I have to. Zoltan playing the "after everything we've done for you" card to Gus.I guess he thinks Gus is obligated for life to them.Well I'm sure they exploited Gus enough to where they got their investment back god knows how many times over.I wonder if they lied to Helene and told her that Gus was interested in her. "Gustavo's mine"🙄 BTW if Zoltan wants to have Rick arrested for stalking wouldn't Marta have to be charged as an accessory think about that Zoltan. I have mixed feelings Im so glad Rick and Gus are together but that means the story almost over😢.Maybe you can use your creative writing and add a extra chapter where Heinrich, Rita, Willy and Zoltan end up on a deserted island stuck with each other.One can wish
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    Chapter 34

    Papa knows something is up he doesn't know the details but he knows it's something unusual.Both Papa and Steve didn't even flinch when Davey asked to invest money in these companies some of which hasn't even gone public yet how can a eight year old know that?Both Papa and the lawyer Steve copied Davey's investment plan.Both of them believe that Davey knows what's going to happen what did Papa say to Steve to convince him?I can't see how Papa somewhere down the line is not going to ask Davey to come clean and tell him how he knows all this. In this lifeline he meets Sean as a second grader and Sean will get none of that bullying that he got in past lifelines.Given these circumstances Davey and Sean might be best friends. Davey's optimistic that this time things will go well but he better then anyone should know that even the most minor change can make things go haywire.One thing he can do is find a way to make sure his cousin Chris neighbor gets busted before Chris gets molested
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    Dawn

    So will that be it for Farmer/Bridges or will he still pull strings from a distance?Do the police officers really have no idea that he may have faked his death. After reading those thorough and detailed reports they had to consider the possibility. Can't wait for them to get Sturgis.
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    Chapter 4

    So If Chaz really retires what"s next?He's really good at this and I was under the impression he was reasonably young
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    Aid: 5.12

    Oh -oh I don't know what to make of that.Sounds like Grandma has to intercede.I definitely didn't see Hideyoshi losing. I wonder if Jacqueline's house is insured against people with superpowers trashing it. It looks like James ,Casper and Charlie's parents thought it was best not to tell them about the possible powers they have in hindsight it looks like it was a bad course of action to take.
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    Chapter 10

    Interesting chapter. One thought has come to my mind Narthies and Crites and all the others seem to have a solid understanding of right and wrong.Did the Armenti have something to do with that? Or do they believe in higher being such as God .I wonder if they think of the Arment ilike we think about God if you get what I'm trying to say.
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    Chapter 9

    Thinking about the way The Crites talked about their peaceful co-exisistence etc.Has this kind of thing happened there before?I noticed there was no mentioned of any kind of justice system
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    Chapter 3

    The men he has the meetings with do they live in that city/town?Or did they have to travel there?I only ask because all the guys seemed casual about their wives all meeting someone for lunch at a tea cafe.They are in the security business after all they didn't ask any questions.I'm sure its nothing but if they are out of town I would have asked.
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    Chapter 33

    Papa is already noticing Davey being different when you think about it how can you remember how you thought when you were 7 or 8?Davey said to Papa "Don't look a gift horse in the mouth" What eight year old says that? Davey being younger in this time travel he has a chance to stop some things before they happen like Chris getting molested.He may have already change course on one incident he had forgotten about his Dad beaning him with the baseball in the face from the first lifeline.Since Dad didn't get away with that asshole prickism move and was called on it for the reason why he tried to do that it could have changed his Dad especially when Papa was heading to the house his Dad was staying at after he found out what happened.Now Davey has to watch out for Jenny again. Davey mentioned learning how to throw a curve from a friend David Wells .I wonder if the author meant the David Wells who later became a MLB pitcher IRL.He lived in the area and the age would match it could be a coincidence
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    Aid: 5.11

    So Hideyoshi has a challenge here but he's up to it I just hope it doesn't mess up Jacqueline's house too much.If it does Then James and Casper may have Charlie as another roomie.BTW Jacqueline doesn't seem to know James and Charlie are friends. If speculation by other reader's and myself are correct 23 is on her way to get Bex since James is indispose we might see Tasha vs. 23.If I'm right this was not meant to be a spoiler LOL.
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    Chapter 2

    Somebody with a 3.9 GPA should be able to get some kind of scholarship help what's up with that?I hope Kent doesn't try something stupid like vandalize Chaz place.
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    Chapter 8

    Remember Derry and Cally having that conversation with Mike about him going somewhere first alone?Then they agreed they would go together.Well Mike reverted back to the previous way I understand his thinking but unless I misunderstand something Mike is carrying Nyf right?In that case Derry or Cally should have gone with Mike in the event something happened to one the other could go back to the group with Nyf because he's going to be needed .If I'm missing something obvious then Never mind
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    Chapter 7

    Maybe The Armenti aren't so intelligent after if they are borrowing something from Earth. I wonder if they watched any of our movies that would really be scary.
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    Chapter 1

    It will be interesting to see how all this relates to the prologue.Is Pete going to be a bad guy in the story
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    Darkest Night

    What will be interesting is what he did after 2013 has he been trying to set-up pedophiles?Did he kill others like Allen etc.
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    Chapter 32

    I thought the target date they set could be off due to the circumstances but 1976?He's really young in this timeline.Papa I guess will find out this time about the time traveling thing this will be new twist how will he react? It was mentioned that missiles was heading toward Eureka It's possible that this Sean might not make it back. I think I see Davey's plan with betting on the Super Bowl.He got Papa's confidence with the basketball scores.With the Super Bowl I would think Papa would go to Vegas or some other betting place that can cover a big payout.Davey mentioned Papa was honest and fair so he will give Davey his cut which would be sizable he would then know what to invest in having lived during that time before so it looks like Davey will be wealthy again.I think Papa would say nothing to Davey's dad about all this.I also wonder about those headaches Davey is experiencing if it has any connection the time traveling with this machine.
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    Aid: 5.10

    Surely Nils must have known he had no chance against Tsuru. Unless there's something we don't know Caleb should not take the Boss at her word in regards to 23. So this power Caleb received from James is it permanent?And does that mean James no longer has these powers?Sorry if these are dumb questions
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    Chapter 6

    "Pant! Pant!Gasp! Wheeze!" I read the first two Doorways stories and binged read the 6 chapters and I'm all caught up. I've been slaving a over a hot video monitor reading this LOL.I love what I'm reading so far.Mike would make a great Secretary of State as long as he brought Nyf with him to tell him what to say
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    Chapter 5

    The Boys didn't know who George Carlin was? Now THAT'S tragic!!!
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    Chapter 4

    Good thing there are no women on this journey.What if their suits clash with their shoes or something?
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    Chapter 5

    Okay sounds like some abuse is going on and Neil is the victim.Explains his surly demeanor.If West somehow finds out about this then he seems like someone who would try to help.He's due to go out of town soon with the family will he want to find a way to stay behind due to the Neil situation?
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