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Before I say anything else I loved Monica saying "my son". It had to be a most bittersweet moment for Andy to find out his mother is dead but he also found out that she didn't leave him by choice that's huge. Gunnar telling Andy his Mom left shows he is the most evil POS there is. And I totally agree with what@chris191070 said about Ambrose most law enforcement officers in GA stories try to find evidence to fit their theory but Ambrose didn't do that.And he had no obligation to find and bring Alan Walker but he did so give him his due
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Somebody should tell Mrs. Chandler her actions are responsible for a gay marriage to happen. That ought to make her day eh.
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Not only did Andy not run he has a hell of a support system. Terry put Bruce Mack in his place.Kaz went to get Andy in the library and Garrett hired one bulldog of an attorney. Mrs Chandler should be not only be terminated for being a bigot but also incompetent with that lame case
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Chapter 54 Repercussions
weinerdog commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in Chapter 54 Repercussions
So Mrs.Chandler thinks Zander might do inappropriate stuff?Where the hell was she and people like her when Uncle Ray was doing it? -
I think a lot of us figured Mrs.Lee knew in the back of her mind what was up and it's no surprise she's cool about it. I think all the mysterious messages Rick got like Irene implying she may not return to work Jerry's text saying "Congrats Rico.I think"And Heinrich on the voicemail saying "It's about damn time" It all sound like as if it's a reaction to Rick and Rita being official.If that's the case did Rita herself plant this nonsense? Speaking of Rita it's been about 5 chapters without her.It feels like the calm before the storm.I'm getting more and more afraid to read the next chapters because she's due.Kidding I'm looking forward to it
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Nothing cheers a kid up more than a puppy.Is that property useful in any way better Tony gets it rather then the state since the so called grandfather neglected it.
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Love your profile pic for obvious reasons
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I don't think the police are aware of these people with powers so what kind of stuff is Freja into to be paranoid about the cops? BTW I thought this story was futuristic not in the past. I say that because where the hell did Casper find a pay phone these days LOL
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I remember some readers criticizing Monica for a few mistakes she made with Andy early on but when you consider that Andy just said the word Mom without even realizing it it wasn't planned on his part well that tells you how Andy feels about her so Monica definitely did something right
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I hope I'm misreading this but I could see Stevie unintentionally getting Phillip in trouble.
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Person of the week?How about the entire summer.
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Chapter 43 Good Dreams
weinerdog commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in Chapter 43 Good Dreams
I think Monica saying "Oh sweet Jesus" Was the most powerful line in this story that reaction said more to the reader about what Andy went through then actually describing what happened. -
Huge step James being able to sort of tell Casper and Tasha about what happened and kudos to Tasha for her appropriate response. If being under a lot of stress brings out their hidden powers then just have them watch the daily news every day to see how f**ked-up the country and the world is should bring that out.
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Wish I was invited to their supper.
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They got caught doing weed and the ironic thing they are sent to place where they will be still doing weed.Looking forward to their sting operation to catch Tommy's tormentors
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That line about Frank wanting his Mother to wake up hit my heart like a ton of bricks.Frank's Mother can never be replaced but Amalia is going to come pretty darn close.
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Oh it's so hard to reply to your comments without giving anything away except to say the address thing will come up again...I'm dangerously close to saying too much I'll stop here lol.
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I bet this chapter kicked your ass.When I saw how many words it had I went to make sure had something to eat close by. I thought Trent was making some progress not having sex with Ivy and Maggie because of Kayden.And actually saying I love you to Kayden instead of 'me too"But now he wants to fool around with Lucas...HUH?? When you said Trent made a mistake with Ivy I had visions of Ivy crashing her car into Trent's while he's driving.I'm scared what that batshit crazy twit will do. Well after Lucas said Michael B Jordan is like a darker version of Trent I'll never watch Creed the same way again
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Okay so Casper's parents are aware that he may/does have powers.I'm trying to figure out the logic on how his dad beating the crap out of him is suppose to be helpful in that regard. I'm getting ahead of the story here and this may not even happen.But if it turns out to be a conflict between Peter's group and the Family is it possible Lewis might side with Casper's side?
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Glad your back we all know how life can happen. Lauti should always tell his Mom everything that way she has no excuse to take out her pack of cigarettes lol. So In Argentina they are called trimesters as opposed semesters in the U.S.Trimesters mean something totally different here I'm curious if Valentin having no thoughts about what he's going to do after fifth year has to do with his family situation
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So reporter's talked to Seth and David's Grandma.I'm glad about the things she said to them but I'm still nervous about all the attention.
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When I first heard of Scotty's problem in a previous chapter I was thinking jockstrap but but I thought that was obvious I keep forgetting how young they boys are.I also learned something that there is a special jock designed to go with speedos I guess that would only make sense.
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Susan's dad knew she was raped WTH.Not to speak ill of the dead but her Mother who went to church asked for Susan to have abortion unless that was all the dad also.In this time period a lot of times underage girls would be sent out of town to either carry the kid or have an abortion .You have to wonder if Susan traumatized by the rape never got help and as a result in her condition let the house deteriorate.I hope she will be comforted to know that Frank will be cared for by a family with a lot of love.
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Bonus Chapter One: Bex.
weinerdog commented on Rhythminthemind's story chapter in Bonus Chapter One: Bex.
I have to admit my head hurts after reading this but that is the fault of the reader me not the author.Very interesting stuff. It's also interesting that your readers chose Bex the one we know the least about perhaps that is why.It would only stand to reason Bex would have some supernatural power. -
I have a friend who back when he was 19 had a similar thing happen and he tried to get custody of his infant brother and the state didn't approve it.I didn't understand why while it would have been difficult he always had his act together.I wonder what the guidelines are for this situation. It's early in the story but I think Seamus is going to have some big part here.
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