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Remind me never to get on your bad side
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I'm surprised the Dean spoke to Jim .Some are legitimately busy but others wouldn't take the time to speak to Jim
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Well Davey and David connected.And David said "I love you too" But no way does Davey feel the same way and David knows about the previous timeline.I think Davey loves David the way you love a good friend .If Brian matures and is closer to what the other Brian was and Brian and Davey become friends there is no way David cannot be aware of that and being human and a teen at that I think means this relationship will be ill-fated.And it might mean Davey loses a friend at the same time.
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Well that was a bit of a surprise.I wonder does Dale's dad have to recuse himself in this case since his son is close to the victim?I'm not sure how that works You usually don't associate football coaches being supportive especially in this kind of situation but let it be said that Hunter's coach is.
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So glad they had the very revealing talk.While Matt made his share of mistakes Seamus seemed to not consider something,Seamus was 19 and somewhat imtimidated by Kelly and felt he never measured up.Now here's Matt who's barely 21 with a kid and Seamus is this wealthy guy who owns 5 businesses .Couldn't Seamus relate that Matt felt the same way he did with Kelly? As far as Seamus concern about the possible embezzlement it all adds up (no pun intended).Mike was friends with Kelly since childhood and most likely knew about the upcoming divorce and may have felt Seamus didn't deserve the assets.It sounds like Kelly's parents felt the same way they most likely knew Mike since he was a kid it would make sense that they would be in on this together.I'd love for Matt to find the evidence for that
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So it's just Tony and his guitar.When I think of that the first person that comes to mind is a James Taylor type am I close?I may be missing someone else obvious.If the right person hears him he could get musicians hired and a studio to work in .
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As big of a badass Hideyoshi is I guess we know Tsuru is the head badass here "Yes Dear" LOL With all these people here Tasha,Tuva,and Caleb this could be an impressive bunch.As far as the steaks go if an army travels on it's stomach ten they are well set. It would seem Father would be a enemy to all of them which makes me wonder what will happen when they find out about Casper's and Father's connection BTW cool playlists
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Mission - Do Your Job
weinerdog commented on Littlelovestories's story chapter in Mission - Do Your Job
I hope my fear is proven wrong but during the time between the last chapter and this chapter I was wondering what if G ends up being a traitor. This so called fake mission seemed off to me.The reason why Zeke and Tyler were told not tell each other what they were told might be because then they might figure out what's really is going on.We find out Zeke was once G's favorite are ther feelings G has that Zeke is unaware of? Don't know the timeline of this story but we know Tyler has had some depression I don't know if he used the iPad to check on any news but having Blake on his screensaver I wonder if Blake died yet at this time and how Tyler would react to that. -
Wow what a suspenseful chapter I kept saying to myself 'Hurry up Rick" Good ole Marta I had to laugh at her "Hockey whore" comment. Too soon to think this but the fact Heinrich hasn't called yet makes me wonder did he collapse at hearing the news that he may be broke. That conversation Rick overheard the when Zoltan said "You do not have a choice.You will do as I say." It's like he still thinks of himself as Gus guardian.There must be some kind of one-sided contract or perhaps illegal contract for Zoltan to be so arrogant.I'm looking forward to see what words are exchanged like Gus finding out about Zoltan's visit to Rick. You sort of gave us a clue when you mentioned "Willy advisories" I guess that means there is going to be some kind of confrontation.Rick better keep some kind of heavy plumbers tool close by to use.
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Yeah I get Mom 's grief but it is no excuse for being unethical and a lying sack of.... As we saw enough signs that he was going to do and say exactly what he did.Last time he had Brian to help sort out hit feelings and what was happening with his uncle this time he had nobody he was and is a mess and the country's ill-conceived quarantine policy looks like it confused him more.On the positive side he did own up to starting the fight and did seem to be listening a little bit when Davey told him about before .That is more then I can say for Davey's mother. Davey is going to have a lot of time to reflectI can't imagine he made many friends with Davey's group of friend here.Will Brian when he thinks back on things that were said put 2+2 together with Trevor and Brandon and the barn?Speaking of that Davey told Brian that Sean was a time traveler also will Davey tell Trevor and Brandon that also?If they know that Sean knows about them in the other timeline then their current treatment of Sean would be pointless.Maybe Sean would have a chance with Brandon again after all.As for Brian when he's not playing sports he will have a lot of time to think perhaps he will talk about how things were in the other timeline with Davey.He is what a sophomore now?Maybe by the time he's a senior he will mature enough to be a closer version of the other Brian.
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Well I'm glad they had that talk and everything's cool but does James really have to apologize?Casper pretty much knows what he's thinking anyways. It will be interesting to see how this Caleb plan works. BTW is Casper aware that Father means Tasha harm?
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I don't understand what "the war is on" means.I guess the next chapter will explain that. We'll see how the cocktail party goes
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I have always respected someone being able to write a song yeah it helps to have a good singer singing it but someone has to be creative enough to make a good song to begin with I think that part of it the public doesn't appreciate enough. So is some big shot at the cocktail party going to discover Tony? Kidding.
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We got a couple of big clues of what may happen in the future.Trevor revealed to Davey that it was Brian's idea to throw Sean in the trash and it seemed Trevor and Brandon went along with it because they were afraid of being suspected as gay by Brian.Sean wasn't in school on this day so that might mean when Brian sees Sean when he does come back to school Brian will show his ugly side and Davey will witness that. The other clue is Sean talking about building another machine the only reason why this would be brought up in the story is although they may not want to they may have no choice but to try to time travel again to fix things.The direction this timeline is going it would seem to support that
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Until I read @drsawzallcomment I was going to ask why is Casper agreeing to these meetings?Then your response to that just made go ooooookay! It's safe to say Casper is not stupid so I'll assume it will make sense
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The gesture of Tony putting Jim on his bank account says a lot
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There's a consensus here that WW111 has been adverted but all the pieces for that to happen stillest and one little mistake can make this happen again.In this lifeline it looks like Bush run against Reagan in 84 that alone can upset the applecart
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Something freaked Neil out when that car with tinted windows showed up the fact that Neil left without finishing the game tells whoever the person in the car was is really bad news.Some stuff still needs to be found out.
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You sort of answered the question I was going to ask you, you only mention Jim,Tony and Mr.Thomas are Jim and Tony literally the only employees?
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This might be an insignificant line in the chapter but Davey leaving the PE locker room while saying the reason had to leave had do with David as he described his bare legs being smooth and silken that tells me that thing might not go as well with Brian as he hopes and if that's the case well there's David . Some of the talk Davey had with Reagan leads me to think everything heading into a disastrous direction .Shevardnadze arrives earlier ten expected ,Reagan speaks of doing a bombing raid and then they mention where they are possible becoming a target which as if there hasn't been enough already more main characters getting killed.Hope I'm wrong
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The main question I have is how did Det. Murphy know Farmer wasn't setting them up.Farmer hung up abruptly so Murphy had to make a snap decision.I hope he explains what he was thinking in a later chapter
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Matt has a talent for saying the wrong thing at the wrong time.I don't know what hell I'm doing when it comes to this topic but when you wrote that Matt's friends were no Dr. Phil well I do know that I don't want Dr. Phil giving me any advice. Talking to Brad is the right course of action to take. The one question Matt should ask himself is does he want Seamus in his and Aiden's life or not?
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Mission - Success, is Letting Him Fail
weinerdog commented on Littlelovestories's story chapter in Mission - Success, is Letting Him Fail
What will happen if Tyler actually succeeds?He might do something unconventional or have just plain dumb luck. Considering what Tyler had gone through in his actual life this kidnapping him in the middle of the night was a bit much. -
Bonus Chapter: Natalie Sharpe
weinerdog commented on Rhythminthemind's story chapter in Bonus Chapter: Natalie Sharpe
Would James have been revealing too much if he asked Natalie about the Caleb situation?Overall it sounded like a good session when they were talking about the gay issue.I hope he and Casper will be OK. Did Liz really call Jack like.Who needs a friend like that
