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  1. weinerdog

    Chapter 18

    A buddy of mine had a Great Dane and it was a cool dog but he did tell they cost a lot to maintain.
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    Chapter 18

    I'll say one thing it never seems to be dull over there.I don't want to rain on anybody's parade but so far he brought home boys and all of them been nice.What would he do if one had behavioral problems and didn't get along with the others? Law of averages suggest that would happen eventually.Although I'm sure Alex and the other men try to weed that out.
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    Chapter 17

    What story is that?
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    Chapter 17

    Well Harry looks like a different case from the other boys yeah it's terrible to lose your Mom like that but he did have a loving mother. The other's were on the street and suffered. I think it was David's parents that died if I remember right I guess he could relate to Harry the best.So how many are there now?If the new rooms aren't done how are they doing it?
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    Chapter 16

    Finally found it thank you.As far as the 30 boys I assumed Alex was bringing them but you're right Mr Jobe fertile mind might be going faster then his pen
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    Chapter 16

    Yeah I looked through it again and no mention of dogs.Although funny I was skimming fast through the words and for a brief second I thought I saw the word Dogs lol.I bet that's what happened to @Buz
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    Chapter 16

    I wasn't thinking a part was missing but what I was going to say is the I didn't know it was 30 boys.I assumed Alex had been bringing them.Well next chapter explain how all this happened the dogs also.Also are the new rooms finished?As far as Carleton getting to know each boy individually he's not only a dad but sort of like a 24/7 school teacher
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    Chapter 15

    Carleton mentioned going on a vacation well since its boys Disney world or Six flags has to be in the mix safe to say none of them has experienced that.Matthew apologizing to Carleton was a very thoughtful thing to do.He had to had some kind of good influence growing up
  9. How about that?A story where a guy gets together with his crush with no dramatic roadblocks or issues that stop them.Great story Thanks Coms.Hey everybody save this page you can prove to people that Coms actually finishes multi-chapter stories lol
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    Chapter 14

    If I had been present at that trial I would have been thrown out for laughing at the demonstration .His 25% will keep the house running smoothly. I wonder if the boxes he didn't know about are significant
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    Chapter 13

    There is only one thing I worry about the day may come where Carleton might simply have no room to take another boy .He would have wall to wall sleeping bags of boys if it were up to him but I don't think the law would let him.Did Maria give him an answer?
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    Chapter 12

    He said ten rooms?Wow.I think you would have to expand the kitchen also plus a space for big freezer
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    Chapter 11

    I hope I'm wrong but it sounds like something traumatic happened to Charlie.While this organization overall is doing a great thing I would be uneasy if the Russian Mafia was involved.
  14. I think Dallas has an idea Trey has the hots for him if he asked him to walk home together.That girl in fifth grade that asked Trey to be her boyfriend when he responded by running home for a month and a half I wonder how long she was scarred for? If I was in that locker room situation where Dallas was in another part of the room I would have probably tried some lame scheme like 'Oops I dropped my quarter"and hoped it rolled far enough to Dallas side of the room while he was changing.BTW another awesome picture to go with the story.
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    Chapter 10

    We now have seven with David being the oldest and Charlie being the youngest.The Brady Bunch had 6 and they had pretty much had the same age range so we got come up with a name for this group.Lets see..Carleton's Crew?
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    Chapter 9

    David said he was taught to cook well that right there could solve some staff problems.Carleton said he tipped the waiter it better not be the waiter who sneered at David.
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    Chapter 8

    I love the idea.Some questions would he have to cut down or even stop his duties as a lawyer ?Is he qualified to hire proper help?Or will that group of people he met with do that?I'm worried when you bring on staff you might get someone who may want to take advantage of the boys. I hope he's still allowed to run things his way
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    Chapter 7

    What nobody likes a Dachshund???Kidding lol
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    Chapter 7

    How can you not know you have that building on your property?Wasn't he told about it before he moved in?The acreage must be huge.
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    Chapter 4

    Or maybe a streeeeeeeeeech limo.
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    Chapter 6

    I totally agree about Daan being dead but it was the Russian mafia. Chris dodged a bullet in more ways then one.Interesting about Chris once having a horse that would suggest he grew up in a somewhat stable household. How did he end up with someone like Daan?
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    Die Forelle

    You wrote no Rita warnings yet she still managed to indirectly mess things up for Rick she's the gift that keeps on giving I guess.Luckily he and Gus cross paths again. From what we found out something is going to have to change in Rick's or Gus life to make this more then just a brief fling with Gus being on the road a lot. I have some theories in my head but they probably won't be as good as what you will come up.Can't wait Just thought of something two times in one day Marta seen Gus and Rick together. Is that enough for her to think something is going on?
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    Chapter 5

    What a horrifying incident I would never ever forget it.In addition to what Carleton is doing I would tell him the boy is with God now and is taking care of him but I bet he knows that.
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    Sad News

    Getting a good night's sleep is huge.Sorry for your issues but overall it sounds like things are gradually going in the right direction.we'll keep praying and love one another.We love you also.
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    Chapter 4

    Awesome group of boys.Why a limo though?Even if he can afford it that's a bit much IMO.
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