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I think all the newer parks do a variation of that.They do it at Petco Park in San Diego. They like to catch people at random
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Jake and Ryan are in a good place now.OMG what's going to happen?Something always happens it just can't stay good right? What's up with Jake's Dad? 3 kids with 3 women?Does he think he's in the NBA?He was pretty awesome this chapter. I think you missed an opportunity.You could have had the PNC scoreboard cam catch Jake and Ryan holding hands. Overall that chapter was Yeet or ...Lit? Last time I promise.
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I used that old saying about a blind squirrel referring to myself then right after typed it I remembered the author's handle and thought I should clarify.It really was unintentional lol
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If such a thing was possible Ryan(No I'm not going to call him that name lol)might have more issues then Danny yeah I see stuff hitting the fan here.Danny seems cool about Jake and Ryan being together but I get the felling that won't last. Danny reacted to the mention of Billy Roberts like he was a life long hero of his.He had to have some kind of internal struggle with his feelings for awhile since he's the one who has wanted to start the GSA all along and apparently knows the history with Billy. I sort of in a way called it in a earlier comment that Sarah might be an ally here.I guess it's true even a blind squirrel finds a nut lol. oops I just realized what I just typed.That comment was no reflection on Jeff
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Well logically that phone conversation should clear the air.Danny made some sense.But these are teenagers and they are not logical I know I wasn't (still not for the record lol).Another incident will happen with these two other wise there is no more story right?Most likely it will happen after Lydia leaves and this time Ryan may be part of this.OMG Danny wouldn't do something with Ryan would he? Jake hasn't told his mom that he's gay but he doesn't seem to realize he's sending his mom a billion clues. Question what is the PTO?Is that what used to be called the PTA?
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It's better than being The Wanderer
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I could believe Danny's position on this except for one thing.He kissed him you can do the other stuff and say it is not love but when you kiss somebody and he initiated it then it is love.Danny cannot bring himself to admit that yet IMO. Interesting how Mr. Reilly acts according to the individual person.On one hand he tells Jake he's proud of him but according to Danny's mom he said he thought Danny improved the most but he would never tell Danny that.It like he knows some people you encourage and some you kick in the butt. Oh and they just got intimate again does that mean will Danny have a new GF next chapter?
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Dad redeemed himself not all the way of course but somewhat. It was cool to see the old gang together as the good friends they are.Although Dustin turned the corner last time we saw him given how his life went he was the one who was In most danger of having a relapse or setback.This scene here looks like things are going well for him. It was funny when Mr. Reilly didn't want Dustin to tell the story.I think in a future private conversation with Jake he should be more candid about who he was I think they would have an even better relationship then they do now.He started to do that a little when he told Jake about Dustin and himself Interesting that Jakes dad knew about emptying the trash files learned that from experience did he? you're doing a great job mixing the past characters with the present
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It was still a helluva lot better then with the dad
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I had forgotten about that.I also thought about Tyler after the accident he had Jack's head in his lap bleeding on him saying "don't die".He could have been just a concerned scared friend but maybe there's more could it be the entire group of friends were either gay or bi?
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No prob. It can be a full time job with me.Just ask my former English and Lit teachers
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Jack's Mom had no problem letting Jimmy in but had a problem letting Tracy in.Let's analysis this she had no problem to let the boy who was chasing her son meaning to do some kind of harm had he caught him ,but she has a big problem with dangerous Tracy because he's gay.She has no idea how much of a twit she is. As far as to what happened quite a big leap from "I'm not washing your nuts" to doing what he did.I'm going speculate on what possible explanation Jimmy could say to what he did "I figured I owed you and since we did this when we were 13 I thought what's difference does one more time make?"......Yeah I don't think so.Things are more complicated now. Thanks for the distraction Rony stay safe
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First things first ALL RIGHT!! BILLY!!! Dad bringing his preggo GF on Jake's B-day bad move, bad move, and it just got worse from there with dad getting smashed.I said something about Jake's mom in an earlier chapter but by far the dad is the bigger a-hole in this. As far as the sexting tween Jake and Danny Jake should have told Danny no way I'm going there with you.But I got to admit if Danny is hot I most likely would have done the same thing. Brett...er Mr. Reilly really rocks creating a show around The Beatles.It wasn't clear was Jake's solo from the song Penny Lane? I assume you're a lot younger than me but I'm impressed when younger people appreciate The Beatles. Happy Easter
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That's my red flag right there .Jake and Danny had two sexual encounters and in both cases Danny has a GF within a week after it happens.Not a coincidence
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We're not his students we don't have to call him that do we? lol
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They both have issues but I agree Danny is the bigger jerk here.
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It didn't take Freud to figure out something like this was going to happen. So here is my lame attempt to be an amateur Freud lol. Danny just doesn't want be gay for all the obvious reasons but those feelings for Jake will not go away.What to do about it?That's the stumper isn't it. Why do I get the feeling if Jake gets a BF Danny will start acting like Jake has. Brett probably has put 2+2 together and can relate to them but most likely feels he can't get involved to try to help them being a new teacher and all. Enjoy you're well deserved break.Looking forward to next chapter
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As soon as I saw the title Band Camp I remembered Brett and music from before nice touch.I'm seeing in the future Brett being the faculty advisor for the new GSA or at least helping to start it. Did Danny have the massage thing planned? I do see some conflict happening between them. Jake's Mom hurt Jake more than her ex by refusing to allow them to go to Washington D.C.
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If we do see Billy and others then this story would sort of serve as the epilogue you wanted in the W.A.R series. It would be cool if we do.
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I played football in HS.Brett's practices reminded me of football practice
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I remember Mr. Taylor being cool. If I remember right Sarah at the end seemed to realize how everything went down.If she appears in this story it might be on her brother's side
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Is there such a thing as a dysfunctional divorce?Because that's what Jake's parents have.I mean two birthday parties just so they can insult the other to their friends. Now that Kayla dumped Danny if Danny decides to try to fool around with Jake if I"m Jake I say no way I'm not going to be a fill-in(No pun intended) until you find another babe.Of course that is easier said then done If Jake gets aroused by that. As far Jake getting suspended if they suspended people for that when I was in HS half the school would have been in the gym for detention. So far this story is good even if it wasn't on the fly.Can't say I'm surprised Oh and Mr. Taylor looks like he's going to be a good ally.Unlike that un-named person
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All right Jeff's back with another story awesome!!And so far so good.I just knew that when Jake said he was uncomfortable being naked that something like that was going to happen maybe I've been reading too much gay male fiction lol.Am I right in assuming that when they referred to ten years ago they were talking about Billy Roberts and Aiden's time there? You said you were writing this on the fly but I'm very confident this will be good.Stay safe.
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In this chapter Jack reminded me of a character from a previous story of Rony's .Gary from "Apple of Her Eye" was in a similar situation and like Jack he forgave the person that put him in that position.Having a forgiving heart is a great quality to have but I have to admit in my case I would eventually come around but it would take me awhile.I do give Jimmy points for washing down Jack that would be awkward for most people. Jack referred to Tracy and Jeff as girlish .Maybe that is the reason why Jeff and to a lesser degree Tracy have been disliked.Maybe being gay would not be as big a deal to their classmates if they were more straight acting.That's not fair of course but it might be reality
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It's good to see these guys again I had to binge read the chapters to remember everything.It's worth waiting for
