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  1. weinerdog

    Chapter 23

    TJ actions about not being found were brilliant except for using the name Jack Kraft unless their was a reason for it I missed. JC waiting for him really showed how much he loves TJ.It must have been really tough for him to do this knowing how much he loves his brothers.I could help noticing in the reunion scene at Aunt Kat's that Lucas was not mentioned I hope that doesn't mean anything
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    Chapter 14

    I bet you could write an interesting chapter about the parents meeting.Carlo better prepare them for Rita lol
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    Chapter 4

    The wave what an interesting name.So they found a way to make Mars habitable it sounds like it something like Siberia.There are still newspaper around?Like everyone else I hope they don't get separated.
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    Chapter 5

    I have a some niece's and nephews that go to high school and I would ask about bullying and gay people they all said it is not a problem at their school but they heard things about other schools.It's better than before but it still has a ways to go
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    Growth All Around

    Bella was worried about Pop being uptight but at the same time she hits Cody with a baseball bat just saying. Pop says"The poor guy is named Tracy?"this from a guy named Blu. Awesome gag the kids with Blu and Tracy's help played on Bella
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    Chapter 22

    I guess all the secrets were because of TJ's frame of mind but I agree with @Wesley8890 that they shouldn't have.The way TJ was able evade them from following him has shown he would be qualified to run BHO even though he dosen't want to.Hey is it out of the question if he can be both a Dancer and do the BHO gig?
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    Chapter 22

    @Wesley8890 Just wrote Josh and Jeff but it's Jake and Josh right?Unless I missed something?
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    Chapter 3

    Very thoughtful of Colin to suggest his parent stay in one of the rooms at the Uncle's house though he was properly motivated.I'm not sure I would want to live in that world if Colin and Billy didn't know what Mexican food or a sub sandwich was
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    Chapter 13

    That's a heck of a way to come out.I wonder why Tony hasn't too Anthony he owns the building
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    Chapter 21

    When Dr.Martin on the phone said the words "My brother your father"TJ didn't question that part so did I miss TJ being told about Dr Martin's family connection?I knew it was going to be bad news when it was revealed Dr Martin hadn't returned to the hospital. Emily made it sound like BHO is only going to be left to TJ.I would hope along with Beau and Grayson also. Maybe the name of the story should have been called"Dancing on a Target" BTW I grew up in a Navy family and we were stationed in Key West for awhile way back when The Miami Dolphins were good.No I'm not kidding they were good at one time.
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    Chapter 21

    You know something?You're twisted.LOL
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    Chapter 2

    I might have missed it but are women on the ship? Interesting world
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    Chapter 12

    Small world Puppy was my Dad's pet name for my Mom.One thing I'm not sure of is Chet going to be in the apartment with them? If he is cool if he isn't why two rooms?
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    Chapter 20

    Doc Martin is very good guess and that would be cool.My first though was maybe Jeff.I hope this doesn't mean something happened to Dr. Hottie. Emily working for the agency huh?Something should tell TJ to never ask her about work.
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    Chapter 20

    Come on we are all well after two calm chapters.And now THIS!!!!!
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    Chapter 19

    Ok nice calm chapter. Nothing earth shattering happened or was talked about.Who are you and what have you done with @AquariusGuy?Seriously excellent chapter and @Wesley8890 doesn't need heart medicine
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    Chapter 28

    At school far so good for Jack.I guess Jimmy passed the test and stood by him some readers might have been skeptical.Now to see how Brian and Tyler will react. Will that stuff Tracy taught Jimmy work when basketball season starts?For those of you who are not basketball fans moving without ball is a big deal.Some of Jimmy's teammates might be in for a surprise.
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    Chapter 13

    I have to admit I didn't see it ending.I also know its hard to be writing two stories at once.I meant to ask how did the boys grow up on the island did they have TV etc. or was it in poverty? Anyway just a thought in the future how about a possible story where when the boys are a little older they cross path with some the Peter Charles characters with the boats of course. Biily Kevin and Glen can be their wise advisors.But you're the writer whatever you come up with will be good I'm sure.Thank you for a great story
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    Chapter 12

    This is most likely me missing something wouldn't be the first time.I know he got the guys passports but I thought he was going to go back to the Island with them.Since he's going home what's the plan? Two of guys are underage is Billy planning on being a legal guardian to them?Like their trip
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    Chapter 18

    Love the chapter.Emily just said interview not job interview but that's what it most likely is.But the Agency?If true there's a lot we don't know about Emily.I wonder if Beau knows he's going to be recruited.BTW MIT and Lucas at Harvard?I would feel way too dumb to hang with these guys. The stuff about Dr. Martin never returning could be worrisome.I'm assuming he will resurface eventually .Agency also? Oh yeah almost forgot with all the other stuff JC and TJ are progressing quite nicely.lol
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    Chapter 17

    As long as agent 86 isn't involved it's all good
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    Chapter 17

    I should of known what set TJ off my bad.I have a dear friend that was a victim of a rape.Only her family and a few close friends knew about it.Outwardly she was very strong but she told me about stuff she'd think about when she was alone with her thoughts.Some people believe murder is worse thing you can do to a person but I think it's rape because of how the victim has to live with it. I get why Emily is was keeping secrets but she's sort of lying to T.J. when she tells him they don't know where the two POS's are.It's for the right reason of course but has she considered how T.J. will react when he finds out they are dead?Paul James saying they may be dead might soften that blow. I can just guess how that talk with Uncle Brayden and Co. will go did it had to be on his birthday?Will the Dr. Martin thing come up I wonder.
  23. Ricky must like those Italian sandwiches also.He must realize that if Jamie gave up that to be with him then he's REALLY into him.lol
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    Chapter 11

    It will be interesting if the boys(I know a couple of them are men)got to see snow.I wonder if they have the concept of Christmas and Santa Clause.Whether they are boys or young men they are all like teenagers wanting to go with Moe because he knows the best places to eat.Classic teenager.
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    Chapter 16

    I don't see the problem🤫
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