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🥁Da dit boom
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My first reaction is it's The Whale that James sees.Charlie kept referring to James as some kind of creature are we to assume his mind is in some kind of altered state?
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I don't know how the author is going to do it but I'm going to bet Davey is not going to see jail time.
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I'm glad everybody is enjoying the trip .I'm no expert on this by any means but is it possible Scotty is getting too attached to Uncle Adam?Adam may have to leave town for a job opportunity or something.Maybe I worry too much
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A lot of thing got covered in this chapter.I'm glad Sarah actually listened a lot of other people in her position would have already made up their minds.I'm glad she's going to find some scholarships for Kayden. Good for Kayden for not going back home right away.I wonder if Mark is going to ask Kayden to pretend thing are hunky dory when the Grandparent visit? Diana seems to fall for men who are abusers.I hope I'm dead wrong about this but a lot of people who were abused as kids become abusers themselves so I'm really worried that Trent one day may really lose it and hit Kayden.If something like this does happens I hope it's in a way where Trent stops short of hitting Kayden and then starts to realize he's becoming his Dad and step dad.I hope none of this happens but you have to realize it could.
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I remember years ago we took a trip to Disneyland we stayed in a close by hotel we first checked The Disneyland hotel it was more than twice the nice hotel we stayed at I think they charged more because Disneyland was in the name.I bring this up because most likely The Disneyland restaurants are most likely similar but if Mickey and Goofy can make a 7 year old kid happy then it's worth it.
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This chapter sounds like it is setting up for Davey's dad to become president.I guess the idea that they could have stopped 9/11 but didn't and they were getting away with it was too abhorrent for Davey to let that happen despite the risk.I know his dad said he would face justice but if this went to trial you would get a a lot of hung juries I would think. I agree that Davey did this for the right reason but it's easy to see somebody doing something like this for the wrong reason.
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Maybe James can recall an old Batman episode and act accordingly. The way James stayed close to that bird it would have scared the s--t out of me. Why did James want the jacket?To wrap around his midsection?
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Maybe you said in a previous chapter but which Disney are they going to Disneyland or Disneyworld?They said 8 hour trip so they could be close to the midwest one direction or another. I've been to Disneyland but everyone tells me Disneyworld is better.
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In my experience I have never seen a set up like the one tried by Adam's mom work not with me or any friends.Not that it can't happen but I suspect it's rare.I'm willing to bet most happen in an unexpected way
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Sean is somebody I see finding out about a kid who abused by his parents most likely gay and wanting to adopt the kid.
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It's cool that Davey and Brian have kids I wonder if the author was still around if he would have been inspired to use their kids to go back in time to deal with more recent events.I don't get why they would not at least check out the information on the disc to possibly stop an attack no matter where the intelligence comes from? I am glad to be way off on something I was worried about.Sean and Brandon's company is very successful.Some of the technology comes from the time machine could the wrong kind of person figure it out?
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I was thinking Bex was going find Sarah all out of sorts and when she couldn't comfort her it may have stressed her enough for her powers to manifest.I guess that can still happen in a later chapter.Althought it hasn't been established when it was either Caleb or 23 that was assigned to kidnap a girl and some of us thought that was Bex.But since Charlie has been taken shouldn't Peter's family be going the extra mile to make sure they don't take Bex?I know they have James on their mind at the moment but I wouldn't leave Bex alone in her room I would have Tasha stay with her.
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I wonder if Billy makes the Olympics I wonder if the so-called Coach will tell friends '"I coached him"🙄. If he does well in the Olympics they can make a running shoe named after him
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I knew you can catch lobsters in a net but Never saw one get caught on a regular fishing pole. They were talking about carbs in pizza.I have seen in the frozen food section Pizza made with a cauliflower crust very low in carbs.I hate cauliflower so I have resisted having it but I'm told it's not bad.Maybe one day I'll be brave enough.
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I'm about publish a book '"!00 reasons not to have kids" but first I have to get your permission to use day 1 to 7 in this chapter ...Ok you can have a co-author credit LOL. Both Seamus and Matt have valid complaints but also insecurities.There's no good guy or bad guy here it's both of them.But they will work it out they love Aidan too much not too. There were bigger issues here in this chapter but nobody has pointed this out I appreciate how much of a loyal friend Matt is saying he made plans with his old friends for spring break and this may be the last time he sees them.Same with Jase and Hilary about missing them. A lot of friends forget you existed when they get a significant other. BTW I must have missed the chapter Where Seamus and Matt got married.....Oh they didn't? Sure could have fooled me
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Cool that Davey the won Bronze medal so his baseball playing in this timeline wasn't all for naught. This truly is a changed time line his dad became a Democrat? Davey ended up in the military again along with Brian but only as a reserve and as a JAG so I don't see a war happening.He does mention trying to stop 9/11.I wonder if he'll try to tell Clinton to stay away from Luwinski. To me nothing obvious has happened in this chapter so I still think the Sean/Brandon project will be the big thing that might cause trouble
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Hmm Omelets.Who stocked the fridge?
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There has to be a way to find them is Charlie's tracking device still working?That's the only way I see that they can find them.But you're the author you can make up something LOL
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Things are going to get more strange?Really? In that video if the guy in the balcony was Neil ,West could probably see that so I'm guessing it's a bad guy with a connection to the three guys at the construction site.
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25-30 mile that's a official marathon(26 miles) Is that the olympic event Adam has in mind?
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As soon as that dirty political trick with the picture of Davey and Brian appeared I figured Jeremy would be brought up.Doing it During a Barbara Walters interview was brilliant. The business venture that Sean and Brandon started that has been heavily invested in by Davey, Brian and his Mom sounds good but sometimes the timings bad.This is just me speculating but what if the business fails through dirty dealing or they steal Sean's technology etc.I don't know enough about this to know how the bad guys would do it but I guess it could be done.My long winded point is it would ruin everybody involved financially. Could this be the reason why they would do the time machine yet again?I haven't read ahead so this is a wild guess on my part. If they did decide to do this then they could come back before davey throw's the no-hitter in college.That way Sean is already adopted and is still his brother and Davey can make sure the damning picture never happens and he can try baseball again and the off to stop the bad guys who ripped them off.Of course some or all of this may never happen so take it with a grain of salt but them being so invested in this project has me worried If Davey makes it to this present year he'll be doubly pissed off because The Raiders(Traitors) will have come back to Oakland only to leave again to Las Vegas
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This chapter made think.I don't remember the last time I saw a jukebox.Do you actually know of a place that still has one?
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Hideyoshi actually thought he succeeded but he didn't so James had to come to make them aware.I hope after this Hideyoshi and Tsuru won't be so what's the word condescending toward James
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When you started the chapter with something shadowy and formless grazed my leg I was thinking WTH is the author changing genres on us in mid story is this now a horror story?LOL If I had been Jonathan my mind would have been racing first a mysterious note and then 5 unanswered calls I wouldn't have known what to think and I guess it was the same way with him calling at 2 AM. Fortunately Jonathan was able to understand and they ended up having what seems to be a pretty nice date. I'm worried some incident might happen at the restaurant but that's me. The job might be a good distraction for Ethan and The Gordons house would be a good place to be at the moment. I have to admit I never thought of if asking for a copy of your birth certificate a would automatically come with a background check.I can't imagine any fugitives asking for a copy.I remember having to order a copy of my birth certificate about 5-10 years ago.I hardly remember the state I was born in but the certificate arrived and no law enforcement knock. at my door so I guess I'm OK LOL
