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I have heard high school swim teams used to have get togethers or parties where the experienced swimmers would help a younger swimmers shave off body hair for maximum speed even you know where. Phillip could implement that also except for the really young guys
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The kind of thoughts Matthew is having and the things he's described at school sounds a lot like the stuff you read about when you hear of a teenager committing suicide or getting a gun and shooting up the school . Somebody in this story maybe somebody we haven't been introduced to yet will have to get involved because this doesn't look sustainable. Just thought of something so I'm adding something after I posted before.This would be bad and good maybe Dallas will go too0 far on his bullying of Matthew and it might make Jonah angry enough at Dallas to come to Matthew's aid one can hope
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Well I'm glad Hunter was pleasantly surprised by his Parents reaction he says they are conservative but the church they belong to sounds progressive. I have to wonder about the detective I hope that isn't standard operating procedure questioning him in front of everybody.Even if they didn't know about the sexual nature of the crime it can be still hard to talk about in front of people I think the questioning should have been private. As far as Mayson's folks saying they have no son you immediately think it's because he's gay but it could be because they know what a POS he is.Did he get away with something when he was younger?
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Bonus Chapter Two: Tuva.
weinerdog commented on Rhythminthemind's story chapter in Bonus Chapter Two: Tuva.
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Everybody was blessed to have Charlie with them all these years it is puzzleing no friend were There at his grave though.I'm not smart enough to figure it out what you were saying about Frank at the end.I don't think this is it but if Frank was interested in one of the girls, for some reason I never thought of this they are adopted Brother and sisters but are not blood related what do the laws say about this could they get married as adults?
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What a doofus I am I could of sworn I clicked the follow button for this story I almost missed this chapter. In places I've worked at people are always antsy around the boss but here the reaction is like Seamus has been a hard ass in the past.I think I agree with @headtransplant Seamus might be a self assured man but I think he's into Matt but doesn't know how to go about making something happen with him.
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Had to read this chapter first glad I did.NOW I'm off to the taco shop
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Trauma, Tacos and Shorts that make your Booty Cute
weinerdog commented on JamesSavik's story chapter in Trauma, Tacos and Shorts that make your Booty Cute
Might be the best chapter yet.The way you described the tacos now makes me want to go to my favorite taco shop.C ya bye -
You're a kick-ass reader you read all this in three days in addition to all the other stuff you read on this site.That tells me this had you riveted as much as it had me. As you mentioned Parker covered everything in the epilogue.The trips to see Uncle Alan and family and Delia would have been fun to observe.Parker left out one minor thing.So if you don't mind saying Parker in his senior year did Andy make states in the 100 meter?And if he did he beat the guy from Carlsberg right LOL
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Excellent chapter.Cliffhanger time.And will Lauti tell his dad? 35 Thousand pesos is $383 dollars sounds steep for a class trip
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Love the image of Roger green hat being wary of Andy and Zander Toby said Eustace and Ambrose stayed in Blackburn I guess with the Stevenson's. I hope Delia stayed an extra day there Nobody better to fill her in on Andy then all of them
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Chapter 63 Apprehension
weinerdog commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in Chapter 63 Apprehension
As happy as I am for Andy for finding his grandmother I'm that much more happy for her finding Andy I heard it said that the worse thing that a person can go through is out living their child.Delia not only lost her daughter but thought she lost her grandson. To find out Andy still alive and getting married she must be over the moon -
Andy won the 100 meter race teammates hugging him Monica cheering so awesome. Kaz helped make that happen also
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Before I say anything else I loved Monica saying "my son". It had to be a most bittersweet moment for Andy to find out his mother is dead but he also found out that she didn't leave him by choice that's huge. Gunnar telling Andy his Mom left shows he is the most evil POS there is. And I totally agree with what@chris191070 said about Ambrose most law enforcement officers in GA stories try to find evidence to fit their theory but Ambrose didn't do that.And he had no obligation to find and bring Alan Walker but he did so give him his due
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Somebody should tell Mrs. Chandler her actions are responsible for a gay marriage to happen. That ought to make her day eh.
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Not only did Andy not run he has a hell of a support system. Terry put Bruce Mack in his place.Kaz went to get Andy in the library and Garrett hired one bulldog of an attorney. Mrs Chandler should be not only be terminated for being a bigot but also incompetent with that lame case
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Chapter 54 Repercussions
weinerdog commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in Chapter 54 Repercussions
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I think a lot of us figured Mrs.Lee knew in the back of her mind what was up and it's no surprise she's cool about it. I think all the mysterious messages Rick got like Irene implying she may not return to work Jerry's text saying "Congrats Rico.I think"And Heinrich on the voicemail saying "It's about damn time" It all sound like as if it's a reaction to Rick and Rita being official.If that's the case did Rita herself plant this nonsense? Speaking of Rita it's been about 5 chapters without her.It feels like the calm before the storm.I'm getting more and more afraid to read the next chapters because she's due.Kidding I'm looking forward to it
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Nothing cheers a kid up more than a puppy.Is that property useful in any way better Tony gets it rather then the state since the so called grandfather neglected it.
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Love your profile pic for obvious reasons
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I don't think the police are aware of these people with powers so what kind of stuff is Freja into to be paranoid about the cops? BTW I thought this story was futuristic not in the past. I say that because where the hell did Casper find a pay phone these days LOL
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I remember some readers criticizing Monica for a few mistakes she made with Andy early on but when you consider that Andy just said the word Mom without even realizing it it wasn't planned on his part well that tells you how Andy feels about her so Monica definitely did something right
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I hope I'm misreading this but I could see Stevie unintentionally getting Phillip in trouble.
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Person of the week?How about the entire summer.
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Chapter 43 Good Dreams
weinerdog commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in Chapter 43 Good Dreams
I think Monica saying "Oh sweet Jesus" Was the most powerful line in this story that reaction said more to the reader about what Andy went through then actually describing what happened.
