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The mystery voice is solved.Now its time to find out what's going with those thugs that was looking for Kana.First thought is sounds like some kind of slave labor is going on or worse
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Rita said that when her husband gets there they'll work out a way to earn the college money.I find that exciting and scary at the same time.
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Im taking a wild guess.On that page is a picture of TJ and JC as little kids.We'll see how off I am.Will any other Dancing characters be mentioned in passing?TJ said Trace could pass for a twin does anybody know if twins can be identical except for eye color?Oh and @Wesley8890 is right you are evil.
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Just once I'd like to have something like that happen to me lol.
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The one consistent thing about all your characters they make great sounding food.I don't know what plans you have for guys and the Grandfather II but I would think taking the the hotel guests on a boat tour with Akela and Liko's help might be lucrative.Just me thinking.
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If I didn't know better I would say Akela was making a move on Billy sleeping with him in his cabin.Did Billy look at him a certain way?One of your story descriptions says no sex so I know that's not going to happen.When I heard the term big island I was thinking Hawaii But as far as I know no Hawaiian island sunk after their last volcano eruption(I may be wrong) .You didn't give a location name(unless I missed it)Are these islands based on a real place you know about?
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Soon as I heard TJ say in his narration that it had to be a friend of Grandma's I sorta figured who it might be.Party of six?We already know of J.C. and Jack and Tracy are obvious( I Think)I wonder if there is a surprise in the rest of the group.Good talk between TJ and Lucas.Grayson is awesome.
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Interesting job to be sure
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If you haven't read his other stories please do.In addition to this one of course
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The way you described Akela I had a certain person in mind.There was an young actor from the 40's and 50's named Sabu and any movie that had a jungle or an island as a backdrop good chance he was in it .If I'm not mistaken he was the first Mowgli from the movie The Jungle Book.Am I close?Is that who you had in mind for that character?
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Ok somewhat more racy but that's cool.Can't wait to see how all this develops.Maybe this isn't the place to mention this but I'm following you and like the other story I didn't get a notification.No big deal I'll just go to your page everyday but I thought I'd let you know
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Giving his dad the boot was one way to show you don't always get what you want. I have a sinister way to smite the family. Are you a promoter for a film company or WWE? If not you may have missed your calling. Readers of this story are going to be sure to come back now.
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Great chapter.I have a idea and I honestly don't think its inappropriate or spiteful.Somebody should make sure that Sebastian's Dad finds out why he didn't get the position.It might be the only way to start getting Sebastian to stop being a douche(stronger word here might be better).Looking forward to TJ and Lucas talk.
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Interesting island . A local kid a fixture at the hotel.Another guy guarding his house with an visible weapon.what a start of a story.BTW I didn't get a notification about the story maybe there's a SNAFU with GA
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Whistle And Pop Chapter 1
weinerdog commented on Comicality's story chapter in Whistle And Pop Chapter 1
Great job of setting the stage.I had a version of this when I was that age in that case my friend lived across the street.A situation like this can be exhilarating and frustrating at the same time you captured that very well. On a side note in Cali our neighborhoods are not allowed to do what Josh and Salvies neighborhood was doing with the fireworks.Except this year when all the fourth of July shows were canceled our neighborhood did just that there were cop cars driving up and down our street all night. -
Loved the story.It certainly would be Adam to keep the tradition going.There were so many kids to keep track of its understandable if a few got lost in the shuffle.Any thoughts on what happened to Travis and Frankie?I know writing is hard work so until the next story whenever that will be.Thank You
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A plane now well if you can why not.The people at MedTech better be on their toes Kevin and Shawn will be there a lot more now.I think Kevin over reacted at the joke.
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TJ really has to think about something.It seems like his 14 year old brother Grayson is more mature then he is.But he's going in the right direction.Everybody at the breakfast table was as thick as I was.Nobody made a possible connection between Jaxson Woolery and J.C. Woolery or at least an "Hey you don't think......" Really loving this story
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Opps I didn't realize this was in the future.You sort of gave away what happens in Dancing.I gotta watch my comments over there now.But no worries I thought that might happen it will still be interesting to see how they got there.I didn't make the Woolery connection boy am I dumb.Loving this story
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I have missed your thought provoking(and lengthy lol) comments.In these times we live in I was worried you got sick.Good to hear from you again
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Found out about and read what's so far in the story today. @Ronyx gave a plug today from his story glad he did.TJ getting angry totally understand but a bloody nose? Quite an over reaction.I know its way too soon in the story to mention this but based on what you mentioned TJ being a dancer probably means he's going to meet Tracy from Dancing On A Star.After this chapter I'm wondering what you might do there.Maybe have TJ take away the lead role of The Nutcracker from Tracy lol.
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We always knew that Charles was a good big bro but after what was revealed in this chapter he's really awesome.Cool that they took all those kids on fishing trips.
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I agree with the comments about these guys not being good BF material. The ride home isn't done yet I think Jimmy will do so more touchy feely stuff and Jeff will continue to be hard.After this development Jack should say let's just be friends even FWB for now.I wrote before Jack should wait awhile before having a BF.He hasn't been mentioned for awhile but maybe it will be Tyler after all.Thanks @Ronyx for the tip on the other story I most likely would not have found it otherwise.If you think its good then that's good enough for me.I'm going there now
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Another interesting trip.I have heard about aliens possibly being in Egypt and the pyramids.But the idea that they were here at the same time with the Inca's I didn't realize the times coincided interesting.So why don't come today?They probably take one look and say "Nah this place is too weird these days"
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South America trip sounds interesting.I must have missed something what was the ten dozen carton of eggs for ?For them?That's 1440 eggs
