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I only ask this because Carleton has never spoke of it but there is some kind of group insurance policy on these boys right?On one hand this may be the perfect place for the two boys with a lot compassion at this place but at the same time the mental damage that happened to these boys it's possible they may need a different kind of help with this place may not be able to give.Carleton will figure it out.
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He said there were no seats yet in the theater. I think instead of traditional seats he should put sofas and bean bag chairs etc and carpet because kids like to lay down. Just a thought
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I assume Alex dad was smart but this was NOT smart it would have been far better for Carleton to fly under the radar.One has to wonder if this is one reason why the house is empty these days.Michael's parent should be brought up on charges.Kicking a kid out because he's gay is bad enough but kicking a kid out because he gave money to another homeless kid that's mind boggling.
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The way I see it Kevin should just go with it let Rory take the lead it seems to be going in the right direction.In a lot of these stories the person in Kevin's position does something stupid to complicate things but I don't see how he could it's looking good.I don't think even I could mess this up if it was me.
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Lucky for Alex Carleton was around and had him checked out I have seen people like Alex before who could put it away and never gained an ounce I would thought nothing of it although I have heard of that condition Alex had.I hope it's not anytime soon but when this story ends do a epilogue so we know how the kids end up.I know it would be a long chapter 32 kids after all.
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It's the unintentional lines that are always funny😄
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Working from home and building a movie theater both sound like great ideas.I had not thought about this before this chapter but what time frame is this set in?When they got all the books I realized there was no mention of going online which we all know the kids would do for school at least if not other things.I don't recall hearing computers being mentioned in this story
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Bad timing for Bert to show up when he did just as Gus was going to get Joey out of the street that gesture could have led to some interaction with Gus doesn't Bert know it's Rita's job to mess things up for Rick.Speaking of Rita her blowing Rick a kiss like that in a crowd will keep the gossip going strong.The one thing Rita might be doing for Rick is providng a cover for Rick's secret .Mrs Lee's comments about Rick living with the power out etc. in a town like this others probably have made similar observations if not for Rita the gossip might be different
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So Carleton reading to the kids can I assume all the kids are proficient in English?Or are some still a work in progress?I really would like to try one of Maria's very large hamburgers just have to make sure Alex is not around when I do
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A Cape Cod Yankee (Part 1)
weinerdog commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in A Cape Cod Yankee (Part 1)
When Vic was crying over his parents leaving Hunter could have told Vic that he was lucky that he had parents worth crying over but Jaime's parents were like that for him.What's the address for the restaurant they went to I feel like going over there now and I'm in San Diego LOL -
I get that Carleton is protective of his boys but with all due respect just because Sal and Mohammed are a gay couple I don't think that warning was warranted.But I also understand after seeing all those sleazy people from before I guess Carleton just wanted to be clear.Another good chapter.
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The Mayor Greenburg you mentioned is that a made-up name or does he represent someone?You gave us a sneak preview what was going to happen to Bob in the last chapter comments Tristan is like a squirrel...always gathering nuts..
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I saw a documentary on Pakistan for the most part at night time because of their religion you see very few women the street and almost never see a girl.So for these sex starved perverted men of the country what is there?Boys of course.To be fair officially the Muslim religion doesn't approve of that but these men who follow most of their religion and insist the females follow it to a T but this particular part about sex with boys goes out the window.Such hypocrisy.(Sorry to be so heavy handed)
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Even if those men(and I use the term loosely)are ignorant or cynical about Carleton's presentation there still isn't anything remotely funny about that.Can't wait to see what you got planned.I bet you the men from The Hague was plenty p*****d off those are powerful guys you don't want mad at you.So no goat eh?They don't have room for another kid?(So sorry for the awful pun)
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Hunter's grandparent are first rate.There's a saying in the entertainment industry that talent skips a generation so in Hunter's family being a decent person skips a generation.Great to see Vic
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Hmm it's like Deja vu. Actually I'm guilty of the same kind of thing in an earlier chapter comment I suggested something that you already mentioned.It was still good to read this chapter in proper context.I will take one small minor issue basketball is being played in more and more places these day all Sal needs to know is the hoop is ten feet high.I love Carleton's idea about spending one on one time with the kids but with so many kids I think he may have to retire to do that.Now to read chap 17
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One reason why those mail order drugs are successful is because of how high the drugs are to begin with.I bet there won't be a dry eye in the place after Carleton does his UN address.Would Sal be a live-in 24-7 bodyguard?If so then Maria's cooking will be the deal maker.
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You make excellent points but with his duties as an attorney plus he was constantly adding kids he had a very full plate .I bet he was planning these things before he met with an untimely demise. My guess is the kids that were already there got taken care of but after that it couldn't be continued. We will find more details as we go along.
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I didn't notice at first LOVE!!! Your profile picture
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I thought that was a possibility.I guess we'll find out in the coming chapters but how much time has past?I'm thinking Robert could contact some of boys who I guess are now men if I'm comprehending this right.
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Glad you're feeling better.You said a surprise ending with you if it wasn't a surprise ending THAT would have been a surprise.So what's the age requirement to be mayor of NYC?Could TJ be mayor?I don't remember did Tristan give Kevin his uh......stuff back?
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I thought of one more thing for the boys and this one won't be too expensive a couple of basketball hoops.Basketball is popular almost everywhere.At the risk of sounding like no fun the one thing NOT to get is a playstation that would mess things up there.
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Daniel's addition is good timing him being 16 and with Stephen leaving he could fill the void of being an older brother.I still don't like the idea of hiring security but maybe it was something that would of had to be done eventually.
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I imagine there has to be a way for Carleton to address the UN without putting the kids at risk.If it is too much of a risk I'm then I would reluctantly say don't do it being under the radar may have been a contributing reason why this has worked so well.Is there someone they can take Stephen to before going to NYU he's going to need some help to learn how to interact with his own peer group again after being so long in this house with the younger boys.
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One thing I know with my past dogs a 25 pound bag won't last long with 6 puppies.I have a question will some of these kid when they get to be teenagers want to do things on their own like kids in public school not to mention when they start getting into girls(or other boys).They have each other and that's awesome but will they start venturing outside the house.
