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Excellent chapter. Now the question will be is James pushed at the folks?Is he going to reveal to Tasha and Caleb that was his grandfather . His Grandfather should have recognized James voice at hello maybe he doesn't talk to him as much as his wife does

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That child services lady shouldn't have a job the judge could see how biased she was. Now that the boys are physically in school it will be interesting to see if they can make friends

Remember when Grandma was upset when they walked into the building the loudmouths said they were going to burn in hell.A couple of things I wonder if it occurred to her she may have been hurting other people when she spouted her opinions.And also the person that shot her son most likely had similar thoughts to her I hope that makes her reconsider but I doubt it

Well Lucas changed what he wanted to do with his life because of Pascual he stopped having friends and his relationship with his sister is strained. Quite a big investment in one man. We know Pascual got jealous was it love or being possessive?If push cam to shove would Pascual end his marriage for Lucas

A couple of weeks ago I would have picked Caleb in this battle but after some training with James grandfather I'm going with Tasha. Besides how else are we going to find out how Caleb found James house. Watch out Caleb

As soon as it was said the lady was unhappy to see Lenny at the house I knew something was up. Good thing Jim recorded everything. I'm curious what experiences Jim had with child services.I would also like to see what proof that con man will offer up that says he's a relative of the boys

That "joke" by Winters you totally expect to happen in middle school and high school but you would think all that nonsense stops in college but it doesn't.The old movie Revenge of the Nerds makes that point very well. You put some great reference material in this chapter on the Pansexual topic.I recently come across some stories on GA about Pansexual and Asexual people those are two topics the general public are really clueless about.

So Philip sounds like he might be on board now with Farmer.From my readers perspective I'm not sure if what Richard has been saying about Farmer is true or not is he on the level or are they trying to con Philip.Are we going to see Sturgis?That will give us a lot of clues .

Boy a lot of that family is ass backwards .I hope it's better for Chris in this lifeline. Davey's Dad mentioning visiting quarantine hospitals with Davey makes me think now more than ever that they'll see Brian.

Glad you're back with another story so quick.Needless to say just by reading the story tags and the beginning of the chapter some serious stuff is going to happen here. I have never come across a female with the name of Jose or is that shorthand for another name?Is it a common name in that part of the world?

We were told the reason why Casper's Dad hit him but surely he couldn't have been so clueless on all the negative impact that would have on Casper.Whatever reason they had not to talk to Casper about having possible powers could not have had any worse effect then what Casper's dad actually did. All those powers in James house and nobody can make a decent meal?Jeez.I would be like.You can cook Casper?GO FOR IT!!!

Maybe Rita visited your town

Pete and Joey are getting to know their new Dad more and more.Excellent Chapter

What the heck can Tyler do to help out around there?I must say G is pretty manipulative either the safe house or work there.G already knows the answer. I think Zeke didn't answer that one question on Tyler's iPad because he has developed some feelings for Tyler and doesn't know how to respond yet. Just for fun you should have identified the boyband screensaver on Tyler's phone as Jasper LOL

Rick you ROCK!!!! That was awesome.I bet afterward it might have given Rick the push he needed to come clean with Jerry.And bravo to Jerry also for being a loyal and supportive friend. I really hated Zoltan after the last chapter but Rita surged back into first place as my most hated character in this story.Heinrich as it turns out just may be a moron.I don't know much about business law but I'm thinking Rita has to give back the money if there is no project perhaps some reader smarter then me(there are a lot of them here)can shed some light on that. Now I'm anxious to see the other stuff resolved .I'm thinking Debbie might have a part in that.What up with her husband's cold response to Rick?Except for the Chapter Rick and Gus got together this is your best chapter Parker

A hell of a time to bring that up on Christmas but they have to leave soon so I guess they have to do that now. I can totally believe Davey forgetting all about that until being in that house under those circumstances triggered the memory will something like that happen again later?I imagine the conversations they are going to have will be a roller coaster ride of emotions with all the different family there.

It sounds like Farmer and his boys have a good impression of Philip do they really know who he is and what he's about.Farmer seems like a dichotomy on one hand he seems to care for people like Doug who has a horrible home life on the other hand he enables bullies on the school grounds.In his own mind does he think he's righteous.

All this stuff going on I'm sure Pete is glad he chose adoption.Jim's boss probably doesn't know about him adopting Pete and Joey I bet they are going to be a hit at the office.

Although I should have already figured it out Natalie saw James because the Doctor is one of them.I went back to chapter one I figured one reason James went to see her is so the Doctor could figure out the stress of the rape could bring out any powers in James but I saw no questions from her that would imply that.So it will be interesting to see if Casper reveals anything that tells Natalie about Casper's and James powers.There is also Casper's abilities will he be able to sense Natalie is like them. In this session it looks like they used Samantha's real name while they used the name David for James I'm guessing it's because he's Peter's son.Forgive this horrible pun but if anybody says Samantha is steamed they better take it seriously

I take it you mean their parents reaction?Or are you thinking Sam and Dave(No not the old R&B duo lol)might be worried about people's reaction and they will act the same way?So far in this story it seems all the parents except for Trevor's are homophobes I'm hoping Sam and David's will balance the scale

Pete usually did all the talking for him and Joey but when Joey did say something it was huge out of the mouths of babes

Well it went smoother than I though I think the military telling the other kids dads that they can't talk about what they know helped in that regard.It's a lot to take in. Davey's Dad had the good sense to realize that David was speaking from experience of two lifetimes and how it went down between them then. Remember Dr.Grayson from the first Do over?Chances are he's just as involved in this lifeline with the disease as he was in the other one.I could see the government sending Davey's Dad to that same place as part of his duties to minister to the sick patiences.You see where I'm going with this?We might see Brian that way if he's there visiting his uncle.Just a thought my guess are usually wrong

I just knew things were too quiet with that psycho Ivy Trent can't really believe his Mom doesn't know about him and Kayden does he?I mean A mother just doesn't buy a wardrobe for one of his friends for no reason.And does Trent really think he made a great save when he told his Mom there was food on his shirt?Although he didn't really lie there you can say that was sort of food😮 There are a lot off obstacles something has to give

The woman Ethan could not save I'm guessing was his Mom and either his Dad or some loser she was seeing was the one who killed her I might have it wrong but it was definitely someone he loved and cared about. While Jonathan was certainly grateful when Ethan came to his aid back then I think there's more maybe he had a boy crush on him and the feelings are still there. Michael showed he's an asset to the shop If I remember right he had a lead part in a school play or something?Well a school play and a costume shop can have a connection this just might be up his alley. The future conversation with his Sister will also be interesting.She's only a year or two older than Michael are you going to have them two....enough you're the writer here LOL.Wow you given us enough to think about good job.