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Everything posted by weinerdog
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I'm very interested to see what you have planned for the protesters BTW what did they think was happening?It's sad to hear about cases like the boy who was attacking the other boy you want to hate him but the same thing happened to him it's such a vicious cycle. Are you going to post on Christmas eve and day?Did the lawyer come?
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I wonder what idiot served Brad with a citation. If it was a local politician or somebody with their own self interest I would try to get the local news outlets all over this. Try to make this person or persons look foolish.
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You mentioned the person who was accused of having sex with a 13 year old girl.I won't say the name partly because I don't want to but also you can sometimes get in trouble for saying that kind of stuff here.I hope they don't get mad at you.But back to the point despite that allegation the person still got some support it boggles the mind.
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Watching You, Watching Me
weinerdog commented on Comicality's story chapter in Watching You, Watching Me
I never had a hot boy live directly next door to me but if I had that set-up I think I might have done the same thing.I did have a hot boy live across the street from me and we connected but nothing like this could happen in that case.Maybe you can pick up the story from this point in the future and call it "It actually happened" -
As bad as the perverts are I think the people who organize the ring to make a buck are worst.This story has a much action as a typical police TV show Brad ramming his car to stop another car wow you don't read that every day
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I hope the doctor doesn't find any more damage on Lyle.One thing about the defendant who pleaded guilty sometimes they do that so the police don't find more more offenses while they are gathering evidence. I wonder if Brad might need counseling in the future there will be a day where he's at full capacity but there still will be kids out there if he cannot help them how will he react?
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In addition to retired teachers you might might get a few qualified teachers who have children and like the idea of a 4 hour day.I'm sure they will do this but put a break in the 4 hour day even adults get antsy sitting for 4 hours.I remember in the old days(yep I'm old enough to say old days)movie theaters used to have a mid-movie intermission if it was a really long movie.
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With just a casual observance there do seem to be more street kids who are boys as opposed to girls but I'm sure they are out there.Wonder why that that is.
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Very interesting and ambitious plans.BTW Brad said who goes to a Chinese restaurant and doesn't order hot tea?Well I go to Chinese restaurants and don't order hot tea wanna make something of it?Kidding LOL.
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I have to think a local TV station would want do a story on Sanctuary on their news broadcast or the local newspaper.Unlike Carleton who needed to remain anonymous this would be positive.
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I know you said Brad's family was well off and I figured Brad was also only less so after all he is still a college student.But his ideas are so ambitious that I'm thinking Brad's family is on the same wealth level as Carleton was and they must have some good investments.Giving the kid an allowance is an interesting idea he better make sure it is legal because when it comes to kids God knows what stupid laws they may have.
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Infiltration for Information
weinerdog commented on Littlelovestories's story chapter in Infiltration for Information
Zeke should ask Tyler what ulterior motive would he have for Tyler to react like that.I mean what purpose would Zeke have to "play" Tyler? -
So is there or isn't there another person in the house?IF there isn't then Tyler is really messed up.We found out a little more of his background.Correct me if I'm wrong but it seemed at some point in the chapter Zeke was starting to be referred to as Lee.Are Zeke and Lee the same person or am I missing something.
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How is the security there? I can picture a wrong kind of person doing say lurking in the shower area or something like that.Somebody is going to try .
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I hope the women Mom brings is a heavy hitter just in case someone from CPS or elsewhere tries to start some trouble.The timing of Andy showing could be perfect since he can cook he can help Mrs.Jenkins.Also studying to be a psychologist he could be help that way since Brad mentioned counseling maybe Andy's professor would want to come and help.
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I didn't think about bored kids like Bubba wanting to hang out there.I could also see some caring kids who are not street kids wanting to help out.
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While Rick is having a good time Willy Kohler still creeps into his thoughts I was afraid of that.I have a feeling that is going to come up when Senior gets into town.I see Rick and Gus getting closer until Senior arrives to complicate things.What will your forecast say then? Mostly Senior with a 30 percent chance of Rita?
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Holiday Rush (Part Four)
weinerdog commented on Comicality's story chapter in Holiday Rush (Part Four)
I have seen movies on TV when they showed the exact same over again after already showing it. First time this had happened while reading a story lol.Hey cool it was a good scene and still a great chapter.I still think Jalen will "forget" about his car. -
Holiday Rush (Part Three)
weinerdog commented on Comicality's story chapter in Holiday Rush (Part Three)
I have just binged read the last three chapters and am about to read chapter 4 that just got put up.I don't know if Coach Ted is going to cross the line yet or not but if he doesn't here's what I predict Jalen leaves and then comes back saying 'DARN my car got towed I guess I have to stay the night".Going to read the next chapter now to see if I'm right. -
When I think of kids on the street I think of parents kicking kids out or an abusive situation the kid is trying to get away from I have to confess I didn't think of siblings who don't want to be separated. Really there should be a way for CPS to make sure siblings don't get separated
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Pat and the other boy and girl was worried about Brad's intentions it's the first thing that comes to mind to these kids if someone tries to help.The most important stuff is at the place already .Is there room for ping pong tables or a small gym that kind of stuff?
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Once everything is done how they go about getting the kids?In the other stories they went out and got them so I guess that's how they'll do it here at least at first .
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I'm curious about possible red tape by the local authorities.The church charity I mentioned in my last chapter comment has sometimes been hassled by the local park department believe it or not for giving food to the homeless like they have nothing better to do.I'm sure Brad is very smart and I would guess he 's speaking to lawyers about possible hurdles as he proceeds
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We don't have a name yet for our hero.Glad dad is helping out.We have a program at my church where I volunteer to help where once a month we go to local parks and distribute bags of canned and nonperishable food plus a few toiletries to the homeless we get it from Costco werehouse we make about 100 bags. One weekend a month all the masses six of them contribute to our group called caritas.I find the congregation to be very generous. I would love to see a church (the right kind)get involved in something like what's happening in this story.
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Tim must have been 18 when he was kicked out of his house because I saw no paperwork issues when he moved in Paul house and enrolled in high school because high schools want parental information when someone new enrolls.Tim calling Paul's mom 'Mom" was especially touching and when she said to Brad 'Welcome to the family" that said it all.Another great story
